Not really my thing, but I respect that this is good. Nice flow, nice beat.
My advise, too many artists rap about money, girls ect ect. Try mixing up something deeper, something that means something more? But yeah, you got talent bro :)
what is ur issue people he trying and in all honesty he hasnt done that much of a bad job! all u that fucking hater think he a joke u try it then send me ya video! i can garunte it will be worthy of rude tube or summin! and effect keep it going man
that's pretty good, but I feel somethink missing to be good enough. Beat cool, but not power onough. Try make with normal piano, or mandolin, not chorus at start. Then when u start sing at 0:22 Try to add probably some violin in 8/8 on your main beat 4/4 in few part of song like 1:31, mute chorus ogran and make violin beat at the same rhythm. It should be good to make other beat like Big L "Put on it" added reggee beat.
@madfootballkid Ohh then wtf is cleaning out my closet, not afraid, no love, love the way u lie, what are they about money huh no and u think u cool now tht ur a pot head well guess what u have no life nd ppl tht do drugs have nothing too look forward too
good song manneee but its all about who you know no adays hope you get spotted its like classified check em out belvive me hes good opend fer snoop nd dww but still aint famous
ur good bro...better than some of the rappers now a days..but next time amp up ur bass a little bit ok..im not critisizing or anything..i cant even spell critisize but keep up the good work
you sent me a message to check this rap out and i wanna say it was really good and this is coming from a person who hate mant stream rap good job man your keeping it real
THATS WHATS UP BRO..SOUNDS REAL GOOD..KEEP THAT SHIT COMING HOMIE..U SENT ME A MESSAGE TO CHECK IT OUT..GOOD WORK ...ILL SUBSCRIBE TO SHOW MY SUPPORT..IF U WANT DO THE SAME ...M.O.B...
this is a pretty sick song , check out my bro A-Jayy his youtube channel is , " AJayyOfficialChannel" check out his; singles, freestyles, and remix's , .
Hell yeah :)
HerbsMyHealing 2 weeks ago
cool man, u know how to get it straight
dsixpackv 2 months ago
fuk haters dude.. this dude knows what he's doing.. hit me up bro
TheShifter326 3 months ago
arow
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somepass1 4 months ago
Get it. (: I'll share it on facebook so more people see it. (:
SuperGirllSwagg 4 months ago
that's nice dude.
whitedxknight 6 months ago
This Is Good Dude, Im Suprised. Make Another Song
myamicalehandkiah 7 months ago
@myamicalehandkiah i just got done building a studio ill be puttin out tracks and music videos out soon. so stay on the look out!
creativevizions 6 months ago
@creativevizions Alright Thanks !
myamicalehandkiah 6 months ago
Not bad
virus4698 7 months ago
Serius man
AndersonBoi1997 8 months ago
its good but like @Garland11101 said "Try mixing up something deeper" theres to much of that flower rap these days
mango5ful 8 months ago
Not really my thing, but I respect that this is good. Nice flow, nice beat.
My advise, too many artists rap about money, girls ect ect. Try mixing up something deeper, something that means something more? But yeah, you got talent bro :)
Garland11101 8 months ago
eres tu el que canta??? lo haces jodidamente bien cabronzo rapeas muy bien
n2a3p6 10 months ago
not bad, youngsta
puffinchronic420 10 months ago
nice flow homeboy, keep it real, no posin. your coming up great job on this song bro..
dsv513 11 months ago
awesome song
housyrnd 11 months ago
Great!!!!!!!!
KKINGvsALL 1 year ago
you got a tight flow and a good voice but the music i dont know. i wasnt feeling the music yo.
starlitprod 1 year ago
this sounded horible try again but not soo blaahhh
01234567899844 1 year ago
hey i liked it not bad:)
msstephany96 1 year ago
EVERYONE NEEDS TO READ "DECODED" BY JAY-Z.. THEN YOU'LL KNOW HOW TO LISTEN TO THIS SHIT - EFFECT
creativevizions 1 year ago
ncie doing good
justionb111 1 year ago
not good
gonzike 1 year ago
72 people cant get it straight
nicolasgarney 1 year ago 2
what is ur issue people he trying and in all honesty he hasnt done that much of a bad job! all u that fucking hater think he a joke u try it then send me ya video! i can garunte it will be worthy of rude tube or summin! and effect keep it going man
pwrr2 1 year ago
thats wussup.
jasmineiskeen 1 year ago
ahohhhhhh the next eminem
rarediamond68 1 year ago
this is my nigga
butmokey1 1 year ago
Good shit !!
