Run Away--A Short Story Narration

[miservlosom]

this is some deep shit

[Niksa123456789]

this isn't a story more like an informal essay

[69ThomasGirl]

Wow this made me really kind of turned on

[meowjar]

Nice.

[FireWizard1000]

its so putifle. how did you come up with this?

[LordChimpKing]

bullshit

[FlameAmigo619]

@LordChimpKing thats it? LOL

[sassynekobabygurl]

....wow zak thats real deep hun =( that brings a trea to my eye... =,( good job though on it. i didnt know you were the type of guy that would be in a poetry club. thats pretty cool =) well good job.

<3 Jewel

[The1Returner]

Sincere.

[smoers06]

Wow........

That's deep dude. Great job

[BlackthornStudios]

This was freakin beautiful man, nicely done.

[scifiguy9000]

Have you got a full version of this on a fan fiction website?

I really like to continue reading/hear the rest.

[harleythehedgehog8]

this sounds like sonic

[missoliverandblossom]

Wow. Pretty impressive

[TheOdst219]

1ST. THIS ME IN A NUT SHELL