I guess I have no choice but to join your legion of fans. I like the twisted pathways the words took and the name of the poem goes so well with the writing. The black and white video presentation added light and shadow to the reading. I like this. It's as if I came to some stranger's house deck and they just started telling me things in riddles. Very cool.
Saadia has the rare ability to deliver excellent poetry in a way that makes the listener believe he/she is the only one experiencing the moment. Bravo!
Thank you very much for posting this as a vid reply - that is a high honor for me - and as I said before - you have a much sweeter smile than me... :p
Ah, Saadia my dear, this one is choice. You weave your audience into that very axis. Innuendo and touché in dangerous ambiguity. The games lovers play! How apt the title.
Oh, I love that ending, Saadia! How is it that two people often see their relationship in a completely different light, like two sides of the same coin? Labyrinth is a great metaphor.
Captivated... truly every word has a static charge that seems to zap me a little on my right ear lobe. Not sure why the right but it gets tingly. 5 stars on thars.
Yeah, love that one. I like to keep a doggy dorr in my backdoor of abandon. It keeps me going in and out without ever having to open the door either way. Beautiful. (You can't help it, you're still beautiful!) Jeff
excellent
exesquire 2 years ago
I guess I have no choice but to join your legion of fans. I like the twisted pathways the words took and the name of the poem goes so well with the writing. The black and white video presentation added light and shadow to the reading. I like this. It's as if I came to some stranger's house deck and they just started telling me things in riddles. Very cool.
Nyhee7 2 years ago
Saadia has the rare ability to deliver excellent poetry in a way that makes the listener believe he/she is the only one experiencing the moment. Bravo!
dermaface 2 years ago
really nice.
newkirk915 2 years ago
wow thats really good :-)
Nigelcf 3 years ago
Complicated... who is this "he" who wishes to take tangled spaghetti wire and tangle it more? I think he needs a concussion. Or a simple discussion.
;=] Saadia... Saadia... sssaassaassaaadia... =
am listening to Phil Collins.. hehe..
CommentSense 3 years ago
A very tender piece.
Great job. Loved it.
:o)
smartbluecat 3 years ago
That voice.
dunskie 3 years ago
Very imaginative and thought provoking piece.
DavidRandallCurtis suggested I check out your work... I am glad he did so.
~ReeCee~
reeceegirl 3 years ago
Great poem and delivery :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
cool close!
nopoetsaloud 3 years ago
YOU ARE SO LOVELY NICE
jimmymccombs 3 years ago
Thank you very much for posting this as a vid reply - that is a high honor for me - and as I said before - you have a much sweeter smile than me... :p
DavidRandallCurtis 3 years ago
Ah, Saadia my dear, this one is choice. You weave your audience into that very axis. Innuendo and touché in dangerous ambiguity. The games lovers play! How apt the title.
harleynanda 3 years ago
What an excellent metaphor...I will forever be amazed at how your mind forms these "complicated" things into one 45 second sound bite!
Mellomel 3 years ago
Oh, I love that ending, Saadia! How is it that two people often see their relationship in a completely different light, like two sides of the same coin? Labyrinth is a great metaphor.
Tom
tjkoz22 3 years ago
Very lyrical ... love the sounds.
NewWarriorMan 3 years ago 2
awesome
wordface 3 years ago
One of yer best and that is saying a lot 5*
DavidRandallCurtis 3 years ago
great work.. i am enjoying your book and have decided which i will be reciting.
Hopefully next week i will have it up
Best
Proshka
Proshka 3 years ago 2
Captivated... truly every word has a static charge that seems to zap me a little on my right ear lobe. Not sure why the right but it gets tingly. 5 stars on thars.
sillysillytom 3 years ago
Yeah, love that one. I like to keep a doggy dorr in my backdoor of abandon. It keeps me going in and out without ever having to open the door either way. Beautiful. (You can't help it, you're still beautiful!) Jeff
hrumphga 3 years ago