Khalifa901 1 year ago
well done m8 ;)
4200badbooty 1 year ago
nice real good i like it
tamika60 1 year ago
big up nice shit
wilcoolmen 1 year ago
definitely an idea here. but executed wrong. better luck next time. good luck.
teamprov13 1 year ago
danm this is fucking sweeeeet. Awesome and true sick potential. Keep going dude.
thecooestlguyever 1 year ago
hey dis beat slaps can i cash you out for it get at me let me know i need a colabo i like ya style lil brah
SKATEBOARDZBITCH!!!!
shortcutdosha 1 year ago
damn ure good dont stop and keep going
maicodw 1 year ago
its a good song but it dosent have that extra somethin that all good songs have
but keep it up u are good
mynameisorre 1 year ago
I Love How The Chubby Cup Cake Boy Is The 1st Suggestion On The Side XD
L3G1TxCAP 1 year ago 9
yeah its pretty coo homie
avery336 1 year ago
shit this is nice!!!
partykart 1 year ago
yeahh.......... nice good work!!!!!!!!!!
Tirtisnij 1 year ago
Not bad, still beats the shit on the radio. Lil "Gay" Wayne sickens me.
anthrax1991 1 year ago
Good job :]
Carter794 1 year ago
jebać firme !
alisonangel1990 1 year ago
ckillin ma nigga
Bloodz4LyfeZ 1 year ago
good shit and if you live in cali fuck wit wiz next time he is over there
SwaggKiddJay 1 year ago
@SwaggKiddJay Wish i could!
creativevizions 1 year ago
@creativevizions I like U mayn!
You sound good and U spit it smoothly too.
Best I've heard today...
(I heard 10 new guys today!)
Keep it comin strong bruthuh.
One Love.
Kitty from the City
funkateerkitty 1 year ago
yeah man you aint bad that's sick!
DeepBoyzz 1 year ago
You're pretty good. I haven't heard this same song before like the other guy said, but I have heard similar. Either way, you're still pretty good.
Emphaysez 1 year ago
Go hard boii! Dats whats up right der
BlakeCanRaplolz 1 year ago
yea this is gay by the way....
cmonbabeh 1 year ago
@cmonbabeh dude hes not dat bad bet u cant rap for shit bich stop haitin mother fuker!
msstephany96 1 year ago
@msstephany96 u mad?
cmonbabeh 1 year ago
@cmonbabeh noo hahaha
msstephany96 1 year ago
not bad:D
Azocksx 1 year ago
this dudes OK nothing more nothing less
TheEmcee1 1 year ago
that's pretty good, but I feel somethink missing to be good enough. Beat cool, but not power onough. Try make with normal piano, or mandolin, not chorus at start. Then when u start sing at 0:22 Try to add probably some violin in 8/8 on your main beat 4/4 in few part of song like 1:31, mute chorus ogran and make violin beat at the same rhythm. It should be good to make other beat like Big L "Put on it" added reggee beat.
Greetings!
BountyBudolarka 1 year ago
not bad
sexiichikas254 1 year ago
ait ait this is nice...
xpro117 1 year ago
I would love to blaze a blunt and freestyle with this kid..
ryanbeasst 1 year ago
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jakkaify 1 year ago
To be honest nahh man i represent Grime this is wannabe gangsta nigga shit its out bro try a good beats though i would look more into that.
jakkaify 1 year ago
Its alright,U just need a fresh as beat,get a producer cuz dat beat is wack!!
GrApHikStERxLOwKs 1 year ago
u made this ?! damn, its niice man!
DrummerDigre 1 year ago
pretty good
manbeast508 1 year ago
this is good
airsoftsniper3 1 year ago
whack!
TheSwagga187 1 year ago
@madfootballkid well money dosent buy a girl that loves you and a family
urielx134 1 year ago
@madfootballkid what i want to know is when the fuck did i ask u how old u were and u probably live ina cockroach apartment ur self
urielx134 1 year ago
nice work. but i think the Beat needs to b clearer and harder, it's too soft for a rap song, try to work on da music little more and Good Luck.
