@biggs4744 my GT is dont shoooot me, you sent me a message last night when i was playing reach. I wont have a shoot for a while because my capture car is down at the moment.
@Tha50thGamer lol i have spoken to darknal but i dont know him on a personal level and i dont lick his arse if you get what i mean. But yeah the voice acting is much improved for the next episode, it stars stormray lj7117 and midman27. looks epic so far.
@Tha50thGamer hey man i am working on the music for the next episode, but can you please not launch a bloddy spam assault again:) The next epsode is looking much better. please watch it when it is released
@Tha50thGamer ermmm. why is it that all people who are retarded only know darknal... you oblivionsly have set up several accounts to spam me, but oh well. i dont know why you are annoyed...
@BrokenXboxProduction how in anyway is shaking the camera sad, all my machinima's so far are purely tests, my next delta squad episode is a proper effort. Also i dont really expect to have critism from someone who appears to have no experiance in video production, aside from recording gameplay...
@smyile117 i have plenty of experience i used to have a youtube account for machinimas with 10k subscribers and i would spend like 3 months on one episode to make it good so i do have plenty of experience
@smyile117 hacked and deleted and i apologise for flaming but if this was a movie the critics would be just like me but worse so i have every respect for you and your movie's constructive criticism FTW
@BrokenXboxProduction its k man, i will take your critism in though, in my next vid to be released soon their will not be as much camera shaking :) it will also be much improved
friendly advice> As a editor, get some editing software and render the sound in 5.1 surround sound along with the 1080p or 720p video quality. The music in this video was good, just during the fighting scenes it was too quite. Audio is half of the emotion.
Also the camera shake during battles is a little to much. Only do it when theres an explosion grnade etc. What that does is make it seem like the viewer is a soldier in the battle rather than a floating camera in the middle of space.Thumbs Up!
@PAiN0909 hey, i have been told by a machinima. com director to turn the music down, and i think it is better as it is, however i may turn down the sound of the battle. I currently use sony vegas 9.0 which i find sufficent... however thanks for the advie, i will take what i can onboard.
@smyile117 ya at 6:48 its too loud but the battle scenes that start around 3:40 machinima or not need to be a lil louder(also for some reason i tried 2 headsets and my speakers and at 3:40 on to 6:48 seems to only comeing in speakers left and not right. Dont know if thats a problem on my end i checked my sound card and plugins)
If you have vegas 9.0 the quality from 480p to even 720p can make worlds of a difference not only to the video but the sound too if you dont know how i could show you.
@PAiN0909@PAiN0909 the problemw with the music only ncoming from one speaker is because the song is recorded not off itunes etc. i recorded it off youtube with a cable that was not properly connected resulting in audio only being played from one speaker :)
@PAiN0909 the problemw with the music only ncoming from one speaker is because the song is recorded not off itunes etc. i recorded it off youtube with a cable that was not properly connected resulting in audio only being played from one speaker
@peppyhare1990 i never have more than 4 people with there weapons down at a time, however i get more than 16 people on a map using a technique called masking
yes this is a better one mate just a thing that made me go WTF lol at 3:39 the turret guy died but i sam him alive lol but this is a good machinima i can see you are puting alot of effort good luck in future projects! :D
Im pretty sure im not the only one but its not my fault i dnt like ur vids man dam chill dude it just my damn opinion dude wtf ur tripin cause i said ur vid sucked ok so what if theres ppl who like ur kinda stuff well b happy but dam dude chill man lol its just a comment
@sotoboy47 why dont you make one then mate, you are the only person who seems to think this is crap. And thats probably because your a failed director. Or you havn't directed or edited befor and think you would be amazing, well i am telling you, it would be the worst thing i have ever seen. and if you dont like a video leave some constuctive critisism, retard.
i don't know. plenty of things could have been better. for example "what's that. that's the enemy" almost makes simmons sound stupid. i would have had him say "tell me that's not what i think it is? Yep. that's what we're fighting"
@deutschbag1000 yeah, mabye not that exact dialogue, but something else. anyway the next part coming out is very good, at a much higher standard than this. cheers for the comment
this was aight, not the greatest out there. some scenes had potential, but its not quite there yet. and it almost seemed like you ripped off the last scene from TFS. the only difference was that both sides were humans. not to mention every track you played was from the same series as well.
@blueskittle1885 hey, not nevery track i played was from tfs... i used the halo 3 original soundterack. and the orcahstral series, which was used before TFS used it. and the last scene was siply to set the scene for the final part, which is looking amazing.
2 things number 1 this is a great film all you need to make this perfect is make the music more blended in so it dosent randomly cut out and number 2 i am doing a huge machinima with guitarmaster lemur gimmick grevious rocks darknal etc. so i would like to offer you a place voice acting.
