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  • Thanks for the WONDERFUL & BENEFICIAL comment y'all! Truly appreciate them as i can learn from my mistakes! =)

    1. Will take note of color contrasts in the future.

    2. Considering changing title to 'Heal the World please!'

    3. Will not included solutions, as this video is meant to stimulate audience's respond in coming up with solutions to 'heal the world'.

  • Interesting set induction. The one on diseases in not clear. Maybe you put newspaper clips with headlines on the diseases.

  • Very good message conveyed... Very interesting video and song used.. Just you may consider using contrast colour for the words so that it will be clearer to the audience. All in all, good job!

  • Good video for me. Can see your effort on doing this video. Good choice of background music.

    notakakidimuka:

    1. I really love the use of software that you use in the videos. What kind of software it is?

    2. The words is quite blur at some part of the videos. Maybe you may want to change it.

    3. You title is about heal the world. But from what i can see, you only tell about the destruction around us. Maybe you may want to consider to change the title.

  • the video really bring the awareness not only to the children, but also me as an adult...

    you really success in delievring the message of saving our mother earth

    some improvement is the font..like in 1:45..it's not very clear.....

    overall, good job!!!

  • Very evoking pictures indeed! I noticed some of the fonts not match with the background which is not really clear for the audience. For example, at 1.37 animals loose habitats. Perhaps black and white? The song is already a good solution for the problems. Well done my friend!

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  • you delivered a good message here. the song is suitable for the video. nice picture. But some fonts and color is not color. For example' the result-deforestation ' in early slide. Overall, good work and keep it up!

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  • the theme of the video and the powerful message is conveyed clearly and powerfully! the song and the transitions of the pictures are done smoothly. however, i have some difficulties to view the words due to the colours and the background pictures. So, keep it up=D

  • to this video creator...this is simply superb..ur an expert...it is goos in evey aspect of it..i really have no comments and no words can describe it...the changes of the slides is related and it really will create awareness...WOW!!!THIS IS EXCELLENT

  • Good background song. It helps to enhance the video and the message you are trying to convey. Good pictures as well. This video can be used to arouse people awareness about mother earth. However, it would be better if you suggests some solutions on how to solve this issue. overall, well done!!

  • Very nice video, girl! The background music really suits the theme of your video! The content is very informative too. However, like what others said, I think you should take note on some of the fonts chosen. Other than that, you deserve a 5 stars!

  • Nice pictures that tend to provoke child's thinking.

    Note: like what shiangshian said it would be better if there is a teaching on how to solve the environmental issues.

  • Very convicting indeed! Give children a chance to ponder on these issues.. maybe you can add on to teach children what they can do at their age: recycle, do not litter.. that sort of thing! ^^

  • nice video, good job! however the colour used for some fonts cant be seen clearly

  • Very compelling and nice video to watch. The audio and pictures were merged nicely. Very convicting and pictures were well chosen. Certain fonts were harder to read but overall very good.

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