Added: 1 year ago
From: creativevizions
Views: 8,437
Sort by time | Sort by thread (beta)

Link to this comment:

Share to:

All Comments (744)

Sign In or Sign Up now to post a comment!
  • Hell yeah :)

  • cool man, u know how to get it straight

  • fuk haters dude.. this dude knows what he's doing.. hit me up bro

  • arow

    l

    l

    l

  • Get it. (: I'll share it on facebook so more people see it. (:

  • that's nice dude.

  • This Is Good Dude, Im Suprised. Make Another Song

  • @myamicalehandkiah i just got done building a studio ill be puttin out tracks and music videos out soon. so stay on the look out!

  • @creativevizions Alright Thanks !

  • Not  bad

  • Serius man

    

  • its good but like @Garland11101 said "Try mixing up something deeper" theres to much of that flower rap these days

  • Not really my thing, but I respect that this is good. Nice flow, nice beat.

    My advise, too many artists rap about money, girls ect ect. Try mixing up something deeper, something that means something more? But yeah, you got talent bro :)

  • eres tu el que canta??? lo haces jodidamente bien cabronzo rapeas muy bien

  • not bad, youngsta

  • nice flow homeboy, keep it real, no posin. your coming up great job on this song bro..

  • awesome song

  • Great!!!!!!!!

  • you got a tight flow and a good voice but the music i dont know. i wasnt feeling the music yo.

  • this sounded horible try again but not soo blaahhh

  • hey i liked it not bad:)

  • EVERYONE NEEDS TO READ "DECODED" BY JAY-Z.. THEN YOU'LL KNOW HOW TO LISTEN TO THIS SHIT - EFFECT

  • ncie doing good

  • not good

  • 72 people cant get it straight

  • what is ur issue people he trying and in all honesty he hasnt done that much of a bad job! all u that fucking hater think he a joke u try it then send me ya video! i can garunte it will be worthy of rude tube or summin! and effect keep it going man

  • thats wussup.

  • ahohhhhhh the next eminem

    

  • this is my nigga

  • Good shit !!

  • well done m8 ;)

  • nice real good i like it

  • big up nice shit

  • definitely an idea here. but executed wrong. better luck next time. good luck.

  • danm this is fucking sweeeeet. Awesome and true sick potential. Keep going dude.

  • hey dis beat slaps can i cash you out for it get at me let me know i need a colabo i like ya style lil brah

    SKATEBOARDZBITCH!!!!

  • damn ure good dont stop and keep going

  • its a good song but it dosent have that extra somethin that all good songs have

    but keep it up u are good

  • I Love How The Chubby Cup Cake Boy Is The 1st Suggestion On The Side XD

  • yeah its pretty coo homie

  • shit this is nice!!!

  • yeahh.......... nice good work!!!!!!!!!!

  • Not bad, still beats the shit on the radio. Lil "Gay" Wayne sickens me.

  • Good job :]

  • jebać firme !

  • ckillin ma nigga

    

  • good shit and if you live in cali fuck wit wiz next time he is over there

  • @SwaggKiddJay Wish i could!

  • @creativevizions I like U mayn!

    You sound good and U spit it smoothly too.

    Best I've heard today...

    (I heard 10 new guys today!)

    Keep it comin strong bruthuh.

    One Love.

    Kitty from the City

  • yeah man you aint bad that's sick!

  • You're pretty good. I haven't heard this same song before like the other guy said, but I have heard similar. Either way, you're still pretty good.

  • Go hard boii! Dats whats up right der

  • yea this is gay by the way....

  • @cmonbabeh dude hes not dat bad bet u cant rap for shit bich stop haitin mother fuker!

  • @msstephany96 u mad?

  • @cmonbabeh noo hahaha

  • not bad:D

  • this dudes OK nothing more nothing less

  • that's pretty good, but I feel somethink missing to be good enough. Beat cool, but not power onough. Try make with normal piano, or mandolin, not chorus at start. Then when u start sing at 0:22 Try to add probably some violin in 8/8 on your main beat 4/4 in few part of song like 1:31, mute chorus ogran and make violin beat at the same rhythm. It should be good to make other beat like Big L "Put on it" added reggee beat.

    Greetings!

  • not bad

  • ait ait this is nice...

  • I would love to blaze a blunt and freestyle with this kid..

  • Comment removed

  • To be honest nahh man i represent Grime this is wannabe gangsta nigga shit its out bro try a good beats though i would look more into that.

  • Its alright,U just need a fresh as beat,get a producer cuz dat beat is wack!!

  • u made this ?! damn, its niice man!

  • pretty good

  • this is good

  • whack!

  • @madfootballkid well money dosent buy a girl that loves you and a family

  • @madfootballkid what i want to know is when the fuck did i ask u how old u were and u probably live ina cockroach apartment ur self

  • nice work. but i think the Beat needs to b clearer and harder, it's too soft for a rap song, try to work on da music little more and Good Luck.

  • @madfootballkid Ohh then wtf is cleaning out my closet, not afraid, no love, love the way u lie, what are they about money huh no and u think u cool now tht ur a pot head well guess what u have no life nd ppl tht do drugs have nothing too look forward too

  • bad ass

  • good song manneee but its all about who you know no adays hope you get spotted its like classified check em out belvive me hes good opend fer snoop nd dww but still aint famous

  • better than some lil wayne songs ive heard. keep it up, you can make it big.

  • Not bad fool, keep at it

  • same old shit

  • ok i see you doing ya thang keep up the good/hard work

  • not my style...

