Deck of Cards: [Ultimate Writer's Contest; ROUND 3]

[WorldOFJonasx]

Omg! This is so heartbreaking! when Selena talked about her sister anyways. SHOWER!

[OiSuportingNAndZ]

this is amazing:')

[iluvkandy99]

Shower, this was amazinggggg <3

[elizabethhxstar]

shower, you really made this one-shot very moving :)

[lovedrunkx33]

shower, aww that really was heartwarming :)

[babachick123]

showerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr­rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.

[HayzJonasxoxo]

shower, AMAZIN-G, u have gotta win! <3

[xxkadyinsanexx]

that was amazing!! shower <3

[johnnyluver178]

NO NEVERMIND

[stashhjonas]

@johnnyluver178 O...kay?

[johnnyluver178]

I HATE YOU

[stashhjonas]

@johnnyluver178 Uhm.. thanks?

[storyofmylifeex]

selena was perfect for the younger sisterr, i loved this.

[xoElla05xo]

I seriously hope you win.

This is one of the best stories I've read on youtube.

I think I'll go have a shower now.

[iluvwtilight234]

that was beautiful and i loved how you made her autistic, it fit perfectly.

i need to 'shower' now :D

[xXMarlznAriezxX]

WOW!!!! this is awesome im glad tha tu got to make it to this round b/c u deserve it ure writing is awesome n im actually crying b/c this story seems so real it relates to alot of families ...good job i hope u make it to the nxt round

[XOiheartmuffinsXO]

oh and shower

[XOiheartmuffinsXO]

This made me cry. I don't know why. It was that feeling when you relate to something and it makes you cry! But I was really glad you made it into the next round.

[kittypopstar13]

I really did cry while I was watching this . I think you really are an amazing writer. This story was incredible. Absoutely beautiful :) And at the end when it said walk this path I was listening to Fifteen and it said walk through the doors and bamm, I started balling :|. I know Im wierdd

shower :)

[J8L3]

This is such a beautifully written story! It's like I could see it right in front of my eyes

[xsportzgurlx]

What's autistic?Sorry,I scuk at words :/ I love the details in this story XP I wento to take a "shower" ;) ;) *wink,wink*

[krazepetslol101]

OH MY GODD! I JUST READ TO KILL A MOCKINGBIRD FOR ENGLISHHH :D

this was so good. (:

[hahaiamloka]

amazing:)

[amandalovesHS]

OMFG! this is soooooooo amazing! like seriously! when you said Selena was autistic, i wasnt sure how youd have that, but you made it perfect! you should definitely make it to the next round!!!

shower x]

[teendiabetic]

I love that movie.. its always makes me cry.

You did a really good job, this is alson a sister/sister relationship, I hope you make it to the next round. I was so touched by this. Keep up the great work, and maybe make a series or movie with this sort of plot, it would be cool

[joebrolover4ever1]

shower. amazing : )

[crazzydaiziez]

shower! and omj! made me cry

[babyruthkeily]

that was adorkable!!!!

[Gotmegoingcrzy]

I'll follow you on tumblr. Your stories are amazing. You know, you should type these up and put them into a book, you don't want to lose all of this greatness :D.

[swirlygirly411]

this was just so amazing and inspiring :) i hope you become an author when you grow up

[hugsandkisses2jonas]

That was tooo origina!

I loved it tooo amazing

[J8L3]

I don't know how you do it but you always have an amazing story to tell, that makes me think =)

[Jonessa4ever1597]

OMG! July 20th?! That's my birthday!! :P Sorry, total dork. :P

A-M-A-ZING! I seriously love it! :)

Shower. ;)

Random question: Font? xP

[yourtypicalasiangirl]

That was simply breathtaking! Very very good. Like, no joke. Haha. It did make me tear up a little, especially the part when she said it was good to be home. :) I hope you proceed on to the next round!

[7894miley]

OMG! That was amazing! It almost made me cry. It was so sweet.

[YoshisCookie824]

Aww!

Selena was so cute! These are so amazing! I will hurt Shannon if she

doesn't pick you to win/be in the next

round!

