it made me freaking cry and the keys r getting blury. u r a really good writer and very discriptive.(idk if i spelled it right but r very talened!!!!)
i cant believe i am crying from a fanfic! they are just that good! i think you should post part 2 like right now before i have a heart attack! go go go! i love these!
Hey since when is joe so sensitive i thought that was nick?!
94TheTeens96 2 years ago
He has brown eyes, but good stories, good stories.
ariajerra 2 years ago
awesome story but nick has big brown eyes!!!!!
musickutie129 2 years ago
ah nick has brown eyes n
you made me cry omg
i hope they make up
;-(
venezuelanchickita 2 years ago
errr.. Nick has brown eyes.. big puppy dog chocolate brown eyes with chocolate brown culry hair.. *goes into a day dream*
JLO6173 3 years ago
he has brown eyes not blue
miley33456 3 years ago
im really crying
wow
i lve these
bri4461 3 years ago
hahah nick has brown eyes
nnataliev 3 years ago
omg nooo thts so sad!!!
luckeyduck101 3 years ago
it made me freaking cry and the keys r getting blury. u r a really good writer and very discriptive.(idk if i spelled it right but r very talened!!!!)
crprincess0lovejonas 3 years ago
wow. i actually cried. just thinking
of nick being hurt like that..just made
me cry. wow , you're a really good writer.
this is amazing. :')
xojoejonasloverx3 3 years ago
Uh hate 2 break it 2 ya doll face but uh Nick Jonas has brown eyes
temprice167 3 years ago
i cant believe i am crying from a fanfic! they are just that good! i think you should post part 2 like right now before i have a heart attack! go go go! i love these!
ilovenickjonas719 3 years ago 4
awh, haha.
thank you.
syderin123 3 years ago
ahhahaha
princessasserc 3 years ago
cant wait!!!!! but you said nick has blue eyes that got me a little confussed????but it was sssooo sad!!!
hopecyrus 3 years ago
hahha..dont worry its just a fanfic..they can change anything..haha...but to tell u the truth at 1st it makes me confused...haha..
crazyoverjb 3 years ago
NO!!
I almost cried. this is so sad :(
CxC101 3 years ago
i cried... so sad i cant believe it:( nooooooo this cannot be happening...why???
CRYSTALandRACHEL 3 years ago
awh haha,
just wait and see for part 2 =]
syderin123 3 years ago
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omg first comment!!!!
CRYSTALandRACHEL 3 years ago