All the negative tools commenting are either failures as musicians and are jealous they cannot write songs, or they have no musical knowledge what so ever!
First :Even if I don't listen to this kind of music usually I listenned to yours 5 or 6 times today and yesterday.. It is nice, really. Keep working in this voice sound, it's unusual but sounds good;
Second : With much respect, You're cute. We all know it helps in art industry.
Third : I can hear every day some much less telented artist beeing signed.. Work hard, make other tracks maybe sometimes more pop to get out of amber, use all the social networks and everything that could help you.
i think it is a beautiful song and i like the echo it adds another demention to your vocals.i don't really know much about the music industry but this is good start i think you need to start somewhere. great song love your voice keep going
i really love your voice. it's so unique and special in it's own way. i'm not usually a fan of this kind of music, but I really love this song. Listening to this with headphones is so beautiful. The guitar on each side, with your voice in the centre, it's amazing. it really is.
Hey Soph, how things have changed from the good ol' days of mr jones' year 9 music class! Congrats on your success, you have an amazing voice (always have) and the song is beautiful :) Oh and the other day at work I saw you on the 'face of australia' posters - looks great :) Keep going, I have no doubt you'll be a household name someday :) All the best x
Here's some more things you should look at: 1. Write original guitar parts that aren't taken from 'Under the Bridge' by the Chilli Peppers 2. Don't write singing parts that copy the guitar line 3. Don't expect fans from X Factor to swallow whatever you do, especially poorly written 'originals'. Just my opinion. But you've definitely ripped off Under the Bridge. I liked you on X Factor, and your covers, and thats probably where you should stay??? We have some fantastic covers bars in Melbourne
@mastersonline13 Hi, thanks for the feedback. Whilst I appreciate it, I think some of your comments were a bit negative. I went & checked out your profile.. seems you only joined youtube yesterday & you haven't done anything but comment on my video.. Who are you? I can see that there is one second of the guitar that sounds similar to 'Under the Bridge', however this can be changed & the rest of the song has a completely different chord progression and can stand on it's own without this.
@sophiemaymetcalfe I had to rejoin today as i got locked out. I am a massive fan of Xfactor and I like to keep up with contestant's movements after. Why put up songs if you only expect positivity?
@mastersonline13 Hey masteronline13 I don't think Sophie only expects positive feedback but she probably expects constructive criticism not inflammatory attention seeking statements. 1. The song as a whole is nothing like under the bridge. The starting 3 notes sound like the intro of under the bridge granted but the rest is nothing like it. As Soph said that is easy to change and something she took on board. 2. Don't write vocal parts that follow the guitar. Who made this rule and why?
@mastersonline13 3. Don't expect people to swallow poorly written songs. When did Sophie ever say that is what she expected? This is your assumption and shows your ignorance more than anything. You are suggesting that Sophie give up on writing originals and do covers in Melbourne based on this one song and your opinion? This comment is simply designed to hurt Sophie and has nothing to do with honest feedback. Why do you feel you need to make comments like this and as Soph said who are you?
@mastersonline13 so whats the reason for getting locked out of your account? she doesnt expect positivity, she expects some respect and not to bag out her song for no reason when she worked hard on it. RESPECT.
@mastersonline13 i like ur opinion just be nice about it dont be so rude! i like the song!!! just because she uses the music from another song dosent mean u have to be mean about it!?!?!?! u know what i mean? have u heard Miranda Lamberts song ceroscene she basically used the music in the back round from a Steve Urcle song so u know where i am going?
@mastersonline13 Dude, there is the slightest bit of resemblance at the beginning of the piece, give it a rest. If the music of one musician resembles another musician’s music it generally means that person has a high regard for the piece, even if they don’t mean to show it. Writing a piece of music is something not many people can truly master and I applaud this girl for giving it a shot and succeeding.
