Fabulous. Strong lyrics and well crafted guitar melodies.
The song was a bit long and as currently constituted took a little too long to get to the chorus IMO, but I think that could be easily addressed by introducing staggered layering in a final mix.
I also think that chorus could be magnificent with some Coldplay-esque leadwork and some backing vocals.
i do feel it's abit long but it was ment to be longer lol i cut out a few verses because i had far to many lol
it's not really a favourite of mine because i wrote it for a college project and i worked on it alot so i got a little sick of hearing it so give it time i imagine you will too lol
thanks ill keep it in mind if i get around to rcording.
Nice. I really like the rythm you layed down on this song, simple but very good. The best rythms usually are basic but creative. Your timing is excellent also, nice job OZ.
Enter OZZY! hunni you rock. but i tell you I dont aprecaiate your uncle calling us old...yet. but he's right we dooo love you. your fantasitc!! Im addicted and love the energy and soul that shines through your playing and beautiful songwriting.
All the very best to you and your family dear.
xxx~M.o.M Fun family you're getting. Great Aunt Jules and an Extra M.o.M, lol.
There is a bit of Springsteen in the writing. The precocious talent of youth. Us old farts look at each other and think ' We have to raise our game now...' We needed a kick up the arse. Great work on this. You are a natural. Andy
Sir Merlot, still daylight and much wine left to consume...still celebrating those English religious zealots who came here and spread smallpox among the natives...cheers!
It's just a phase you're going thru
Silly Boy!
Don't lose Hope!!
I love your Great Song!!!
Love, m ; )))
streetspiritlive 1 year ago
daaamn.. what a song. I'm really impressed, especially by your vocal performance.
kairamon 2 years ago
great! your savage :) subed ya
missb9871 2 years ago
cheers missb:)
thanks for the sub
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Cant get enough of this one ... Loving that riff through the verse..super song my friend. cant say it enough 5*****
ronb15 2 years ago
cheers rob :)
thanks for the stars
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Good stuff Ozzy .
nannerbj 2 years ago
Ozzy Your So Talented Dude Well Done Love Ya Cuz :) xx
LadyVallie 2 years ago
lol cheers yaz
Oz
x
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Very good song Ozzy and I thnk you to my friend Julia for the sending.
SebastienDeChantilly 2 years ago
thanks Sebastien:)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
good stuff!
diarmaidok 2 years ago
well done ozzy
marycigarettes 2 years ago
thanks so much mary :)
i love your work an im so glad you enjoyed mine :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
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alexandraxxxxxx 2 years ago
ozzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I love this a lot....what fantastic playing too ...your a gem .....
stop drinking too much ...lol !!!!
alexandraxxxxxx 2 years ago
cheers:)
lol i dont drink that much lol its mikees influence not mine lol
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
OZZY...You're on NEXT WEEK :)))
blokebroadcasting 2 years ago
lol cheers tim
i look forward to it :)
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
well played, Ozzy!
BigLoveZone 2 years ago
The song´s got potential, I like it!
Rick
bios36 2 years ago
cheers :)
im glad you liked it
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
FAN-TAS-TIC!
Mooz
moomay11649 2 years ago
Fabulous. Strong lyrics and well crafted guitar melodies.
The song was a bit long and as currently constituted took a little too long to get to the chorus IMO, but I think that could be easily addressed by introducing staggered layering in a final mix.
I also think that chorus could be magnificent with some Coldplay-esque leadwork and some backing vocals.
Oswlek 2 years ago
One other thing, the ending was perfect.
Oswlek 2 years ago
lol cheers again
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
cheers im glad you liked it
i do feel it's abit long but it was ment to be longer lol i cut out a few verses because i had far to many lol
it's not really a favourite of mine because i wrote it for a college project and i worked on it alot so i got a little sick of hearing it so give it time i imagine you will too lol
thanks ill keep it in mind if i get around to rcording.
