A Sonnet for True Love (The very first sonnet I ever wrote!)

[USERNAMEDSOBER]

your a natural.

[alejandre321]

Your delivery is very natural and yet expressive. You need not apologize. Very nice.

[alejandre321]

Your delivery is so natural and expressive - no apologies or qualifications necessary. Really nice - especially for a first attempt.

[khayav]

You're good writer & you're only 19?!

[livingpassion]

Thank you. I'm honored :)

[babydolldebbie]

that is awesome! you are really gifted hun..write on!-Deb

[chadlive101]

You are a true artist passion. It is such a gift. Im always at attention at your art.

[kenrg]

No need to apologize or explain - the poetry stands on its own and just needs to be.

[DClaudeKatz]

Wow! I would have been impressed even if it were a recent composition. I guess the form had already permeated your consciousness before you started writing sonnets. There are some parts that might sound a little clichéd; but ultimately they don't, because you convince me that's what you really felt.

[30andout]

No apologies needed. In years to come you'll look back and see that you started in rather a fair place. To be able to pen your emotions, sad or otherwise, and so well for a first time, is a gift. I enjoy hearing your readings.