  • good shit

  • ur good bro...better than some of the rappers now a days..but next time amp up ur bass a little bit ok..im not critisizing or anything..i cant even spell critisize but keep up the good work

  • Your alright...I was gonna ignore your message. I'd advise not sending those, because that is how you get people NOT to watch.

  • @PeytonIsAgelessAngel Only way to get people to watch

  • @creativevizions I always ignore those messages, but then i was like "Why the fuck not", and this is talent :D

  • @PeytonIsAgelessAngel iwas gonna do the same. and at first i thought it sucks.... then i favorited it lol.

  • @madfootballkid dood there all good in there own way y r u so dumb and u never answered me do u actually listen to the lyrics of eminem

  • nice,good work and keep doig this

  • I LIKE IT ;D

  • @madfootballkid The only gangsta thing Wayne ever did was shoot himself in the god damn foot...

  • ive heard this same song same lyrics about 2 years ago

    did u rigth this lyrics then tried to rap this shit?

  • @hochoa14 Yeah that's defiantly a fairy tail...

  • nice beat.

  • Good stuff !!!! Possitive of course

  • @amir199440 Name one fucking thing i havn't done or you think i havn't done that i said in this song..

  • @madfootballkid You know what? fuck you.

    And for Effect, It's nice keep on going!

  • got this vid in my inbox but its sounds good man keep it up

  • the lyerics suk but i like the beet

  • Hm this sounds pretty damn good man!

  • its aight,

    keep going braa.

  • You rap like a mexican rapper

  • not bad

  • not gunna lie, this shit sounds pretty nice

  • you suck at rapping

  • @masterdelrap This nigga actually got hot shit so shut the fucc up

  • Hottt son

  • @madfootballkid lol u really dont listen to the words in his songs do you

  • This reminds me of some hard old school bay shit, you a smart ass youngster fam

  • You did good man! You're lucky I even watched this, but probs! <3

  • good job (:

  • thats good for a whit boy!!

  • very good men! respect from COLOMBIA!

  • good song homie!

  • ooooo shit its the next eminem....XD

  • its good 

  • you actually did good.

  • you urgently need a new producer and ghostwriter

  • i dont listen to rap sorry

  • I DONT KNOW HOMEY THATS NOT THAT GOOD BUT KEEP YO HEAD UP N TRY TO GET BETTER

  • nice

  • not quite real hip hop home boy

  • sounds nice any more like this

  • gud :)

  • nice dude, keep em coming! dope flow, greets from germany... ;)

  • @madfootballkid Eminem was never racist? x D

  • it like a sound of 80-s rap, but i like it,, nice for training in gym , driving, nice!!!

  • Cool Song .....I Like That Song 

  • I like it...

  • ok,ok, its aight whiteboi! keeep it going gee

  • Ayeee dis fye a/f

  • thats whats up i like yo music

  • This is not your talent never send me a vid to watch again

  • nigga u weak

  • @lordkash2212 Wheres ur shit at nigga, quit hating if u aint got nothing to compare with

  • this fucking sux

  • sick

  • Damn(;

  • good shit.

  • Love seein young white thugs kill tha shit good job fam

  • good shit g

  • yea whiteboy rappers puttin it down haha i can spit 2 g

  • you sent me a message to check this rap out and i wanna say it was really good and this is coming from a person who hate mant stream rap good job man your keeping it real

  • beat is pretty sick

  • THATS WHATS UP BRO..SOUNDS REAL GOOD..KEEP THAT SHIT COMING HOMIE..U SENT ME A MESSAGE TO CHECK IT OUT..GOOD WORK ...ILL SUBSCRIBE TO SHOW MY SUPPORT..IF U WANT DO THE SAME ...M.O.B...

  • if that was u ?! Then , its very well done yo!!

  • nice ;D

  • what program and shit do you use? cause im trying to get some shit to record and stuff

  • shits hot

  • Definitely have something there. Keep working and someday it could end up in a deal.

  • dude u stink more than my armpits quit enough quit enough

  • Ur awesome:D

  • Ilike the beat and were u trying to go with the lyrics niiiiice sun

  • damn bro shit is killer ima have 2 blaze 1 to dis

  • if you are fo real that kid you great

  • Ficou louko mane som firmeza..

  • @madfootballkid Ever heard about "Eminem"?

    Yeah, so shut up

  • Nice work

    Sikk beat as well

  • fair play bro. u made a nice track here. thanx for sharing

  • kinda sounds like a mexican rapper(voice wise)...haha. pretty cool

  • Dude this is aite keep it coming nigga

  • Sorry mate your shit

  • You kinda remind me off The Game, really good stuff : D

    Just dont go down that wannabe gangster road, and no RnB

  • not bad not bad at all

  • This is VERY good! Nice job! :D

  • nice

  • Sick boy..it´s good ! Peace

  • You're the first person who's inboxed me that actually sounds good! your gonna get far mate, trust.

  • Hell yeah. Hulk smash.

    Nah but for real this is a good creation homie. Keep doing it

  • its nice

  • Kinda stupid, won't lie

  • nice,, i like it alot :D keep it up

  • yo dudee ....it sounds good!! =D

  • yo dudee ....it sounds good!! =D

  • this is a pretty sick song , check out my bro A-Jayy his youtube channel is , " AJayyOfficialChannel" check out his; singles, freestyles, and remix's , .

  • Nice one i have to give you that

  • this goes hard.. fresh as hell bro.. subbed

  • Comment removed