VampireBMW 1 year ago
@madfootballkid Ohh then wtf is cleaning out my closet, not afraid, no love, love the way u lie, what are they about money huh no and u think u cool now tht ur a pot head well guess what u have no life nd ppl tht do drugs have nothing too look forward too
urielx134 1 year ago
bad ass
TheRafik1998 1 year ago
good song manneee but its all about who you know no adays hope you get spotted its like classified check em out belvive me hes good opend fer snoop nd dww but still aint famous
h0ckeyfan08 1 year ago
better than some lil wayne songs ive heard. keep it up, you can make it big.
imthetank3 1 year ago
Not bad fool, keep at it
Ninja5810 1 year ago
same old shit
MyOnlyLoveMusic 1 year ago
ok i see you doing ya thang keep up the good/hard work
georgiafinestpeach 1 year ago
not my style...
Metalwrestling 1 year ago
good shit
moehejja 1 year ago
ur good bro...better than some of the rappers now a days..but next time amp up ur bass a little bit ok..im not critisizing or anything..i cant even spell critisize but keep up the good work
Rag123qweasdzxc 1 year ago
Your alright...I was gonna ignore your message. I'd advise not sending those, because that is how you get people NOT to watch.
PeytonIsAgelessAngel 1 year ago 8
@PeytonIsAgelessAngel Only way to get people to watch
creativevizions 1 year ago 3
@creativevizions I always ignore those messages, but then i was like "Why the fuck not", and this is talent :D
MrQuantaK 1 year ago
@PeytonIsAgelessAngel iwas gonna do the same. and at first i thought it sucks.... then i favorited it lol.
movielord911 1 year ago
@madfootballkid dood there all good in there own way y r u so dumb and u never answered me do u actually listen to the lyrics of eminem
urielx134 1 year ago
nice,good work and keep doig this
luanteixeira1995hotm 1 year ago
I LIKE IT ;D
famaga40 1 year ago
@madfootballkid The only gangsta thing Wayne ever did was shoot himself in the god damn foot...
MrQuantaK 1 year ago
ive heard this same song same lyrics about 2 years ago
did u rigth this lyrics then tried to rap this shit?
hochoa14 1 year ago
@hochoa14 Yeah that's defiantly a fairy tail...
creativevizions 1 year ago 2
nice beat.
movielord911 1 year ago
Good stuff !!!! Possitive of course
ManFanUtd 1 year ago
This has been flagged as spam show
dont sing about shit that you have never done
amir199440 1 year ago
@amir199440 Name one fucking thing i havn't done or you think i havn't done that i said in this song..
creativevizions 1 year ago
@madfootballkid You know what? fuck you.
And for Effect, It's nice keep on going!
033Jeroen 1 year ago
got this vid in my inbox but its sounds good man keep it up
haagsegestoorde 1 year ago
the lyerics suk but i like the beet
mrchuchu95 1 year ago
Hm this sounds pretty damn good man!
Joeri12 1 year ago
its aight,
keep going braa.
EazyE275 1 year ago
You rap like a mexican rapper
CR7burstlimit 1 year ago
not bad
bobdewild 1 year ago
not gunna lie, this shit sounds pretty nice
bio90901 1 year ago
you suck at rapping
masterdelrap 1 year ago
@masterdelrap This nigga actually got hot shit so shut the fucc up
hooch800 1 year ago
Hottt son
hooch800 1 year ago
@madfootballkid lol u really dont listen to the words in his songs do you
urielx134 1 year ago
This reminds me of some hard old school bay shit, you a smart ass youngster fam
GSphinx33 1 year ago
You did good man! You're lucky I even watched this, but probs! <3
MysticDreamer1337 1 year ago
good job (:
bboyfabolous1994 1 year ago
thats good for a whit boy!!
Syyooxx98 1 year ago
very good men! respect from COLOMBIA!
TheDesparche 1 year ago
good song homie!
SCRAPPYSSBLVD13 1 year ago
ooooo shit its the next eminem....XD
TheMultikelvin 1 year ago
its good
aluisa25 1 year ago
you actually did good.
RockJay2NayMe 1 year ago
you urgently need a new producer and ghostwriter
SZS0001 1 year ago
i dont listen to rap sorry
terrol1212 1 year ago
I DONT KNOW HOMEY THATS NOT THAT GOOD BUT KEEP YO HEAD UP N TRY TO GET BETTER
NIVHERSHKO 1 year ago
nice
edgarred22 1 year ago
not quite real hip hop home boy
AIRSO97 1 year ago
sounds nice any more like this
TheDEm0ng0d 1 year ago
gud :)
SkittlezPrinzzez 1 year ago
nice dude, keep em coming! dope flow, greets from germany... ;)
PhilippeFreestyle 1 year ago
@madfootballkid Eminem was never racist? x D
MrQuantaK 1 year ago
it like a sound of 80-s rap, but i like it,, nice for training in gym , driving, nice!!!
edgaruat 1 year ago
Cool Song .....I Like That Song
GANGSTA100089 1 year ago
I like it...
