your production could use improvement, however. the vocoded vocals at the beginning kinda ruined the mood, seemed like. percussion was pretty good, perhaps add a stronger kick?
overall I think that this track was good, especially with those lyrics. You sir, have talent for that. Just work on your producing skills and you will have a winner.
i read your comment at "Eminem - Lose Yourself MUSIC VIDEO" ...
im not a big fan of rap, but sometimes i like to hear it...i have to say if i dont know your comment i would say you´re one of these famous american rappers...good job dude...this is pretty great^^
Dude that whole rap was a nursery rhyme... Work on your flow, but the beat was kind of cool. Put together your lyrics better but other than that atleast you have the skill to even rhyme LOL. Not impressed at all you won't make it big unless you make your lyrics more affective.
Dude wow, that's actually really good! I think you could definately go pro at rappin if you really try! Dang haha I hope you stick wit this cuz u reaall good!!
Not a fan of rap and I feel it all sounds the same but personally, it's got a catchy beat and worth a listen to Rap fans
Catboy12000 1 year ago
Sweet... ;)
oOoOAngel 1 year ago
cool
uralumkinman 1 year ago
DOPE TRACK!!
7evann 1 year ago
NIC FLOW AND PRODUCTION TIGHT BEAT......
yousexy2000 1 year ago
thiz shit good keep me posted on wat ur doen so keep it up
big01emo 1 year ago
This is good man, Beats hot, Good lyrics keep doin your thing cousin
Halfbakedd69 1 year ago
Haha, you sent me a message about this, I thought it was going to be crap, but this is pretty frraking awesome!!!
iluvallstarweekend16 1 year ago
great work with the lyrics, big ups for that!
your production could use improvement, however. the vocoded vocals at the beginning kinda ruined the mood, seemed like. percussion was pretty good, perhaps add a stronger kick?
overall I think that this track was good, especially with those lyrics. You sir, have talent for that. Just work on your producing skills and you will have a winner.
TranceCrafter/DJT0nic
DJT0nic 1 year ago
This joint is Dope! U WENT IN ON THIS ONE BRO!!!!!
KLASSICAL32 1 year ago
delivery needs work, good shit tho.
kassidybodom 1 year ago
hey nice rap song :D but maybe the intro needs to be more upbeat with the rest of the song?
anyway my main comment is that ur rappin skills r gud n smooth goes along with the beat n u on ur way to bcumin a pro if u keep workin at it ;)
RudeGyal96 1 year ago
dope track dude
I like the beat very much
HipHopRepresenterII 1 year ago
The intro was kind of sorry, but it was pure dopeness after that
TheEazyDuzIt95 1 year ago
i like it
TheHumanUnity 1 year ago
nice shit bro
YoungflamesG 1 year ago
Keep up the good work man, I'll be fallowing you for now on. Lets see how far you go, don't dissapoint me.
captin0mega 1 year ago
Sounds good!
toyaboo2 1 year ago
yo you iight but keep writing more n u get better
diamondGot1 1 year ago
i read your comment at "Eminem - Lose Yourself MUSIC VIDEO" ...
im not a big fan of rap, but sometimes i like to hear it...i have to say if i dont know your comment i would say you´re one of these famous american rappers...good job dude...this is pretty great^^
wztsmdabe 1 year ago
Fuckin' awesome. The beginning was a little off the beat, but over all, good work.
llRevengeII 1 year ago
rapp much as you do
GUnit50fun 1 year ago
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Unique style, cool stuff
GUnit50fun 1 year ago
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GUnit50fun 1 year ago
Dude that whole rap was a nursery rhyme... Work on your flow, but the beat was kind of cool. Put together your lyrics better but other than that atleast you have the skill to even rhyme LOL. Not impressed at all you won't make it big unless you make your lyrics more affective.
UNDERESTlMATED 1 year ago
this is amazing it sounds like you ssure put alot of effort into in:)keep it up
breebot99 1 year ago
Love it man!!!!!!!
MissLaurenB18 1 year ago
nice song put the download link!!
plateado98 1 year ago
thanks for sharing! i thought it's very impressive! keep it up!
EAGLE9able 1 year ago
Real talk
dpaulson777 1 year ago
the beat is very good, and your flow and lyrics are bomb.
songsterqua 1 year ago
yo i rap too, we should work together, check my page.
Dzone
Dzone5000 2 years ago
youve got sum sick lyrics
add a chorus and ull get bare ppl tryin to sign u
send me any new 1s
CompleteNutter177 2 years ago
Dude wow, that's actually really good! I think you could definately go pro at rappin if you really try! Dang haha I hope you stick wit this cuz u reaall good!!
~Amanda(:
ImitatingMyFather 2 years ago
nice job keep at it !! and keep me posted on your new shit
selfmadejon 2 years ago
thanks bro... i posted this new song "How Many More Days" if u wana chek it
-byron
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
Very nice.
BIGALDIECAST 2 years ago
its pretty tight, the beat its very interesting, and the lyrics are pretty cool. nice job.
tytebyte 2 years ago
soundin aite
its tight nice job
r8 it 4 starz m8 :)
kaz271 2 years ago
niceee, !
YuungMuula 2 years ago
NICE bro!!
TheChainsBoy 2 years ago
Thats pretty sick, might use it for one of my videos if thats
XILCwalkIX 2 years ago
daamn bro
where can i get d mp3??
thebestcoop14 2 years ago
4 star,pretty good
BLUEDEMON3596 2 years ago
the songs is good the intro its so longer 0:15 max to intro in this song its good man ^^
JefesDelBlocke 2 years ago
This is dope man.
MezzikMusic 2 years ago
I agree.. Like icp I can't stand but kmk is amazing
DirtyD0G1 2 years ago
You look them up?
DirtyD0G1 2 years ago
yeah bro i did,, . im not a big fan of psychedelic rap but i like how their bringing their perspective on life to music in a unique way
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
Look them up.. Good shit right there
DirtyD0G1 2 years ago
O ok. That's kool bro.. Have you heard of the kottonmouth kings?
DirtyD0G1 2 years ago
naa man ,,havent heard of them
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
What's collb bra?
DirtyD0G1 2 years ago
my bad.. i meant to write collab (collaboration) sorry lol
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
If I wanna collb?? What's that bra?
DirtyD0G1 2 years ago
Nice bro.. You black??? Just wondering.. If so you need some white trash with you aka me lol
DirtyD0G1 2 years ago
no bro i aint black lol,, if u wana collb im always ready bro
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago
loving this track mate
keep it up (y)
cglproductionz 2 years ago
nice like the others your going to go big kid dnt forget me lmao
EoVideos423 2 years ago
nice track, check me sometime
ash13x 2 years ago
NICE
peppyers 2 years ago
Sick dude.
TheMusicalBros 2 years ago
uve got talent mate
SwfcJosh1995 2 years ago
Absolutely amazin man, love this. keep it up.
LegendaryRap 2 years ago
thanks bro
RedChekRecordz 2 years ago