OH man.. THAT WAS SOO AWSUM! U kno, I busted out laughin, when Kelly was teaching Lashelle 2 back flip, cuz I thought u siad,,"Kelly landed safely on his FACE!" HA HA! I was like, how could he land safely on his face?! But then I had 2 rewind it, and it said feet! HA HA! Man... 2 mad me and my friend can't b in it! They all taken! lolz But that was XCLUSIVE! Keep it up!
That waz the Best INTRO I ever Read..smart how u named it sperate worlds!! very smart i would have nrevr came up with and idea like dat!! I LOVED IT!!
Forever my butt! lol
JacqueenaLaLaLa 11 months ago
me too flygirls64 it's just too good lol
PanaminaProductions 2 years ago
im readin this for the second time
flygirls64 2 years ago
hAhA I lOv3 bRyAn
pArT LoL.!
ilovb5andu 3 years ago
I LOVE IT GURLIE!!!
fasayah95allday 3 years ago
OH man.. THAT WAS SOO AWSUM! U kno, I busted out laughin, when Kelly was teaching Lashelle 2 back flip, cuz I thought u siad,,"Kelly landed safely on his FACE!" HA HA! I was like, how could he land safely on his face?! But then I had 2 rewind it, and it said feet! HA HA! Man... 2 mad me and my friend can't b in it! They all taken! lolz But that was XCLUSIVE! Keep it up!
jenice13 3 years ago 2
i want 2 c da nxt 1!!dis ish is gud!!;D
MaKia845 3 years ago
wow that was awsome. i want to read more. i can't wait.
ricangodess52897 3 years ago
Ohhh-Emmm-Geee.
You have 2 hurry up wit' the Chapter 1. It's gettin good already
khortniluvzB5 3 years ago
that was good cant wait for the chapter 1!
breedingwifey123 3 years ago
tht was awesome dang gurl u got talent
B5loved 3 years ago
eeeeeeee i loved it gurl hurry up wit the first chapter!!!!
mszbreeding 3 years ago
wow i really luv it
kaslab1 3 years ago
i loved it and I love the title this story should be real interesting
MissKellyBreeding196 3 years ago
Of cOurse Carnell Knows Gurls Lol!
Hahaha Titlinq His Shades!
I Can Imagine That!
Wha-Wha Watchu tryna Say Patrick!?
lOl .Carnell Got Movees..= ]
Oh & I guess Bryan & Asia was Mad Yung..
ShOOt cause i knOw if she & Him was
Older they wOulda Made Out! Hehe WhO
Could say nO Ta Him Besides a Straight Boy..=X
MiXedBicHYADIGG 3 years ago
Maybee Not even a straiqht Boy.He`dd Turn!
..But i KnOw Bryan wOuldnt ask a bOy
AnywhOOs.
MiXedBicHYADIGG 3 years ago
oooo.thiz iz really good!!!!i lik it!!!
B5BABY4EVER33 3 years ago
that was good
B5SHAWTY09 3 years ago
That waz the Best INTRO I ever Read..smart how u named it sperate worlds!! very smart i would have nrevr came up with and idea like dat!! I LOVED IT!!
BrYaNzBaByGurl4EvR 3 years ago 2
AWW...i LYK3 iT K33P iT UP...
MiNNi325 3 years ago
dang that was really good cant wait...
love,3min@
b5chic 3 years ago 2
hahaha Bryan this is really good
lacrossebabe6 3 years ago
that was real good keep goin
blackcherrypie3 3 years ago
wow bryan was hella young huh lmao
smartprincess101 3 years ago
kute!!!
b51wifey13245 3 years ago
omg that was funny keep it goin
Nellz1luva 3 years ago
i completely love the idea for this story
its something thats never been done before
i cant wait until you start the storyyy !!
NonoBabieex3 3 years ago