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Thanks for the share Mikee ... excellent music ... 5* & shared.
boogpatton 2 years ago
thank you boog for the share this is good music
songpoemguy 2 years ago
Nice. I really like the rythm you layed down on this song, simple but very good. The best rythms usually are basic but creative. Your timing is excellent also, nice job OZ.
faaradar 2 years ago
thanks :)
so kind of you to say
im glad you enjoyed it
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
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monello198 2 years ago
Very talented....nice song mate. Well done.
ricmalbex 2 years ago
cheers :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
You're so talented. And good looking. :)
mo4forum 2 years ago
buy me a drink first lol
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Enter OZZY! hunni you rock. but i tell you I dont aprecaiate your uncle calling us old...yet. but he's right we dooo love you. your fantasitc!! Im addicted and love the energy and soul that shines through your playing and beautiful songwriting.
All the very best to you and your family dear.
xxx~M.o.M Fun family you're getting. Great Aunt Jules and an Extra M.o.M, lol.
giggles, winks and huggs OZ! :))
mindovermatter2009 2 years ago
lol your making me blush haha
give him a slap lol
thanks you so much your to kind aunt jules:)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Well done Ozzy - good stuff
nannerbj 2 years ago
Excellent original song and performance Ozzy! Cheers!
EdMuirton 2 years ago
lyrics go beyond the chords still connected to those heartstrings that wrestle with vocals.....truly awesome.....you need to be recorded friend
I'd buy the CD.....even share a drop with ya
cheers Gary :--)
ivebeenthere1 2 years ago
thanks Gary, im glad you liked it
ill let you know when i've done some recording and ill send you it :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Thanks Oz!!!
ivebeenthere1 2 years ago
Very Well Done!!! 5*s Your Very Talented Thankyou Sprouty who sent & Thankyou OZ for posting....Anita..
anitashelby 2 years ago
Maybe you feel
just a shape
a bit hollow
but don't worry!
You're filling out nicely n then some!!
Truly great stars shine forever... ; )
*****
streetspiritlive 2 years ago
thanks im very flattered lol
cheers for the stars :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
There is a bit of Springsteen in the writing. The precocious talent of youth. Us old farts look at each other and think ' We have to raise our game now...' We needed a kick up the arse. Great work on this. You are a natural. Andy
Toracube 2 years ago
actually i didn't think i should raise my game..
i just went to the pub
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
Ok, Mikee excluded. lol
Toracube 2 years ago
lol i wasnt planning on kicking anyones arse lol
cheers andy :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
We are having meetings...
Toracube 2 years ago
Nice 1 Young Ozzy...Enjoyed it immensely...Billy...
vegasdaddy17 2 years ago
this has a great up to date sound,and you play well,a good solid song,,dont waste time get out there and play ,,,,Alan.
TINMANschannel 2 years ago
thanks :) im glad you liked it
i plan to
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Great original song...
You look a bit like Rob Thomas:-)
Mariekesone 2 years ago
thanks, glad you like it :)
lol i jus need his voice now lol
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
a solidly written song and nicely performed...Cheers!
tps607 2 years ago
thank you Tom, cheers:)
i hope to get better
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Hey man...lol....we all hope to get better! never give up...you are miles ahead of the rest of the pack!
tps607 2 years ago
hello old man...
how's life on the wrong side of Atlantic?
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
Sir Merlot, still daylight and much wine left to consume...still celebrating those English religious zealots who came here and spread smallpox among the natives...cheers!
tps607 2 years ago
ahh.. blankets of mass distruction...
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
how true...and it crossed my mind that Ozzie begins as you do,only with a lower octane drink.
tps607 2 years ago
weaning the boy
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
too young yet to let him touch your guitar!
