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  • nice vid wish i could help gt is Idealbiggs4744, whats yours

  • @biggs4744 my GT is dont shoooot me, you sent me a message last night when i was playing reach. I wont have a shoot for a while because my capture car is down at the moment.

  • sooooooo epic! DoubleDangerCo has a halo show too.

  • lol at 5:28 he got a avement

  • sweet you got Storm Ray in

  • uf ur doing the music urself gl and no offense but you sound like one of the people that used to know darknal soz if ur not 1.

    But u have to admit not all the music did fit in with what happened

    And the people sounded calm they were not shouting.

  • @Tha50thGamer lol i have spoken to darknal but i dont know him on a personal level and i dont lick his arse if you get what i mean. But yeah the voice acting is much improved for the next episode, it stars stormray lj7117 and midman27. looks epic so far.

  • @smyile117 stormray isn't he from the forrgotten

  • @smyile117 i know someone who could help you with the next ep

  • @smyile117 nice vid l liked the music and sum of the voice acting

  • BTW i do not know darknal ive never met him but ive been told he has a awsome beard!

  • @Tha50thGamer hey man i am working on the music for the next episode, but can you please not launch a bloddy spam assault again:) The next epsode is looking much better. please watch it when it is released

  • 2 words Darknal wannabe

    BTW the sergeant sounds gay

  • @Tha50thGamer ermmm. why is it that all people who are retarded only know darknal... you oblivionsly have set up several accounts to spam me, but oh well. i dont know why you are annoyed...

  • it still fails its kinda sad how you randomly shake the camera every 5 seconds it makes little to no sense its basicaly just staged fighting

  • @BrokenXboxProduction how in anyway is shaking the camera sad, all my machinima's so far are purely tests, my next delta squad episode is a proper effort. Also i dont really expect to have critism from someone who appears to have no experiance in video production, aside from recording gameplay...

  • @smyile117 i have plenty of experience i used to have a youtube account for machinimas with 10k subscribers and i would spend like 3 months on one episode to make it good so i do have plenty of experience

  • @BrokenXboxProduction really well your current account dosn't, link me to the one with 10k, and what do you mean used tp have, was it banned?

  • @smyile117 hacked and deleted and i apologise for flaming but if this was a movie the critics would be just like me but worse so i have every respect for you and your movie's constructive criticism FTW

  • @BrokenXboxProduction its k man, i will take your critism in though, in my next vid to be released soon their will not be as much camera shaking :) it will also be much improved

  • friendly advice> As a editor, get some editing software and render the sound in 5.1 surround sound along with the 1080p or 720p video quality. The music in this video was good, just during the fighting scenes it was too quite. Audio is half of the emotion.

    Also the camera shake during battles is a little to much. Only do it when theres an explosion grnade etc. What that does is make it seem like the viewer is a soldier in the battle rather than a floating camera in the middle of space.Thumbs Up!

  • @PAiN0909 hey, i have been told by a machinima. com director to turn the music down, and i think it is better as it is, however i may turn down the sound of the battle. I currently use sony vegas 9.0 which i find sufficent... however thanks for the advie, i will take what i can onboard.

  • @smyile117 ya at 6:48 its too loud but the battle scenes that start around 3:40 machinima or not need to be a lil louder(also for some reason i tried 2 headsets and my speakers and at 3:40 on to 6:48 seems to only comeing in speakers left and not right. Dont know if thats a problem on my end i checked my sound card and plugins)

    If you have vegas 9.0 the quality from 480p to even 720p can make worlds of a difference not only to the video but the sound too if you dont know how i could show you.

  • @PAiN0909 @PAiN0909 the problemw with the music only ncoming from one speaker is because the song is recorded not off itunes etc. i recorded it off youtube with a cable that was not properly connected resulting in audio only being played from one speaker :)

  • @PAiN0909 oh and also the quality will be HD soon enough

  • @PAiN0909 the problemw with the music only ncoming from one speaker is because the song is recorded not off itunes etc. i recorded it off youtube with a cable that was not properly connected resulting in audio only being played from one speaker

  • amazing

  • how do you get as many spartans as you do in one shot with weapons down? system link?

  • @peppyhare1990 i never have more than 4 people with there weapons down at a time, however i get more than 16 people on a map using a technique called masking

  • yes this is a better one mate just a thing that made me go WTF lol at 3:39 the turret guy died but i sam him alive lol but this is a good machinima i can see you are puting alot of effort good luck in future projects! :D

  • @Tha50thGamer why are you flamin at me now...

  • Im pretty sure im not the only one but its not my fault i dnt like ur vids man dam chill dude it just my damn opinion dude wtf ur tripin cause i said ur vid sucked ok so what if theres ppl who like ur kinda stuff well b happy but dam dude chill man lol its just a comment

  • Yea it was lame but its better than the other ones

  • @sotoboy47 why dont you make one then mate, you are the only person who seems to think this is crap. And thats probably because your a failed director. Or you havn't directed or edited befor and think you would be amazing, well i am telling you, it would be the worst thing i have ever seen. and if you dont like a video leave some constuctive critisism, retard.

