this was really good just try giving your self some room when recording, you want to be in an open space instead of a corner that way your hand movements and body language is seen. also when doin this monologue try to make it seem like your having a hard time understanding the whole washing you face and eating chocolate thing. the way u said it seemed more like you understood and was just giving the facts. a little more practice but you are definitely doing great. :D
Hi, I am an aspiring actress. If you would please give me some feedback on my first monologue (on my channel) I would really appreciate it. I would like to use the scene I did for an audition. Thank you!
You're not into the character and your voice makes the monologue terribly boring. The character is really upset and confused, you just sound like you're stating lines.
@MirandaDiPietro yeah, i kinda see what youre sayin, but i didnt want to over do it. i agree that it could use a little more emotion, but it should look natural.... it shouldnt be obvious that im acting.
@marshmallow0clouds Don't get me wrong, you did a fabulous job. Also, your eyes wander aimlessly. It's called a 'tick.' I do it, too! All the time :/ Tough habit to break.
I am doinga public service anouncemetn for a class. if i gave you hte lines would you record yourself doing it and of course i would give you credit and tell everyone to check out your channel. plaesee? you're super goood.
good job i did this too
Ahugesmile21 1 month ago
Where do u get ur monologues from? please message me back
BeautifulllyMe 1 month ago
this was really good just try giving your self some room when recording, you want to be in an open space instead of a corner that way your hand movements and body language is seen. also when doin this monologue try to make it seem like your having a hard time understanding the whole washing you face and eating chocolate thing. the way u said it seemed more like you understood and was just giving the facts. a little more practice but you are definitely doing great. :D
Aliqueen11 3 months ago
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Hi, I am an aspiring actress. If you would please give me some feedback on my first monologue (on my channel) I would really appreciate it. I would like to use the scene I did for an audition. Thank you!
MerlinaAzul9 4 months ago
Hey, this is really cool. I can totally relate to all the conflicting messages, lol, Do you think you could check out my monologue on my page?
MeganKonyndyk 4 months ago
i really liked it
pookielovesfashion 4 months ago
You're not into the character and your voice makes the monologue terribly boring. The character is really upset and confused, you just sound like you're stating lines.
MirandaDiPietro 5 months ago 3
@MirandaDiPietro yeah, i kinda see what youre sayin, but i didnt want to over do it. i agree that it could use a little more emotion, but it should look natural.... it shouldnt be obvious that im acting.
marshmallow0clouds 4 months ago
@marshmallow0clouds Don't get me wrong, you did a fabulous job. Also, your eyes wander aimlessly. It's called a 'tick.' I do it, too! All the time :/ Tough habit to break.
MirandaDiPietro 3 months ago
awesome!
TheAmericandragon95 6 months ago
I am doinga public service anouncemetn for a class. if i gave you hte lines would you record yourself doing it and of course i would give you credit and tell everyone to check out your channel. plaesee? you're super goood.
HoldOnToNow 11 months ago
@HoldOnToNow Suree! send me the lines and I will check it out :)
marshmallow0clouds 10 months ago
@marshmallow0clouds cab u send trhis monitloge to me
thebizwithiz 2 months ago
really good!!! not overdone!
dalooloo28 1 year ago
omg the best one i've seen of this kind so far!!!
MegaDreamer88 1 year ago
pRETTYY GOOD :) I ENJOYED WATCHING THIS :)
Jessieluv09 1 year ago
This is an awesome :}
well done ;]
Tumb up ;]
ThexMusicxLover 1 year ago
Well I am super glad! Can't wait!
ihhmgirl 1 year ago
Awesome but yea it's really good(; I took classes and did the monologue a sticky situation, look it up! It's a good one you should perform it!
ihhmgirl 1 year ago
@ihhmgirl yeahh! i looked it up and it looks really good! i am soo going to perform it :))
marshmallow0clouds 1 year ago
Amazing! Do you take classes?
ihhmgirl 1 year ago
@ihhmgirl yeahh i took a drama class at my school for a semester, but then i moved :(...but i am starting again son! yyayayya
marshmallow0clouds 1 year ago
@marshmallow0clouds Awesome Reel!! You need to post your talents on HollywoodNextStar
HollywoodNextStar 6 months ago
i did this one too CHECK IT OUT ON MY CHANNEL
Nicolesings123 1 year ago