My sunshine: A Patrick story [Chapter 1]

[JacqueenaLaLaLa]

I hope everything goes well

[DirtySouthGurl982]

this is interesting

[tellem123dkt]

what's the name of the song you hear at the intro??

[prettypink2011]

just a kiss by mishon

[lilvicm]

loved it

5*

[shatinalaresha]

great chapter...can't wait for chapter 2 :-)

[cRaZiGiRl2012]

So umm,you know i loved it right..this story is interesting all readyy..

And Ima come and kill James RIGHT NOW...that's freaking nasty how could you just freakin flippin do something like that...thanks to mom she came home b4 he tried something nastyy...UGHHHHHH

[CarnellzOnlyLuva08]

I luv this story

5*****

[bebogirl43]

hehe loved it girl...and oo i love who im playing..she in ma fave show

5*S great beggining(Sp)

Priscilla is mean..lol

[Ressecup06]

i love it

[prettypink2011]

thanx

[luuvz14576]

why would priscilla say something so hurtful to her? imma have to get benny on her!

and me and benny got an appointment with james in 5 minutes so he'll be gone

5*

[prettypink2011]

don't hurt them too bad lol

[taetaelovescarnell]

hahahahaha i like benny

[ezigbonne]

Great i luv it can't wait 4 next episode :)

[prettypink2011]

thanx

[peepz92]

i know im like really late reading this..but what is the first song called?? is it by chris brown??? thanks..lovin the story!!!

[prettypink2011]

save me by chris brown...thanks

[lovey6324]

OMG THA JAMS BETTER NOT PUTHIS HANS ON ME!! AW KEKE I NEED T DO SOM KILLING TODAY o_O LOLZ OO I HATE PR

[lovey6324]

i hate pricilla

[prettypink2011]

don't kill nobody yet lol

[Ulukau808]

oh em gee thank goodness the mom came home just in time i was starting to have a panic attack lol..James you sick PERV!!!..aww poor Keke..i was almost in tears but then my dad walked in so i wiped them away haha..LOVED it that was so good 5*

[prettypink2011]

thanx

[bebogirl43]

welcome