Some of your songs have a heartfelt simplicity, like America's "I Need You". It's really hard to make songs like this sound sincere since the theme is so well worn with use, but you succeed nicely. I could even picture this song in two- or three-part harmony.
Great writing, nice tune, the voice is quite similar to Peter Skiller or skeller...the person who sang a song " You're a lady"...good work mate!
shosadd 2 years ago
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TEACHERCLAIR 2 years ago
Glad you liked it.
bunchie1966 2 years ago
This song is like John Lennon´s Woman in some places.
FinnMove 2 years ago
it's funny you mention J.L., 'cause I was thinking that it has a J.L. sound to it...
kittenrenea 2 years ago
BEAUTIFUL !!!
cecelianchris 2 years ago
it describes my feelings :(
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amazing song ....
kirstyms03 2 years ago
A wistful song. Well made.
makamath 3 years ago
loved this song my friend love the harp all the stars from me keep on doing what you are doing i beieve in this
4846steven 3 years ago
this is the one i like the best.
i agree with the two or three part harmony and extending the harmonica intro
Joapat24 3 years ago
ur pretty good, i like the song :) do u play the insturments too?
ckrspdogs 3 years ago
This is also a good song. And great use of the harmonica (if it is a harmonica). Possibly make the intro a little longer to improve?
Nice songwriting though! Good story too! Another good song my friend!
PaulBeatles808 3 years ago
Thanks. Glad you like it.
bunchie1966 3 years ago
this is an amazing song. Better then almost everything out there today! Keep it up!
ponypride111 3 years ago
Some of your songs have a heartfelt simplicity, like America's "I Need You". It's really hard to make songs like this sound sincere since the theme is so well worn with use, but you succeed nicely. I could even picture this song in two- or three-part harmony.
HazySunlight 3 years ago
I do try to avoid banality and corniness. Thanks. America are another favourite of mine.
bunchie1966 3 years ago
It is the good song that a sad text is carried on a simple melody♪
MILKYSIONRAY 3 years ago
Stirring stuff. I love it.
wobblyka 3 years ago
I love this; it makes me cry, it's so sad.
miminbulala 3 years ago
What a touching song.
cici5778 3 years ago
I love this song. It's so sad and romantic at the same time.
butsiki1966 3 years ago