Could you try (original tune)

[cbrb40]

Andreas sorry just getting to your fabulous vids now,I was never more behind here,they message me all the time,the Earth gals, lol ;) But I love your music,wow this is so dreamy the music part of it. I love the way you play a guitar you have this signature sound of strumming & fingerpicking I know it's you right away. :)) I always love how you can put music to someone's poetry. I never tried that. The words are well thought out,we can relate to them. You sing so great,really cool voice always.

[frozenwhitebear]

hey my dear Rick bro, never mind about delay, I can imagine all the adventures you will have to survive, lol! guess I'm actually watching old Star Wars episodes and therefore I may know about alot of problems you will have to manage, haha! and well all the princesses' problems, a good JediKnight will have to look after them! may the Force be with you! this was my first colabo with Umrijkae from Israel, and I totally loved the lyrics! so I'm very glad it was received well. thanks so much!

[marywinmusic]

"I know you just consist of giving

Hoping someway things will resolve

In themselves"

My life can be summarized within the above lines ^_~ Maybe it is because I spend so much time "alone" but somehow it becomes easier to burrow away and hope all things resolve. At the same time I feel terrible and selfish - not like myself... I have to say wonderful work an~ My fingers will probably press play one more time :D

[frozenwhitebear]

@marywinmusic I'm very glad Umrijkae called this a "collabo" later, I do respect her poem a lot! any era seems to be different to live through, ours pretty challenging...! ps: learned a new word: burrow away (sweet imagination) thankyouuuu! ;))

[streetspiritlive]

Well, i'm so glad you try!

Its a beautiful Poem,

and beautiful Music i really enjoyed.

Thank you Umrijkae and Andreas!!  : )

[frozenwhitebear]

thanks to YOU Marianne!! I really appreciate you coming by and listening!! :)

[waverleywaters]

Dear Andreas,

Great tune and a thought provoking poem. The melody is very appropriate for the poem.

Have a wonderful week.:)

Warm regards,

Dimple

[frozenwhitebear]

thanks so much dear Dimple! I'm genuinely glad you liked it! wishing you a great week too!!! :o)

[karlmahlmann]

Hey Andreas, you did a great job setting this beautiful poem to music.  It's all very captivating - really works well. all the best - Karl

[frozenwhitebear]

thank you very much Karl!! that means a lot to me, said by such an excellent musician!!! :))

[americansongbooker1]

thoughtful lyrics, charming song..

[frozenwhitebear]

@americansongbooker1 thaaanks friend, this poem was special and very inspiring, I'm glad you liked the outcome!! :)

[coolanddark]

What a great song! Reminds me a little of an Elliott Smith song! Similiar style and sound but yet all your own! Outstanding~!

[frozenwhitebear]

wow Dan, that's quite a compliment!!! so glad I found Elliott in the tube, and thought it was by you! I felt very inspired by this poem, wasn't just too easy to bring it about, but I'm glad the result seems not too bad! thanks again, friend!!! :) ps: well, everything so far is quite alright (at least I hope so, lol), "tomorrow never knows"...

[wild0goose]

the melody is so appropriate for the poem - a great collaboration here --you've made a good song!!

[frozenwhitebear]

thankyou so much Ann, I very much appreciate your opinion!! I think Umrijkae is a very talented poetess! :)

[oldnrone]

Very good...all of it!

[frozenwhitebear]

thanks a lot Guy, I very appreciate your comment! I was really taken in by this poem...

[psychospeakempire]

very good song and performance.

Paul

[frozenwhitebear]

thanks a lot for coming by and listen Paul, I very appreciate it!!! yeah it starts with a Fmaj7 chord! :o)

[reliablebow]

exquisite writing...and Your interpretation is SO LOVELY :) Your Voice is Grand!

[frozenwhitebear]

thanks so much dear Bow!!! I consider these lyrics something extraordinary and it was a joy to work on this. specially loved your fab4 remark, hehee... ;) thanks!!

[MagicalSunrise1984]

@reliablebow

danke fuer die bluemen

(thank you for the compliment on the writing)

I also think his interpretetion is wonderful!

[nllleonard]

"But do not hesitate to move away

From what isn't

What you want" Sounds like the easiest thing in the world to do, but it is in fact very difficult sometimes. It is always simpler to avoid change. A stumbling block for me as I seek to progress but want to stay the same... Very much enjoying the words.  ;) NAncy

[MagicalSunrise1984]

@nllleonard

very true - change is scary, even when it is positive

to not change when things are not ok... that's real fright thought ;)

[nllleonard]

True words. Beautiful language and lovely sound (voice and mucic). Thank you for the introduction, Andreas, and welcome back!  NAncy

[frozenwhitebear]

thankyou Nancy for your enduring support always and your kind comment especially on this!!! :)

[MagicalSunrise1984]

oh my, was für eine tolle Überraschung!

Es ist einfach toll!

Wirklich glücklich du sich entschieden, meine Gedichte in ein Lied interprate, und ich bin wirklich froh, dass du wählte dieses bestimmte.

[frozenwhitebear]

hey Sun, I'm really glad you like it and I really love these great lyrics that have something to tell and definitely mirror your special talents! ;o) still thinking about a piano version too...

[MagicalSunrise1984]

@frozenwhitebear

this could really sound great in piano too when i think of it

blessings and have a great weekend

[karenmuenchen]

What a great song Andreas !!! all thumbs up from Karen-Girl :-))

[frozenwhitebear]

thanks so much for your appreciation Karen!! have a great summertime! ;)