2MUCHGAMEBIZ 1 year ago
ok,ok, its aight whiteboi! keeep it going gee
S0L0W21 1 year ago
Ayeee dis fye a/f
inlovewithmyself9090 1 year ago
thats whats up i like yo music
lalogtr34 1 year ago
This is not your talent never send me a vid to watch again
leafsrule08 1 year ago
nigga u weak
lordkash2212 1 year ago
@lordkash2212 Wheres ur shit at nigga, quit hating if u aint got nothing to compare with
pupentaco 1 year ago 7
this fucking sux
thegameshady1 1 year ago
sick
LoveOrBall 1 year ago
Damn(;
HerbsMyHealing 1 year ago
good shit.
newbz2k8 1 year ago
Love seein young white thugs kill tha shit good job fam
304SOULJUH 1 year ago
good shit g
ernesto7373 1 year ago
yea whiteboy rappers puttin it down haha i can spit 2 g
SoCalAries 1 year ago
you sent me a message to check this rap out and i wanna say it was really good and this is coming from a person who hate mant stream rap good job man your keeping it real
fighter6142 1 year ago
beat is pretty sick
mrsteve1338 1 year ago
THATS WHATS UP BRO..SOUNDS REAL GOOD..KEEP THAT SHIT COMING HOMIE..U SENT ME A MESSAGE TO CHECK IT OUT..GOOD WORK ...ILL SUBSCRIBE TO SHOW MY SUPPORT..IF U WANT DO THE SAME ...M.O.B...
MrMrSaldana 1 year ago
if that was u ?! Then , its very well done yo!!
199252208 1 year ago
nice ;D
manhunt9mexia 1 year ago
what program and shit do you use? cause im trying to get some shit to record and stuff
mikeeyy44freak 1 year ago
shits hot
d34m0nh3 1 year ago
Definitely have something there. Keep working and someday it could end up in a deal.
TheInfiniteRs 1 year ago
dude u stink more than my armpits quit enough quit enough
nicolasgarney 1 year ago
Ur awesome:D
hardstylerproxie 1 year ago
Ilike the beat and were u trying to go with the lyrics niiiiice sun
CflowNocomp617 1 year ago
damn bro shit is killer ima have 2 blaze 1 to dis
CottonMouthGamers 1 year ago
if you are fo real that kid you great
ganja95 1 year ago
Ficou louko mane som firmeza..
vitorricardo22 1 year ago
@madfootballkid Ever heard about "Eminem"?
Yeah, so shut up
MrQuantaK 1 year ago
Nice work
Sikk beat as well
TripleBNation 1 year ago
fair play bro. u made a nice track here. thanx for sharing
Dec2012omg 1 year ago
kinda sounds like a mexican rapper(voice wise)...haha. pretty cool
olide07 1 year ago
Dude this is aite keep it coming nigga
modernwarfare2259 1 year ago
Sorry mate your shit
mombushkahn 1 year ago
You kinda remind me off The Game, really good stuff : D
Just dont go down that wannabe gangster road, and no RnB
MrQuantaK 1 year ago
not bad not bad at all
Sk1pasz 1 year ago
This is VERY good! Nice job! :D
desssyann 1 year ago
nice
MrWillem1996 1 year ago
Sick boy..it´s good ! Peace
PDNegativ 1 year ago
You're the first person who's inboxed me that actually sounds good! your gonna get far mate, trust.
Fir3Dir3 1 year ago
Hell yeah. Hulk smash.
Nah but for real this is a good creation homie. Keep doing it
Mattchode 1 year ago
its nice
styrmireli 1 year ago
Kinda stupid, won't lie
CCMAR 1 year ago
nice,, i like it alot :D keep it up
eritreahagerey 1 year ago
yo dudee ....it sounds good!! =D
moonblue66 1 year ago
yo dudee ....it sounds good!! =D
moonblue66 1 year ago
this is a pretty sick song , check out my bro A-Jayy his youtube channel is , " AJayyOfficialChannel" check out his; singles, freestyles, and remix's , .
TheMRPRICEY 1 year ago
Nice one i have to give you that
oczkop1 1 year ago
this goes hard.. fresh as hell bro.. subbed
Joshfcf 1 year ago
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