You can never bore me :D

Tht was so sweet. Especially how Selena was and Miley helped her :DD

[YoshisCookie824]

Showerr :D

[JonasBrothersLove8]

That is so amazing! I almost cried!! Loved it <3

[StaciiJonas]

OMG that was....was i cant even explain,Seriously i was crying cuz im like really sensitive lol but omg i luved it!!! I hope you win!

[xxObsessedwithyaaxx]

This is amazing!! :D

Wow,you're a very very good writer!! :]

<3

[futurejonasbrides123]

i loveedddd it!!!

shower =P

[courtrocks1101]

OMMMGGG ! this was simply fascinating

sooooo sweet! i love your stories and i hope u never stopp!!!!

(:

[Jesssandxx]

OMG ((:

I love your storiess x

Keep writing && Never Stop x

You should totally win that contest x

That was one of your Best one's !

AMAZINGGGG <3

[selenademimileyrules]

forgot :)

shower :D :D

[selenademimileyrules]

Wow.

Beautiful :)

[NelenaxJemixStories]

that was beautiful selena was so adorable I just wanted to hug her :)

[zcullenhalerathbone]

omg that is so weird i've literally just watched rain man! its great but i felt really sorry for the autistic brother! anyhoo... awesome story! u always have amazing stories - ur so talented!

[lovelife859]

thiisss iss wasss goodd :;)

O M G!

your an amazing writer!

shower

shower

showerr! :)

[kitkatkirsty]

wow this is awesome! you're such an amazing writer!! shower

[XoXKalesXoX]

amazing :)

i think i'll take a shower now :P xD

x

[dmdbx3]

wow this was amazing like everyone esle has said and you did this so quickly but it came out near perfect, the writing was amazing! it really made me think which is the sign of amazing skills but you already know that lol ; ) i know you are definitely going to make it to the next round, because you're going to win the contest! DUH! hahahaha but seriously this was thought-provoking, breathtaking and so detailed. loved it <3

[germandreamgirl11]

amazing ! ♥

shower

[ElisaMelody]

amazing.

as always.

your amazing.

[HeyDudeex]

this was amazing!x

shower (:

[mscheekybabee]

love it,

amazing :D

[kimyattalissette]

i bet that if this were actually a show since selena is such a good actress she'd probably get like an emmy or something for this. i love selena!

[GottaLoveNiley]

Not only was this breathtaking, but you finished it SO fast! :D

[xoElla05xo]

Totally awesome. You're such and amazing writer.

and I feel like taking a shower. xD

[LoopyNatalie]

That was amazon :) -- p.s showerr

[shazziexzx]

I loved this. Your are so going to win.

[UntouchableSS27]

You amaze me with your ability to post such a beautiful story hours after I post the topic.

[nickjonasforever9876]

shower...

LOVED IT(:

[moneyrulesdude]

that waz awesome! oh and shower.

[xalixrockstarx]

that was fantastic!

it was such a sweet story.

your an amazing writer. :]

[Ritzroze1225]

this was a beautiful story. it made me tear up, it was sooo sweet. i hope you win! evn tho it didnt hav couples, it was rly good. if ud hav added couples, it mightve taken away the effect. it was awesome.

[goodgirl623]

loved it. it was amazing!

and lol i'm not yet taking a SHOWER.. xD

[MinnieSeriesLoveeerr]

I just got out of my SHOWER and this was on my subscription box, it was AMAZING.

by the way, LOVE they title and what it symbolises.

[SOURxNOTxSWEET]

You've got talent! You truly are an artist with words. You can paint pictures with the simplest words yet it comes to be one of the best stories to come alive. I truly admire your work ;)

[fallenJONAS]

If you were trying to make me cry, then you've succeeded. I'm officially a mess now, a wreck to say the list. This was so beautiful and I have a really strong feeling you're going to win this round and most likely the whole contest.

Please excuse me while I cry......

oh, btw...shower.

[fallenJONAS]

least*

[stashhjonas]

AW! Melissa, I didn't mean to make you cry D:

Lol.

But thank you so much. It really means a lot.

