i thought it was very interesting. It was something that I couldn't play along with right away at first, but it seemed as if it was something that no one ever in the film industry has ever attempted! You guys should make this longer and go produce it. You will get lots of fans! Nice job Eddie!
So, stalker stalks pretty girl, girl is a writer. He tries to get personal with her, she reluctantly gives in. He shows up at her apartment, tells her the photos he's taken is 'art,' and that she needs him as much as he needs her? I don't really get that. The composition was good, the dialog was good, but the point of the film escapes me. Don't live in the city because you'll get stalked if you're a pretty woman?
that was excellent. for a short piece, you gave just the right amount of information, not opening any possible side plots but still having enough depth to the central one i feel as if the dialogue when Linda met her stalker at her apartment unnecessarily went in circles. also, I would have liked to see their relationship go on a bit further. the two seem as if they have so much more to offer each other. but I think Linda eventually closing the door on the stalker would be appropriate.
You have time to do this and you dont for the sonic film!?
Jorgerey24 2 months ago
@Jorgerey24 This was completed before "Sonic" was announced.
Daftman909 2 months ago
i thought it was very interesting. It was something that I couldn't play along with right away at first, but it seemed as if it was something that no one ever in the film industry has ever attempted! You guys should make this longer and go produce it. You will get lots of fans! Nice job Eddie!
ZionTheHedgehog1 8 months ago
So, stalker stalks pretty girl, girl is a writer. He tries to get personal with her, she reluctantly gives in. He shows up at her apartment, tells her the photos he's taken is 'art,' and that she needs him as much as he needs her? I don't really get that. The composition was good, the dialog was good, but the point of the film escapes me. Don't live in the city because you'll get stalked if you're a pretty woman?
JohnnyElsewhereTV 10 months ago
that was really good ed, keep up the good work
ibenez54 10 months ago
@ibenez54 Thanks!
Daftman909 10 months ago
that was excellent. for a short piece, you gave just the right amount of information, not opening any possible side plots but still having enough depth to the central one i feel as if the dialogue when Linda met her stalker at her apartment unnecessarily went in circles. also, I would have liked to see their relationship go on a bit further. the two seem as if they have so much more to offer each other. but I think Linda eventually closing the door on the stalker would be appropriate.
MitchYouCantScratch 10 months ago
Dang that guy is a creeper.
DavosMoon 10 months ago
Wow that was actullly very good now you have to make an ending
DimensionalMaster 10 months ago
DUN DUN DUN....
manfandan 10 months ago