@dimlightcreations also apprently you are grevious rocks, and apparently he forced his way into his machinima contract which is believable because his vids are not up to scratch for M.COM
@grievousrocks Hey, i am sorry i threw a fit originally i was having alot of pressur eloaded onto me at once with my GCSE's, i think To be honest tho yo did use an xbox live mic in your machinima's and also the camera skill is abt the same as mine. I will watch your reach machinima and hopefully enjoy it as i hope you will, if youchoose to watch it the finaleof infiltration
@grievousrocks Lol sorry man just a rumor i guess. Anyway thanks for watching the video, i will run over the audio and see if there is a major porblem. Thanks man, oh and also are you making that machinima with dimlightcreations? PM me back
@smyile117 yea, espically when he tricked a friend of mine thinging Darnal, JonCJG and Lemur were making a colab with him. He says my friends vid sucks when his Spartan Squad Alpha was poorly recieved
@HellHawkProductions they are making it, they are all playing in SSA and also alot of them made a video called gift of mercy... anyway im not going to take a side, oh please tell me what your friends video is called. or his account name.
@night4466 sorry dude you can do it on imovie, get FXhome, sony vegas pro, after effects to be able to go it, there other program that can but i have no knowledge of them
@campbellstudi0s can you also tell your whole frinds list about hsi please i want it to be massivly viewed, and then get their frends to tell their other friends
nice vid wish i could help gt is Idealbiggs4744, whats yours
biggs4744 10 months ago
@biggs4744 my GT is dont shoooot me, you sent me a message last night when i was playing reach. I wont have a shoot for a while because my capture car is down at the moment.
smyile117 10 months ago
sooooooo epic! DoubleDangerCo has a halo show too.
expressionlessmanco 11 months ago
lol at 5:28 he got a avement
117reconkiller 1 year ago
sweet you got Storm Ray in
117reconkiller 1 year ago
uf ur doing the music urself gl and no offense but you sound like one of the people that used to know darknal soz if ur not 1.
But u have to admit not all the music did fit in with what happened
And the people sounded calm they were not shouting.
Tha50thGamer 1 year ago 2
@Tha50thGamer lol i have spoken to darknal but i dont know him on a personal level and i dont lick his arse if you get what i mean. But yeah the voice acting is much improved for the next episode, it stars stormray lj7117 and midman27. looks epic so far.
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 stormray isn't he from the forrgotten
MrCodmw223 1 year ago
@smyile117 i know someone who could help you with the next ep
MrCodmw223 1 year ago
@smyile117 nice vid l liked the music and sum of the voice acting
AJDylanatorFilms 1 year ago
BTW i do not know darknal ive never met him but ive been told he has a awsome beard!
Tha50thGamer 1 year ago
@Tha50thGamer hey man i am working on the music for the next episode, but can you please not launch a bloddy spam assault again:) The next epsode is looking much better. please watch it when it is released
smyile117 1 year ago
This has been flagged as spam show
2 words Darknal wannabe
BTW the sergeant sounds gay 7:29 to 7:31 rofl
Tha50thGamer 1 year ago
2 words Darknal wannabe
BTW the sergeant sounds gay
Tha50thGamer 1 year ago
@Tha50thGamer ermmm. why is it that all people who are retarded only know darknal... you oblivionsly have set up several accounts to spam me, but oh well. i dont know why you are annoyed...
smyile117 1 year ago
it still fails its kinda sad how you randomly shake the camera every 5 seconds it makes little to no sense its basicaly just staged fighting
BrokenXboxProduction 1 year ago
@BrokenXboxProduction how in anyway is shaking the camera sad, all my machinima's so far are purely tests, my next delta squad episode is a proper effort. Also i dont really expect to have critism from someone who appears to have no experiance in video production, aside from recording gameplay...
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 i have plenty of experience i used to have a youtube account for machinimas with 10k subscribers and i would spend like 3 months on one episode to make it good so i do have plenty of experience
BrokenXboxProduction 1 year ago
@BrokenXboxProduction really well your current account dosn't, link me to the one with 10k, and what do you mean used tp have, was it banned?
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 hacked and deleted and i apologise for flaming but if this was a movie the critics would be just like me but worse so i have every respect for you and your movie's constructive criticism FTW
BrokenXboxProduction 1 year ago
@BrokenXboxProduction its k man, i will take your critism in though, in my next vid to be released soon their will not be as much camera shaking :) it will also be much improved
smyile117 1 year ago
friendly advice> As a editor, get some editing software and render the sound in 5.1 surround sound along with the 1080p or 720p video quality. The music in this video was good, just during the fighting scenes it was too quite. Audio is half of the emotion.
