Also very nice. Lovely melody, good development at the right places.
But... one repetition to many. The fourth repetition of the theme should be replaced by some other melody (same length, similar feel, but a bit sadder), so that the last reprisal is more effective. And I would replace the piano in the last section with a harp and restate the main theme's opening notes with gentle horns in the last few bars, but ok.
But basically: good work. Did you also make some faster pieces for film?
Great!
AaronGPerry 1 year ago
Beautiful!
bctrissel 1 year ago
I love it! It totally matches the same tone that the film had; very languid and peaceful.
meandcinderellaful 1 year ago
So nice... I'm very impressed. :)
borntowitness 2 years ago
Also very nice. Lovely melody, good development at the right places.
But... one repetition to many. The fourth repetition of the theme should be replaced by some other melody (same length, similar feel, but a bit sadder), so that the last reprisal is more effective. And I would replace the piano in the last section with a harp and restate the main theme's opening notes with gentle horns in the last few bars, but ok.
But basically: good work. Did you also make some faster pieces for film?
IllBeJS 2 years ago