Brilliant! Excellent narration. Excellent story. Excellent score. The ending was a bit confusing as to whose foot it was on - I'm assuming the brother's. You need to visually or audibly connect something in the room or on the person earlier in the film that is easily identifiable at the climax of the story (when he finds the red sock). For instance, if the brother snores in a strange way, have that same snore going on as the boy enters the room. But really, everything else was excellent.
Andy sounds like He has never made a production before:) It's common for those who have made few productions of their won to be over critical of others work.
Well done. I would recommend that you keep your story moving. The jokes dragged, and so weren't as funny as they could have been. All the elements were great, they just should have been closer together.
I think the ending would have been stronger if we had more context of where the sock was. I went back and looked again, but I can't figure out whose feet those are. And thus there's no moment of connection; the "a-ha" moment is missing.
Keep working at making movies. You have skills! -Luke
Nice video but I didn't see all the security items, like the guitar, Cheerios, 720 degree pan, or one line of dialogue. Did I miss something in the directions? Was it OK to have only 3 of 7?
Brilliant! Excellent narration. Excellent story. Excellent score. The ending was a bit confusing as to whose foot it was on - I'm assuming the brother's. You need to visually or audibly connect something in the room or on the person earlier in the film that is easily identifiable at the climax of the story (when he finds the red sock). For instance, if the brother snores in a strange way, have that same snore going on as the boy enters the room. But really, everything else was excellent.
davesommers2 1 year ago
where r u?
PInOyEJ97 2 years ago
Andy sounds like He has never made a production before:) It's common for those who have made few productions of their won to be over critical of others work.
I though it was cut and fun.
MrDavid197900 3 years ago
No story.
Boring.
How old are you?
andytheturnip 3 years ago
Well done. I would recommend that you keep your story moving. The jokes dragged, and so weren't as funny as they could have been. All the elements were great, they just should have been closer together.
I think the ending would have been stronger if we had more context of where the sock was. I went back and looked again, but I can't figure out whose feet those are. And thus there's no moment of connection; the "a-ha" moment is missing.
Keep working at making movies. You have skills! -Luke
TomySky 4 years ago
Very well done!
dieselknudt 4 years ago 2
Oh, I'm bad. Re-read the directions about only needing 3 of 7 security items. Must be a guy thing...
CallWaitingParade 4 years ago
Nice video but I didn't see all the security items, like the guitar, Cheerios, 720 degree pan, or one line of dialogue. Did I miss something in the directions? Was it OK to have only 3 of 7?
CallWaitingParade 4 years ago
Well done one winning!!! Great job!
ArtisticArts 4 years ago
Congrats on winning!
alexh237 4 years ago
Hey guys, congrats on winning the competition! Don't spend the all the $500 at one place. :)
DanielGardner 4 years ago
Great video.
LaurieBluedorn 4 years ago
I like this one. Quirky. It reminds me of Wes Anderson. Nice job!
abandonfilms 4 years ago
Congratulations!
fam3c 4 years ago 2
Great Video,
OctavioAdams 4 years ago 2
Nice framing and camera movement- Congratulations!
KreedMelmob 4 years ago 2
Great job! Congratulations on winning! :)
Adelineness 4 years ago 2
Very well done! Congrats on the win!!
wilkinson4925 4 years ago 2
Beautifully shot, nicely acted, great use of narration, great music, very good color, every shot in focus...great job!
editproductions 4 years ago 3
Love it! So neat! Very well done, I really like the cinematography, and the script too, and... all of it! :) Can't beat that narrator! ;)
Trestle2Treasure 4 years ago 2