Hey Sophie I'm not being an ass here cause this song is really good as a whole there a just a couple things I think you should look at (only my opinion remember). I think you should have a ~2sec pause between "you'll make it through" & the start of the chorus (start chorus ~2:10 instead of 2:08). I would prefer the chorus without the echo (just seems a little too strong imo), and I think you should only repeat it twice (i.e. omit 2nd & 3rd repeat @2:23->2:52 but keep 1st & 4th repeats).
@mcxandio hey there, thankyou for the feedback! as said above in the info - the song isn't completed - it's still a work in progress, but just wanted to upload it so people could get a taste of what I have been doing :). Thanks for the tips/thoughts! x
loved it :D amazing song!
zoeroxmysoxinabox 1 week ago
im here to appreciate good music. i subscribed your voice is beautiful.
bbkingblues77 3 weeks ago
Hey Sophie I honestly think this is awesome!
All the negative tools commenting are either failures as musicians and are jealous they cannot write songs, or they have no musical knowledge what so ever!
keep up the good work! ;)
TheJamesgadd 3 weeks ago
Yes, I put this song under one of my favorite playlists... I love it.
jaybreezy339 4 weeks ago
that one dislike is justin bieber o_O
kuens806 4 weeks ago
Sophe this is amazing is this really your first original!!! Masteronlines just jealous cos he/she sounds like fingernails on a chalk board :-P.
Abux89 1 month ago
like
ztefa14 1 month ago
amazin voice bb
SuperMenestrello 2 months ago
First :Even if I don't listen to this kind of music usually I listenned to yours 5 or 6 times today and yesterday.. It is nice, really. Keep working in this voice sound, it's unusual but sounds good;
Second : With much respect, You're cute. We all know it helps in art industry.
Third : I can hear every day some much less telented artist beeing signed.. Work hard, make other tracks maybe sometimes more pop to get out of amber, use all the social networks and everything that could help you.
virgile387 2 months ago
i think it is a beautiful song and i like the echo it adds another demention to your vocals.i don't really know much about the music industry but this is good start i think you need to start somewhere. great song love your voice keep going
nathangreen24 2 months ago
i really love your voice. it's so unique and special in it's own way. i'm not usually a fan of this kind of music, but I really love this song. Listening to this with headphones is so beautiful. The guitar on each side, with your voice in the centre, it's amazing. it really is.
Ryuzah 2 months ago
It sounds extremely good for a "raw song". You're definelty on the right track :) This acoustic style really fits your voice.
nelson79fonseca 2 months ago
Sounds great soph :)
Ps. errh "why put up songs of you only expect positivity?" i have a question.. Why comment if your only going to be negitive?
caseyraecheatle 3 months ago 3
Hey Soph, how things have changed from the good ol' days of mr jones' year 9 music class! Congrats on your success, you have an amazing voice (always have) and the song is beautiful :) Oh and the other day at work I saw you on the 'face of australia' posters - looks great :) Keep going, I have no doubt you'll be a household name someday :) All the best x
kaylee3lizabeth 3 months ago
well done i lovee this song. its different and fresh ..
hope it comes out on itunes haah :)
emmmagrace95 3 months ago
I absolutely adore this song! Well done and keep going strong! Went to school with you also, aha.
(:
Meggegga 3 months ago in playlist More videos from sophiemaymetcalfe
i went to school with you! hope you've been well. x
KenmeriCaptain 3 months ago
I was really, really impressed by this Sophie :)
It's also really catchy - was in my head all night!
Congratulations on your progress, and good luck! x
ameeliyahh 3 months ago
Here's some more things you should look at: 1. Write original guitar parts that aren't taken from 'Under the Bridge' by the Chilli Peppers 2. Don't write singing parts that copy the guitar line 3. Don't expect fans from X Factor to swallow whatever you do, especially poorly written 'originals'. Just my opinion. But you've definitely ripped off Under the Bridge. I liked you on X Factor, and your covers, and thats probably where you should stay??? We have some fantastic covers bars in Melbourne
mastersonline13 3 months ago
@mastersonline13 Hi, thanks for the feedback. Whilst I appreciate it, I think some of your comments were a bit negative. I went & checked out your profile.. seems you only joined youtube yesterday & you haven't done anything but comment on my video.. Who are you? I can see that there is one second of the guitar that sounds similar to 'Under the Bridge', however this can be changed & the rest of the song has a completely different chord progression and can stand on it's own without this.
