Bill's Audition Monologues

[ballin3393]

I can see your talent and emotion but your body and voice needs to match it. first the body movements have to emphasize your speech and vary at the same time to create a greater effect and yours repeat alot but they do still hold lots of emotion behind them just use different ways to express that. I liked the accents very well done but your voice also needs to have slightly different pitches and variations. otherwise a well done performance

[JUANO510]

can u subscribe to my page man becuz i subbed u already

[JUANO510]

great!!!! 5 stars man.... im gonna subscribe. can you do the same and tell me what u think of my monologues... great job man

[cheatsatmonopoly]

Your Shakespeare was more than a little off... you're not making a sales pitch, you are avoiding death. Try getting that across to us next time.

[thenakedtruth2]

Oh.... and you're in a stinky dungeon about to DIE.... you're not trying to convince your sister that you're right in a mundane argument, which is all I am getting right now.

Say "Let me Live" till you get it "right."

[thenakedtruth2]

Plant your feet. And for the Love of Shakespeare tie your hands down.

[Kojitai1]

truly amazing acting i beleived you and wanted to see more and with u interacting with others

[BleedBlack0720]

zero speach. Please don't bring elevated text down to your level. RISE TO MEET IT

[LoverofStage]

A bit overdone for me. Not very belivable...watch your inflictions...but i loooove your enthusiasm!

[trysissy]

Very nice. As a theater actress in training I commend you. :) Just a note though- try not to walk forward and back too much. If you take a step forward, make it deliberate, and if you take a step back, don't make it because you know you are getting too close to the camera, or the directors. :) Good job.

[bryanyongyufook]

can anyone tell me what's the tile of the two monologues that he mentioned?

[psugiggles2008]

haha! So I finally watched your audition on youtube! yay me! Very good job Bill :) You definitely have something inspiring and magical when you get into character (as well as your real life self too, of course)! Happy Summer!!! I'll see you when I get home.

[Dayfray116]

i love your voice. i would have a pause between the two monologues and not have them blend into one another but thats just me.

[bboyice22]

HAPPY FEET! remember power in stillness

[bboyice22]

HAPPY FEET! remember power in stillness

[PuertoRicanMami24]

That was very good OMG!!

Good Job

[nesti89]

lol i like it!

[skrapperz]

You have a very animated voice. Entertaining to watch. Some of your hand gestures could be worked on or at least don't fling up your hands every time you talk.

[westeightyone]

You remind me of a young Richard Dreyfus.

[JLongg]

YESS!!!

[broadwayscaera]

That was pretty good, but there were several problems which came to mind. The little shrug at the beginning of the monologues to 'get into character' was unnecessary and honestly not particularly professional. Some of the foot movements were a little awkward and several of the gestures were lacking intention and seemed to be there just for the sake of gesturing.

Apart from that, it was rather good.

[maralingurl]

that was really good! im 15 and iv auditions for a few things here and there and id love to be as good as you! keep it up and get far and also enjoy wat you do!! xxx

[ThePrettyDramaQueen]

WOW!! THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!

[GubbaToto]

Im actually doing a project in Drama where we have to have two contrasting monlogues, one classic and one contemporary... I like these, but your transition was weak and I didnt see much of a change in character.

[scandalousrogue]

I think you have good instincts, but, I must say, I saw YOU in both roles. It worked on the first one. And while you are "emoting" as the brother, there is no clear dileniation between the two pieces. So, give a little pause to show the transition clearer. I agree that in #2-- you need to LIVE! MAKE HER BELIEVE! I am an actor in NY- you?

[theoneshogun]

Not bad. The second, though, I believe should be more pleading. You're going to die, right? Act like it.

[myfaceisuphere]

I love Bill! Let me know if he gets in any shows this fall as i am not going back to school until jan...it's nicole by the way.... not an unknown stalker... or could i be both???

[zahir2k]

ur good man, hope u got the part

[TheWickedBoarder]

First!! haha, good, I have a monologue up in about 2 hours, I'm watching examples... thanks!!