Also the camera shake during battles is a little to much. Only do it when theres an explosion grnade etc. What that does is make it seem like the viewer is a soldier in the battle rather than a floating camera in the middle of space.Thumbs Up!
PAiN0909 1 year ago
@PAiN0909 hey, i have been told by a machinima. com director to turn the music down, and i think it is better as it is, however i may turn down the sound of the battle. I currently use sony vegas 9.0 which i find sufficent... however thanks for the advie, i will take what i can onboard.
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 ya at 6:48 its too loud but the battle scenes that start around 3:40 machinima or not need to be a lil louder(also for some reason i tried 2 headsets and my speakers and at 3:40 on to 6:48 seems to only comeing in speakers left and not right. Dont know if thats a problem on my end i checked my sound card and plugins)
If you have vegas 9.0 the quality from 480p to even 720p can make worlds of a difference not only to the video but the sound too if you dont know how i could show you.
PAiN0909 1 year ago
@PAiN0909 @PAiN0909 the problemw with the music only ncoming from one speaker is because the song is recorded not off itunes etc. i recorded it off youtube with a cable that was not properly connected resulting in audio only being played from one speaker :)
smyile117 1 year ago
@PAiN0909 oh and also the quality will be HD soon enough
smyile117 1 year ago
@PAiN0909 the problemw with the music only ncoming from one speaker is because the song is recorded not off itunes etc. i recorded it off youtube with a cable that was not properly connected resulting in audio only being played from one speaker
smyile117 1 year ago
amazing
mikedog251 1 year ago
how do you get as many spartans as you do in one shot with weapons down? system link?
peppyhare1990 1 year ago
@peppyhare1990 i never have more than 4 people with there weapons down at a time, however i get more than 16 people on a map using a technique called masking
smyile117 1 year ago
yes this is a better one mate just a thing that made me go WTF lol at 3:39 the turret guy died but i sam him alive lol but this is a good machinima i can see you are puting alot of effort good luck in future projects! :D
Tha50thGamer 1 year ago
@Tha50thGamer why are you flamin at me now...
smyile117 1 year ago
Im pretty sure im not the only one but its not my fault i dnt like ur vids man dam chill dude it just my damn opinion dude wtf ur tripin cause i said ur vid sucked ok so what if theres ppl who like ur kinda stuff well b happy but dam dude chill man lol its just a comment
sotoboy47 1 year ago
Yea it was lame but its better than the other ones
sotoboy47 1 year ago
@sotoboy47 why dont you make one then mate, you are the only person who seems to think this is crap. And thats probably because your a failed director. Or you havn't directed or edited befor and think you would be amazing, well i am telling you, it would be the worst thing i have ever seen. and if you dont like a video leave some constuctive critisism, retard.
smyile117 1 year ago
if tht was my leader id ask him not to speak cuz the voice of the leader dude is lame as shit
gdnoob4 1 year ago
i don't know. plenty of things could have been better. for example "what's that. that's the enemy" almost makes simmons sound stupid. i would have had him say "tell me that's not what i think it is? Yep. that's what we're fighting"
deutschbag1000 1 year ago
@deutschbag1000 yeah, mabye not that exact dialogue, but something else. anyway the next part coming out is very good, at a much higher standard than this. cheers for the comment
smyile117 1 year ago
this was aight, not the greatest out there. some scenes had potential, but its not quite there yet. and it almost seemed like you ripped off the last scene from TFS. the only difference was that both sides were humans. not to mention every track you played was from the same series as well.
blueskittle1885 1 year ago
@blueskittle1885 hey, not nevery track i played was from tfs... i used the halo 3 original soundterack. and the orcahstral series, which was used before TFS used it. and the last scene was siply to set the scene for the final part, which is looking amazing.
smyile117 1 year ago
@blueskittle1885 yeah it does have that feeling doesn't it
deutschbag1000 1 year ago
nice machinima,
you rock!
:D
flytrap1234 1 year ago
@flytrap1234 cheers man thanks for the complements
smyile117 1 year ago
hi you still havven added me what you gt??
CrazyHaloCrap 1 year ago
Yeah, the audio is horribel, sorry... It keeps on cutting out and fix the camera angles a bit, it's kinda too shaky.
grievousrocks 1 year ago
Great video but some of the people in this didn't take it seriously. For example a guy at 01:21 fired his weapon.