sophiemaymetcalfe 3 months ago 20
@sophiemaymetcalfe I had to rejoin today as i got locked out. I am a massive fan of Xfactor and I like to keep up with contestant's movements after. Why put up songs if you only expect positivity?
mastersonline13 3 months ago
@mastersonline13 Hey masteronline13 I don't think Sophie only expects positive feedback but she probably expects constructive criticism not inflammatory attention seeking statements. 1. The song as a whole is nothing like under the bridge. The starting 3 notes sound like the intro of under the bridge granted but the rest is nothing like it. As Soph said that is easy to change and something she took on board. 2. Don't write vocal parts that follow the guitar. Who made this rule and why?
chemetcalfeable 3 months ago
@mastersonline13 3. Don't expect people to swallow poorly written songs. When did Sophie ever say that is what she expected? This is your assumption and shows your ignorance more than anything. You are suggesting that Sophie give up on writing originals and do covers in Melbourne based on this one song and your opinion? This comment is simply designed to hurt Sophie and has nothing to do with honest feedback. Why do you feel you need to make comments like this and as Soph said who are you?
chemetcalfeable 3 months ago
@mastersonline13 so whats the reason for getting locked out of your account? she doesnt expect positivity, she expects some respect and not to bag out her song for no reason when she worked hard on it. RESPECT.
Stompdowner 3 months ago
@mastersonline13 i like ur opinion just be nice about it dont be so rude! i like the song!!! just because she uses the music from another song dosent mean u have to be mean about it!?!?!?! u know what i mean? have u heard Miranda Lamberts song ceroscene she basically used the music in the back round from a Steve Urcle song so u know where i am going?
peanutbutterlove12 2 months ago
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pattyjohnmarlin 1 month ago
@mastersonline13 Dude, there is the slightest bit of resemblance at the beginning of the piece, give it a rest. If the music of one musician resembles another musician’s music it generally means that person has a high regard for the piece, even if they don’t mean to show it. Writing a piece of music is something not many people can truly master and I applaud this girl for giving it a shot and succeeding.
pattyjohnmarlin 1 month ago
Hey Sophie I'm not being an ass here cause this song is really good as a whole there a just a couple things I think you should look at (only my opinion remember). I think you should have a ~2sec pause between "you'll make it through" & the start of the chorus (start chorus ~2:10 instead of 2:08). I would prefer the chorus without the echo (just seems a little too strong imo), and I think you should only repeat it twice (i.e. omit 2nd & 3rd repeat @2:23->2:52 but keep 1st & 4th repeats).
mcxandio 3 months ago
@mcxandio but yeah the lyrics and instruments and singing are all really good it's just those small couple of things to change and it'll be great!
mcxandio 3 months ago
@mcxandio Thanks alot - your feedback is much appreciated, and I agree with a couple of your points!
sophiemaymetcalfe 3 months ago
@mcxandio hey there, thankyou for the feedback! as said above in the info - the song isn't completed - it's still a work in progress, but just wanted to upload it so people could get a taste of what I have been doing :). Thanks for the tips/thoughts! x
sophiemaymetcalfe 3 months ago
@sophiemaymetcalfe hey thank you! Just wondering, which points did you agree with?
mcxandio 1 month ago
beautiful song, beautiful voice, beautiful girl! you are so talented!
riaxxoo 3 months ago
Well done Soph, it's truly amazing!
mssmashpit 3 months ago
Amazing Sophie,
The lyrics are beautiful & you sing with so much emotion.
Great job.
Xx
AnnaHunni1990 3 months ago
Another great song, well done Sophie :)
Stompdowner 3 months ago