tps607 2 years ago
thanks, i didnt forget i forwarded them to sprout to send to you lol
i gotta get famous first lol
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Terrific songwriting, great playing, brilliant vocals..If only the sound was better. Better speak to prboyd for a few pointers :))
kentishbloke 2 years ago
thanks time :)
we do the best we can with the best we got. christmas is coming, ill send you my wish list lol
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Thank you for sharing :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
A fantastic upload. Thanks to you Dave and monello. All the stars. ☺
weeyin1155 2 years ago
thank you :)
cheers for the stars, im glad you enjoyed it
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Well done Ozzy! Your voice reminds me a lot of Rod Stewart's when he was much younger. You got some soul in those vocal notes mate!!!! Mark
Maysey1 2 years ago
cheers mark:)
lol still searching for a maggie may to inspire me lol
thanks your to kind
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Swell worth a share, Great Original Song
Wayne ♫►♪♫☺
swellmusik 2 years ago
tried sharing about twenty times , but no joy , I thinkk ths tube are doing maintenance or something Sorry, Still great song
Wayne
swellmusik 2 years ago
keep trying or i will upload THE photo's !!!
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
@swellmusik
5*****
Thanks for sharing dear Wayne!
I like this lovely song, and voice of Ozzy, of course!
Hugs for both of you!
satothequeen 2 years ago
cheers wayne:)
glad you liked it
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
nice one Ozzy, thanks Dave for sharing.
thankGodforDavidG 2 years ago
Great song and beautiful tune !
5*****
Thanks for share monello198
Tadek59 2 years ago
nice one ozzy :)
Banjing18 2 years ago
hi brat....
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
hi dad
wheres the money you owe me?
Banjing18 2 years ago
do i know you?
monello198 2 years ago
pah
Banjing18 2 years ago
cheers
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
welcome lol
Banjing18 2 years ago
great song and performance though you sound awfully sad for someone your age, don't worry things'll be better when you're 20 lol
Malvasio2 2 years ago
I'm impressed your memory stretches that far back
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
I took notes
Malvasio2 2 years ago
thanks Malvasio,
im glad you liked it:)
lol im not always sad though .. just on thurdays lol
i really loved your cover of Leonard Cohen's Hallelujah, straight after i heard it i went home an learnt it lol
but dont worry i wont post it lol
cheers for the fav :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
yeah thursdays are a bitch
Hey I wanna hear you cover Hallelujah
blow me away
I dare ya
Malvasio2 2 years ago
it's been done to death, but when i run out of my songs i might well give it a shot..
thanks again...
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Thanks for share sproutcentral
Fantastic song and excellent sound !
Great job !
5*****
Tadek59 2 years ago
cheers tadek:)
thenks for the stars
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
sweet
decktwo 2 years ago
cheers dude
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Sounds GREAT :) great song and playing.
hysonly 2 years ago
oh hun sprouty sent me this ,,,your very talneted .....all the best to you
blondiebabs 2 years ago
thank you Barbara...
you're very kind:)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
yer very good ,,,thanks mr b0nd,,,,,welldone hunxxxxbabsie
blondiebabs 2 years ago
AWESOME!!!!!!
BlueInkInternational 2 years ago
cheers:)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Well done Oz...another great song.
5*****
Dave.
sproutcentral 2 years ago
cheers Dave :)
glad your liking my songs
thanks for the stars
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Very good!
5 Stars!!!
tomhardyband 2 years ago
cheers tom:)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Not to bad for a kid
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
always drinking
Aintboverd 2 years ago
lol helps me concentrate i swear lol
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
this is so moving and beautiful..
thank you Julia for the share...
well done Ozzy...
so well done
JS
TheJessicaScott 2 years ago
thank you so much jess:)
im glad you liked it
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Dude this is proper good.. I love that style of playing. Super voice too. You'll go far !
ronb15 2 years ago
cheers rob:)
you is proper good too
lol
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
What can I say?
Ozzy - you are amazing.There's not many that can play that fret board like you....
the true musicians will recognise this.
rated and shared.
see you soon
much love
Great Aunt Jules.x.
roadbiketraveller 2 years ago
Great Aunt Jules?
monello198 2 years ago
Anything's better than GRANNY !!!
roadbiketraveller 2 years ago
He is good isn't he?
thanks for sharing this..x x
monello198 2 years ago
thanks great aunt jules :)
your to kind im extremely flattered.
cheers for the rating an shares
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago