Haiku101

[jiniton]

poison in bottles,

root of folly and immorality,

destroys character.

my first haiku. please comment me on how i can improve.

thank you Ms. Hans

[25cutebunny]

Gentle swimming swan,

gliding swiftly across the,

shiny sunny pond.

[artsyamerican]

@25cutebunny Great job! Syllables are correct and I like the use of expressive language. 

[Guitar360Dude]

Eagles spread their wings

From the morn to the evening

They kill in silence

[artsyamerican]

@Guitar360Dude Good job! Try adding more descriptive language. Paint a picture with your Haiku. : )

[PALOMITA694]

EAGLE FYLING HIGH

CAN YOU REACH THE MOON AND SUN

EAGLE IN THE SKY.

Should Haikus have a title?

THANK YOU FOR YOUR VIDEO. 

[artsyamerican]

@PALOMITA694 Good job. Most Haiku's I've seen have a title. Try adding more descriptive language. Paint a picture with your Haiku. : )

[flowergirlqt]

wow thanks this helped me alot lol im terrible at haiku's!