  • if tht was my leader id ask him not to speak cuz the voice of the leader dude is lame as shit

  • i don't know. plenty of things could have been better. for example "what's that. that's the enemy" almost makes simmons sound stupid. i would have had him say "tell me that's not what i think it is? Yep. that's what we're fighting"

  • @deutschbag1000 yeah, mabye not that exact dialogue, but something else. anyway the next part coming out is very good, at a much higher standard than this. cheers for the comment

  • this was aight, not the greatest out there. some scenes had potential, but its not quite there yet. and it almost seemed like you ripped off the last scene from TFS. the only difference was that both sides were humans. not to mention every track you played was from the same series as well.

  • @blueskittle1885 hey, not nevery track i played was from tfs... i used the halo 3 original soundterack. and the orcahstral series, which was used before TFS used it. and the last scene was siply to set the scene for the final part, which is looking amazing.

  • @blueskittle1885 yeah it does have that feeling doesn't it

  • nice machinima,

    you rock!

    :D

  • @flytrap1234 cheers man thanks for the complements

  • hi you still havven added me what you gt??

  • Yeah, the audio is horribel, sorry... It keeps on cutting out and fix the camera angles a bit, it's kinda too shaky.

  • Great video but some of the people in this didn't take it seriously. For example a guy at 01:21 fired his weapon.

  • hi smtile can i be in one of you machinimas plz my gamertag is djfuzz1

  • @CrazyHaloCrap Tes man you can be in my machinima i will add you today or tommorow

  • @smyile117 ok thank i wont be on much friday or saturday thanks any way

  • 2 things number 1 this is a great film all you need to make this perfect is make the music more blended in so it dosent randomly cut out and number 2 i am doing a huge machinima with guitarmaster lemur gimmick grevious rocks darknal etc. so i would like to offer you a place voice acting.

  • @dimlightcreations also apprently you are grevious rocks, and apparently he forced his way into his machinima contract which is believable because his vids are not up to scratch for M.COM

  • @smyile117 lol who said im grevious rocks im just one of his friends?

  • @smyile117

    Well the ones I uploaded suck... But I am working on a new machinima in reach and it should be quite good and hopefully you'll like it.

  • @grievousrocks Hey, i am sorry i threw a fit originally i was having alot of pressur eloaded onto me at once with my GCSE's, i think To be honest tho yo did use an xbox live mic in your machinima's and also the camera skill is abt the same as mine. I will watch your reach machinima and hopefully enjoy it as i hope you will, if youchoose to watch it the finaleof infiltration

  • @smyile117

    Oh and I the hell did I force my way into machinima?

  • @grievousrocks I heard a rumor that you were poing as your brother and frauded your way in just a rumor though... peace

    matt

  • @smyile117

    I don't have a brother lol.

  • @grievousrocks Lol sorry man just a rumor i guess. Anyway thanks for watching the video, i will run over the audio and see if there is a major porblem. Thanks man, oh and also are you making that machinima with dimlightcreations? PM me back

  • could i as well

  • @justawsome9 yep you can mate but i need your GT, actually just add me "dont shooot me" i will accept as sonn as possible

  • @smyile117 my GT is shadow7296

  • hey can i be in one of ur vids they're beast!

  • @Axegamers12 yep you can mate but i need your GT, actually just add me "dont shooot me" i will accept as sonn as possible

  • hey can i be in one of your films they are bad ass

  • @kalebkills yeah sure man, reply to this with your GT and i will add you!

  • how u do this?

  • @clonecommandoscorch, how do i do what?

  • dont hate me but i fucking hate Chrisnepts, he's an asshole

  • @HellHawkProductions fair enough

  • @smyile117 yea, espically when he tricked a friend of mine thinging Darnal, JonCJG and Lemur were making a colab with him. He says my friends vid sucks when his Spartan Squad Alpha was poorly recieved

  • @HellHawkProductions they are making it, they are all playing in SSA and also alot of them made a video called gift of mercy... anyway im not going to take a side, oh please tell me what your friends video is called. or his account name.

    Cheers

    matt

  • can someone tell me how to do the cloning effect on imove

  • @night4466 sorry dude you can do it on imovie, get FXhome, sony vegas pro, after effects to be able to go it, there other program that can but i have no knowledge of them

  • awsome machinima dude

  • ramirez sounds like guitarmasterX7

  • @night4466 kind off hes actually stormray off the forgotten spartans

  • the sounds only coming from the right... odd

  • @OriginalHappyNadeCo i mean just the music

  • @OriginalHappyNadeCo... ok, good for you. :)

  • 5/5 great vid you need to post these up on machima if your going to put this much effort into them. ★★★★★ 5 star

  • tell your whole freind list to watch pls, thanks

  • Great job man, 5/5, your improving every time :D

  • wow u guys really out did yourselves on this, it was amazing

  • cheers man

  • holly shit stormray. Thats sweet dude

  • You killed me off Noooooo!!!!! Great machinina 5* all the way

  • lol mate you will be suprised in the next one dont worry, looking forward to it

  • @campbellstudi0s can you also tell your whole frinds list about hsi please i want it to be massivly viewed, and then get their frends to tell their other friends

  • just to anoy people first comment yeah noobs

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