[iluvjb4ever123]

Dude.. you work really quickly xD God, this was phenomonal.. GRR YOU! D:< lol, I thought mine was good in my mind, then I read this @_@ Round 4, here you come.. xD

[CasiAngeles193]

good job

[luvcookies97]

that was beautiful and very different...good different..(: thank you for sharing your talent with us!:D

[Xilovejb00X]

this was soooo sooo good. :)

its amazing how you came up with this idea so fast.

btw my birthday's july 20th too! haha just thought i'd point that out. :)

[worldofchancesxx]

This, was your best one-shot ever. I loved the fact that it didn't have couples, and instead, it was about a relationship with family.

I seriously, loved this Stasia. It was the best one i read in a while. :]

[rydendirtyyx3]

My hair is still wet from my shower. Ick, I should blow dry it. XD

ANYWAYS.

This is...a work of art.

I love the symbolic title x89274682394. I could never think of something so creative and sdjkfhsdjkfhsdf. (See? I'm speechless. Or rather, spurting out random letters.)

But it was so beautiful. Seriously. I can't even describe it, because I'll probably ruin the magnificance that this story is.

So yeah. In conclusion;

If you don't make it to the next round, Imma go apenuts. XD

[CatchMeNowx3]

Amazing job! This one-shot was beautiful and heartbreaking. But im glad about the ending :) And real smart to name it Deck Of Cards, totally matches with it all :)

[ilovedemitomuchx]

i just took a SHOWER.

Great one-shot. :)

[yachtclubfan22]

aw that was so good

and right now i am reading to kill a mockingbird

its a good book

[WeSupportNelenaa]

Awesome Job :]

Shower. ;p

[Pandabearx1552]

omg...this is so amazing!

I actually started crying a little bit!

You are such an amazing writer!

You better make it to the next round! :D

[crazybaby2120]

I agreed with the comment below me... Awesome story and different from the other ones that I have read

[4mr4you4lifr2]

This is amazing! True talent always shines through. Two hours? Extraordinary!!!!

[PinkPrincess102]

Wow. That was so sweet.

I really liked how you used autism, and the relationship between father and daughter. :)

I am so hoping you win. You deserve it.

[eastsoftball7]

wow! great job! :D

[PINAYL0VE]

that was a really good story.

gg, you totally deserve to win.

[Jonasislyfx3]

you'll go to the next round, no doubt.

that was perfect.

[Magnificent408]

This made me cry, and it's truly a life lessoning thing.

The past is the past but the future always holds something brighter. You are so talented. I want your Autograph.

There is no doubt that you are going to make it to the next round. You will make it. You will.

[XoAshJonasCullenXo]

shower

that was amazing! great job :]

[jmnelena]

well built writing (:

i have my fingers crossed you win!

[dancencheerleading]

aww sweet!

[GLAMorousFLASHion]

that was so amazingly good. could you please make this into a series that would make my day ``to find out who sally is and to find out if her father will keep his promise of not drinking alchol``

[fanfordisney]

Aww, awesome job :)

Truely amazing :D

[FallenSingerxo]

Amazing. I loved it(:

It almost brought tears to my eyes.

[xomarykinzz]

wow. that's... amazingg.

honestly i loved it. :)

it definitely was heartwarming. :)

i can bet you'll get to the next round.

but anyways.. this morning i had a "shower" at 9 am, not 7 :)

[xoXxXkittyXxXox]

wow that was amazing =)

nice job!

i liked the deck of cards thingy.

you're such a good writer =)

[wowskis556]

I cried !! and it was thee most heartwarming story on yutube and i mean that!! which reminds me i need to take a shower!

[pandaluv321]

That was amazingly beautiful.

I just LOVE your writing. :)

Okay. Now it's time for me to take a shower!

Ciao, my loves.

[imadethisvideo123]

That was really amazing :D Loved it!

[danideangulo]

OMG!!!

Love it!!!!!!!!

[abcsoo]

This deserves to win.

This is amazing.

The adjectives, the language, the structure... it is truly phenomenal

[NickJonasGurl99]

that was so beautiful.

you're seriously amazing ;D

[jobrosaremylife68]

oh my...that was amazing! And ironic i took a shower