this is a game,that really makes you think about things,i am playing it now,and as an adult,i dont think a kid should play this,all in all,this is the best game i have ever played in a long time
It's blatantly obvious you're reading from something. Did you even write it? You don't sound very familiar with it. You don't sound like you even read it through once before recording. Try reading aloud whatever is written at least twice before you record, that way you're not stumbling over words and being audibly confused at the wording of certain phrases. Also, if you didn't already do this, try typing it instead of hand writing it. Then you won't be bothered by poor hand writing.
Dude! Can you choose what levels you want to play? So lets say I want to go to the 4th circle of hell, can I go there by level select on main menu? or is it like God of War where you play through it then start over from the beginning when you beat it?
Decent review, but it could benefit a lot if your worked on your speech. Often times your voice sounded dull, unconfident, or too much like you were reading it from the screen. Some minor improvements and this review would actually be quite professional. 4/5
Pretty good review, very nice detail. Doesn't look like a game I'd want to pick up, though.
BTW Just a suggestion, try making your voice seem more joyous. It's boring to hear a reviewer talk like he doesn't want to review the game. Not saying that I don't think you'd want to review the game, but just try to act like you normally would.
Yeahm I love this game and I wanted to review it so much <333 yeah thats the only problem I think I have when it comes to reviews cause me I mostly like to sound serious when im reviewing it but I see what you mean though
I should act more like myself and I mean that as in more joyous in the reviews so next time I will do that. Thanks for the critque.
Yes and if you cant understand what I say I have the script in the description box :D (H)
So serious lol =P [Good review]
Dragzilla66XL 5 months ago
atmossssspheere. are you reading someone elses review?
gregorymwishart 6 months ago
this is a game,that really makes you think about things,i am playing it now,and as an adult,i dont think a kid should play this,all in all,this is the best game i have ever played in a long time
brawyn777 1 year ago
This game has some of the best artwork and imagery of anything out there. Zeno Clash is another great one, but I absolutely love this game.
Thanks for the review
toolshuggah 1 year ago
Finally,someone sees the game like I do.
tttrrrist 1 year ago
haha i didnt see the ending coming
PlanBrider100 1 year ago
It's blatantly obvious you're reading from something. Did you even write it? You don't sound very familiar with it. You don't sound like you even read it through once before recording. Try reading aloud whatever is written at least twice before you record, that way you're not stumbling over words and being audibly confused at the wording of certain phrases. Also, if you didn't already do this, try typing it instead of hand writing it. Then you won't be bothered by poor hand writing.
Noahsebb88 1 year ago
@Noahsebb88
I think he just has speech problems. It's really annoying though.
Sprotret 1 year ago
Dude! Can you choose what levels you want to play? So lets say I want to go to the 4th circle of hell, can I go there by level select on main menu? or is it like God of War where you play through it then start over from the beginning when you beat it?
metalhead7369 2 years ago
Decent review, but it could benefit a lot if your worked on your speech. Often times your voice sounded dull, unconfident, or too much like you were reading it from the screen. Some minor improvements and this review would actually be quite professional. 4/5
LegendaryBlade 2 years ago
I agree with gamingsean.
zeldajunkielol2 2 years ago
Pretty good review, very nice detail. Doesn't look like a game I'd want to pick up, though.
BTW Just a suggestion, try making your voice seem more joyous. It's boring to hear a reviewer talk like he doesn't want to review the game. Not saying that I don't think you'd want to review the game, but just try to act like you normally would.
MrGamingsean 2 years ago
@MrGamingsean
Yeahm I love this game and I wanted to review it so much <333 yeah thats the only problem I think I have when it comes to reviews cause me I mostly like to sound serious when im reviewing it but I see what you mean though
I should act more like myself and I mean that as in more joyous in the reviews so next time I will do that. Thanks for the critque.
Yes and if you cant understand what I say I have the script in the description box :D (H)
TheSweetKnight 2 years ago