boss goodwork....camera tilts must have been made unidorm...the work at 2:14sec and 2:18sec was amazing...its difficult to act for such scenes where imagination plays key role...i have a smal qsnt to u here..at the beginning of the film..why did u cut the scene sudenly when she was outside and showed like she was in??? except that..it was fantastic....waiting for ur future works...
-good fake out with the creature and elevator chime, or maybe it wasnt and the creature was there, but retreated b/c it somehow sensed the impending arrival of a bystander
-the guy turned his head w/o a sound from the creature and before she said "look out" ~1:58. make sure he turns after or as she is saying "look out" maybe even right before she speaks
-add some sort of sound to the creature as it moves toward the elevator door ~1:15. a distinct sound that the audience can associate w/ the creature. one that can serve as a cue to potentially frighten w/o sight of creature.
-acting ~1:21 was weak. and the whole interior of the elevator scene for that matter
-~1:38 entertain the idea of placing the camera further off to further establish the peril that this girl is in as she exits the elevator.
I probably said this before but the camera angles in the hall and elevator fit perfect with the tone of the video and accentuate the shooting location so, good eye.
hi dude
nice shot but iguess that shadow is looking artificial .... and nice efforts taken
santoshtherock 2 years ago
@santoshtherock
yeah. had to simplify some of the shots to finish rendering in a non-astronomical time. :D
thanks man :)
rahulnsm 2 years ago
boss goodwork....camera tilts must have been made unidorm...the work at 2:14sec and 2:18sec was amazing...its difficult to act for such scenes where imagination plays key role...i have a smal qsnt to u here..at the beginning of the film..why did u cut the scene sudenly when she was outside and showed like she was in??? except that..it was fantastic....waiting for ur future works...
rawikrishna 2 years ago
@rawikrishna
thanks boss :)
I was trying to create an eerie feel in the opening shot :D(the curvature of the lens keeps changing every time). obviously, it was unnoticeable...
rahulnsm 2 years ago
-good fake out with the creature and elevator chime, or maybe it wasnt and the creature was there, but retreated b/c it somehow sensed the impending arrival of a bystander
-the guy turned his head w/o a sound from the creature and before she said "look out" ~1:58. make sure he turns after or as she is saying "look out" maybe even right before she speaks
christiann2 2 years ago
-add some sort of sound to the creature as it moves toward the elevator door ~1:15. a distinct sound that the audience can associate w/ the creature. one that can serve as a cue to potentially frighten w/o sight of creature.
-acting ~1:21 was weak. and the whole interior of the elevator scene for that matter
-~1:38 entertain the idea of placing the camera further off to further establish the peril that this girl is in as she exits the elevator.
-good extreme low angle ~1:42 and shakiness
christiann2 2 years ago
-at the beginning, what's the purpose of cutting btw her outside and inside? might confuse some audience
-back to ~1:05
-nice peek around the corner ~1:04 and having her fall, but this could also be viewed as unoriginal/common/tried. but it still works.
-too many cuts during the elevator part, as mentioned before.
-key in on her frantically pushing the button, instead of maintaining the distance. Cut from a medium shot to a close up of her hand+button
christiann2 2 years ago
-smooth out the camera tilting at around 25sec
-good slow follow ~32sec
-nice cut to below her ~35sec
-solid cut back to original location of camera after bottle/trash
-a tad too much sound
-effective marriage of sound/zooming ~41sec
-have defined characters, not characatures. I know this is difficult with the time span of the film
-overall nice effective camera work, maintains the standard formal of a suspense/horror film
-more to come
christiann2 2 years ago
I probably said this before but the camera angles in the hall and elevator fit perfect with the tone of the video and accentuate the shooting location so, good eye.
redbandfilms 2 years ago