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From: SarzenTor
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  • Im still cold lmfao

  • hahahahahahah! lolololz..sigh

    even though i love shel's work...i gotta say this...this was funny.

  • aye tree! i need some money!

  • Loved the ending :D better than the orginal

  • lesson: don't be co dependent

  • This speaks volumes to my heart--both my personal and universal one. I'm laughing and crying at the same time.....

    Thank you.

  • The dirty words RUINED this!!!!!

  • @KevJJ888  I know.... I agree

  • @KevJJ888 It's true. This would be a very good alternate take of this story, but the dirty words really were superfluous and ruins it for showing any children.

  • omg lol that was hilarious and sad

  • I loved a man, until he changed my heart; with his lies, hurtful actions & hateful words. I gave 100% everyday to this man, with my grace & forgiveness, accepting he meaness, letting him take from me, I gave him everything, until I began to feel only the ashes of who I had been. One day, I suddenly realized that I no longer loved this man. Over time a rose garden grew from the ashes, when the man returned & reached for a bloom, he pricked his finger on the sparp thorns & he never retuned again.

  • @duchella ...and then, did you shove a big dildo up yur ass crack douchella?!

    Sometimes a woman is a stupid bitch to push a man away and it probably was ALL her fault!!

    Always other/better fish in the vast sea!

  • @JohnSmith1985x Youre a real winner. When I wrote this I was so deeply depressed and sadened by the pain that this asshole cause me, sometimes it is the womans fault, but that was not my story. Sounds like you have some serious issues with women, do you shove a dildo up your ass? BTW- the guy is now in prison.

  • =)) this made me laugh soooooo hard! =))

  • Omg! This makes me want to cry!

  • I have always thought that the little boy was such a BRAT! Good job. :)

  • haha nice

  • LOLOOLOLOL!!!! You ruined my favorite story.

  • This is great!

  • I remember seeing this. IT FUCKING ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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