ForgottenGrave 1 year ago
hi smtile can i be in one of you machinimas plz my gamertag is djfuzz1
CrazyHaloCrap 1 year ago
@CrazyHaloCrap Tes man you can be in my machinima i will add you today or tommorow
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 ok thank i wont be on much friday or saturday thanks any way
gamenub10 1 year ago
2 things number 1 this is a great film all you need to make this perfect is make the music more blended in so it dosent randomly cut out and number 2 i am doing a huge machinima with guitarmaster lemur gimmick grevious rocks darknal etc. so i would like to offer you a place voice acting.
dimlightcreations 1 year ago
@dimlightcreations also apprently you are grevious rocks, and apparently he forced his way into his machinima contract which is believable because his vids are not up to scratch for M.COM
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 lol who said im grevious rocks im just one of his friends?
dimlightcreations 1 year ago
@smyile117
Well the ones I uploaded suck... But I am working on a new machinima in reach and it should be quite good and hopefully you'll like it.
grievousrocks 1 year ago
@grievousrocks Hey, i am sorry i threw a fit originally i was having alot of pressur eloaded onto me at once with my GCSE's, i think To be honest tho yo did use an xbox live mic in your machinima's and also the camera skill is abt the same as mine. I will watch your reach machinima and hopefully enjoy it as i hope you will, if youchoose to watch it the finaleof infiltration
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117
Oh and I the hell did I force my way into machinima?
grievousrocks 1 year ago
@grievousrocks I heard a rumor that you were poing as your brother and frauded your way in just a rumor though... peace
matt
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117
I don't have a brother lol.
grievousrocks 1 year ago
@grievousrocks Lol sorry man just a rumor i guess. Anyway thanks for watching the video, i will run over the audio and see if there is a major porblem. Thanks man, oh and also are you making that machinima with dimlightcreations? PM me back
smyile117 1 year ago
could i as well
justawsome9 1 year ago
@justawsome9 yep you can mate but i need your GT, actually just add me "dont shooot me" i will accept as sonn as possible
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 my GT is shadow7296
justawsome9 1 year ago
hey can i be in one of ur vids they're beast!
Axegamers12 1 year ago
@Axegamers12 yep you can mate but i need your GT, actually just add me "dont shooot me" i will accept as sonn as possible
smyile117 1 year ago
hey can i be in one of your films they are bad ass
kalebkills 1 year ago
@kalebkills yeah sure man, reply to this with your GT and i will add you!
smyile117 1 year ago
how u do this?
clonecommandoscorch 1 year ago
@clonecommandoscorch, how do i do what?
smyile117 1 year ago
dont hate me but i fucking hate Chrisnepts, he's an asshole
HellHawkProductions 1 year ago
@HellHawkProductions fair enough
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 yea, espically when he tricked a friend of mine thinging Darnal, JonCJG and Lemur were making a colab with him. He says my friends vid sucks when his Spartan Squad Alpha was poorly recieved
HellHawkProductions 1 year ago
@HellHawkProductions they are making it, they are all playing in SSA and also alot of them made a video called gift of mercy... anyway im not going to take a side, oh please tell me what your friends video is called. or his account name.
Cheers
matt
smyile117 1 year ago
can someone tell me how to do the cloning effect on imove
night4466 1 year ago
@night4466 sorry dude you can do it on imovie, get FXhome, sony vegas pro, after effects to be able to go it, there other program that can but i have no knowledge of them
smyile117 1 year ago
awsome machinima dude
jrock9522 1 year ago
ramirez sounds like guitarmasterX7
night4466 1 year ago
@night4466 kind off hes actually stormray off the forgotten spartans
smyile117 1 year ago
the sounds only coming from the right... odd
OriginalHappyNadeCo 1 year ago
@OriginalHappyNadeCo i mean just the music
OriginalHappyNadeCo 1 year ago
@OriginalHappyNadeCo... ok, good for you. :)
smyile117 1 year ago
This has been flagged as spam show
@OriginalHappyNadeCo i mean just the music
OriginalHappyNadeCo 1 year ago
5/5 great vid you need to post these up on machima if your going to put this much effort into them. ★★★★★ 5 star
TheTacticalJoe 1 year ago
tell your whole freind list to watch pls, thanks
smyile117 1 year ago
Great job man, 5/5, your improving every time :D
tocgow 1 year ago
wow u guys really out did yourselves on this, it was amazing
Boobumoog 1 year ago
cheers man
smyile117 1 year ago
holly shit stormray. Thats sweet dude
DarthBlader12 1 year ago
You killed me off Noooooo!!!!! Great machinina 5* all the way
campbellstudi0s 1 year ago
lol mate you will be suprised in the next one dont worry, looking forward to it
smyile117 1 year ago
@campbellstudi0s can you also tell your whole frinds list about hsi please i want it to be massivly viewed, and then get their frends to tell their other friends
smyile117 1 year ago
just to anoy people first comment yeah noobs
delapatatedpoo 1 year ago