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those...darn...FOOTSTEPS lol
garrettlance92 2 years ago
Pretty good shooting. The sound mix could have been better even with what you had to work with.
The story was lost behind the acting and the really long intro/opening. A slightly better script would have made this piece sparkle.
I liked it, but it was far too long for the point, and rather than demonstrating the point, you just told us what the point was.
Keep working at showing your story progression. You have a good tale to tell, but you just need more practice with delivery. -Luke
TomySky 3 years ago
Great job!
Good luck!
chbyt 3 years ago
Creative storyline. There was a lot of truth in that. But your acting could use some help.
goschool2008 3 years ago
This is pretty cool, huh?
I LOVE the plot. Everyone just has to be patient to get what it is, though.
FairviewStudios11 3 years ago
the guy in the black hoodie is Garrett lance we were in a rush srry
FairviewStudios11 3 years ago