so you dont like relapse OR recovery? I understand the second one, but relapse was dope as fuck slim shady style, with ridiculous rhyming. why not diss encore for its weak rhyming. whack ass mofo. that said, the song is purrty good lyrically. you can't rap tho
@joelbhartzell - I'm playing a character...I personally didn't care for Relapse all that much, no. But I did like Recovery. In this song I only mentioned him collaborating with pop stars on Recovery. I didn't say anything about the album sucking. As for the lyrics and me rapping, I agree. But it was just something out of fun I decided to do.
@superyoshigriffen - First verse I did a few months before. Then I kinda pushed finishing it off to the side cause I got distracted with other things. Then one night I decided to finish it and I wrote the 2nd and 3rd verse that night. Recorded it the next day and uploaded it.
@notahumanbeing20 - Just playing a character, man. I had to choose between Relapse & Encore since those are the two albums that people hate on the most. And I actually liked Encore more than Relapse. So I chose to bash Relapse lol. Thanks for the comment.
@IxxFLAWLESSxxI well...i don't really record or make songs...i just simply write , write and write and try to figure out things that rhyme together , so it's more like a short poem , i didn't want it to be long :) but if it's combined with a beat it could be a song :p if you want i could send it to you and you tell me your opinion :)
@IxxFLAWLESSxxI yhhh sure, i started like couple of years ago, and i wrote about different things before i had the idea to create Matthew's story :) what about you?? are you into writing? and if yes how did you start?
@FirasTeinz - Honestly, I was just bored one night and felt like writing lol. So I started writing about just whatever was happening in my life. Then I got the idea to write Matthew from an underground rapper. Stan is one of my favorite Eminem songs, so that was another reason why I decided to try and write Matthew. I just started maybe 3 or 4 months ago.
@FirasTeinz - Yeah, that;s basically what I do too. I just like writing. More so of what is going on around me, this was the first time I tried writing a fictional story.
@killkiz - That would also be me. I recorded it with a PS3EYE, that's why the quality is extremely shitty. If I would of used an actual PC mic, it might of sounded better, but oh well.
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IxxFLAWLESSxxI 3 weeks ago
Hahaha this is nice
pushin08 2 months ago
Its not fake read the damn description, THIS GUY WROTE IT. Anyway, your a good writer, hope to see more.
trippy555sk8er 3 months ago 5
I actually really like it, very cleverly done :)
frooglepop13579 3 months ago
took sum issh but good
tlmony 3 months ago
This is fake
HarleyPHI 3 months ago
@HarleyPHI - Somebody's an idiot...
IxxFLAWLESSxxI 3 months ago 5
so you dont like relapse OR recovery? I understand the second one, but relapse was dope as fuck slim shady style, with ridiculous rhyming. why not diss encore for its weak rhyming. whack ass mofo. that said, the song is purrty good lyrically. you can't rap tho
joelbhartzell 4 months ago
@joelbhartzell - I'm playing a character...I personally didn't care for Relapse all that much, no. But I did like Recovery. In this song I only mentioned him collaborating with pop stars on Recovery. I didn't say anything about the album sucking. As for the lyrics and me rapping, I agree. But it was just something out of fun I decided to do.
IxxFLAWLESSxxI 4 months ago
Great song bro but you should get more hyped you sound bored lol keep it up
TheDudethatsawesome 4 months ago
Nice going, keep up the great work :3
ehviews3 4 months ago
its good, i just dont like the way it sounds. lyrically its cool, but the quality just ruins it. sorry.
TriadBeatZ 4 months ago
Third verse is awesome!
crusaidfft 4 months ago
Was he really voted the best for top 50 rappers?
Worrible 4 months ago
i really like the last verse but the first verse is way to short
deweyjamm15 4 months ago
@johnsells84 - Windows Movie Maker. It comes with Windows. Don't use it, it blows camel balls.
IxxFLAWLESSxxI 4 months ago
@superyoshigriffen - First verse I did a few months before. Then I kinda pushed finishing it off to the side cause I got distracted with other things. Then one night I decided to finish it and I wrote the 2nd and 3rd verse that night. Recorded it the next day and uploaded it.
IxxFLAWLESSxxI 4 months ago
Can anybody point out the references in verse3? Comment below :)
IxxFLAWLESSxxI 4 months ago
Hey man... relapse was dope. Good song tho
notahumanbeing20 4 months ago 2
@notahumanbeing20 - Just playing a character, man. I had to choose between Relapse & Encore since those are the two albums that people hate on the most. And I actually liked Encore more than Relapse. So I chose to bash Relapse lol. Thanks for the comment.
IxxFLAWLESSxxI 4 months ago
dude, i love it, how do you only have 1000 views? this should have millions of views
waynestatewarriors 5 months ago 7
I thumbed up just for the girl in tha beginning singing lol.... :)
BLUE1SKY1DOVE 5 months ago 4
@BLUE1SKY1DOVE - That's Dido.
IxxFLAWLESSxxI 4 months ago 2
@BLUE1SKY1DOVE haha she's called dido! i like her because of the song :)
FirasTeinz 4 months ago
This is good! i wrote my side of Matthew letter two :D but i haven' t put it as a song yet...
FirasTeinz 5 months ago
@FirasTeinz - That's cool. You gonna record it?
IxxFLAWLESSxxI 4 months ago
@IxxFLAWLESSxxI well...i don't really record or make songs...i just simply write , write and write and try to figure out things that rhyme together , so it's more like a short poem , i didn't want it to be long :) but if it's combined with a beat it could be a song :p if you want i could send it to you and you tell me your opinion :)
ps: it took me a couple hours to finish it lol
FirasTeinz 4 months ago
@FirasTeinz - Yeah, send me it.
IxxFLAWLESSxxI 4 months ago
@IxxFLAWLESSxxI okk i will. probably in my free time ^^
FirasTeinz 4 months ago
@FirasTeinz - Alright, that's cool. Have you wrote anything else besides just a Matthew verse?
IxxFLAWLESSxxI 4 months ago
@IxxFLAWLESSxxI yhhh sure, i started like couple of years ago, and i wrote about different things before i had the idea to create Matthew's story :) what about you?? are you into writing? and if yes how did you start?
FirasTeinz 4 months ago
@FirasTeinz - Honestly, I was just bored one night and felt like writing lol. So I started writing about just whatever was happening in my life. Then I got the idea to write Matthew from an underground rapper. Stan is one of my favorite Eminem songs, so that was another reason why I decided to try and write Matthew. I just started maybe 3 or 4 months ago.
IxxFLAWLESSxxI 4 months ago
@IxxFLAWLESSxxI well...i don't really record or make songs...i just simply write , write and write a
FirasTeinz 4 months ago
@FirasTeinz - Yeah, that;s basically what I do too. I just like writing. More so of what is going on around me, this was the first time I tried writing a fictional story.
IxxFLAWLESSxxI 4 months ago
did you make that? its not that baD
killkiz 6 months ago
@killkiz - Yup. I wrote it. The 2nd and 3rd verse I did in one night.
IxxFLAWLESSxxI 6 months ago
@IxxFLAWLESSxxI who sung it?
killkiz 6 months ago
@killkiz - That would also be me. I recorded it with a PS3EYE, that's why the quality is extremely shitty. If I would of used an actual PC mic, it might of sounded better, but oh well.
IxxFLAWLESSxxI 6 months ago