soo soo good n your hot :P he he n bobbycamp101 wtf y you calling him a n im nt evan genna say it ya so rasist !! just coz hes betta than ya !!! soo gd dnt let anyone put ya down babe :D
This is a very good poem!!! I enjoyed it a lot. I also like how you are writing in the video while your voice is saying, "I wrote me a poem..." lol Good stuff, good stuff!!!
Im soooooooooo jealous! Great mines think alike! I gotta poem that I aint finish yet thats so simular, like the title & all & the vision of the video too, but ugh..... I got a video maker & don't even know how to use it, its like chinese to me! LOL. I wanna' edit my videos sooo ba but ugh, I don't know hoooow! :o[
lol Im not to good with the computer editing shit either! just search for tutorials on google thats how I learnd Im still learning how to do alot of stuff and thanks 4 checkin it out! u should finish that poem so I can hear it :)
this is really really good. you inspired me to start writing poetry again. i didnt think this video would have this affect on me. In that short 2:05 i thought about my life, i thought about now, the tomorrow the next day and my entire future. im truely inspired. 1 luv bro. HOLLA
:)! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT YOU MADE MY DAY!!!!!!! and Im glad you decided to take back up writing I myself dont know where I'd be without it take care now -PoeticRymes
You are very welcome. I enjoy watching and listening to your videos. You have a lot of talent for putting your voice and thoughts to positive use, and I am sure you will do well in life with whatever direction your poetry takes you.
Well you know I had to watch this twice because you know I got eye candy drunk at 0:51 through 0:56 so yeah. But I loved the message. Sometimes I think my journal is the only sanity I have in this world.
that was beautiful, keep writing!
spicyland83 4 months ago
Amazing ! :)
xXLaaPhreshXx 9 months ago
check out my poem and my music plz!!!
fatboychb 1 year ago
Thats some deep shit right there. loved it man keep goin ill add your myspace too! :) poet to poet!
BoxMyHeart 1 year ago
Nice :)
webkinzskatergirl45 1 year ago
That was inspirational
librarylover321 2 years ago
luv it
pushupful 2 years ago
Keep writing. Your writing will lead you to new and wonderful places.
Angelomello 2 years ago
can you privet mesage mehh coz your fit ;) thanx x
joeily567890 2 years ago
soo soo good n your hot :P he he n bobbycamp101 wtf y you calling him a n im nt evan genna say it ya so rasist !! just coz hes betta than ya !!! soo gd dnt let anyone put ya down babe :D
joeily567890 2 years ago
I like how you changed your voice with the words you were expressing.I too enjoy poetry.
grimbook 2 years ago
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I didn't know niggers could WRITE anyhting
bobbycamp101 2 years ago
so wen ar yhu gonna write another poem?
Jahmilla939 2 years ago
hot shyt!!!!!!!!!
cmalaysia12 2 years ago
Good work.
strawberrries 2 years ago
sir...yeah!
jirodgreene 2 years ago
This is a very good poem!!! I enjoyed it a lot. I also like how you are writing in the video while your voice is saying, "I wrote me a poem..." lol Good stuff, good stuff!!!
Check out my poem when time permits!
Destined4Greatness81 2 years ago
agreed very kewl
7StarsFromTheMoOn 2 years ago
Im soooooooooo jealous! Great mines think alike! I gotta poem that I aint finish yet thats so simular, like the title & all & the vision of the video too, but ugh..... I got a video maker & don't even know how to use it, its like chinese to me! LOL. I wanna' edit my videos sooo ba but ugh, I don't know hoooow! :o[
p8anut 2 years ago
lol Im not to good with the computer editing shit either! just search for tutorials on google thats how I learnd Im still learning how to do alot of stuff and thanks 4 checkin it out! u should finish that poem so I can hear it :)
YoWhatsThe411 2 years ago
DAMN! I feel it. I really do.
SetPhasersToStunn 2 years ago
ohh....my.....god...!!!!! tht inspired me to be a better person
Jahmilla939 2 years ago
that is it ama gonna write me a poem.. hope it cames as good tho ...
WarYaaWarrior 2 years ago
dat was dope man... express yourself... you remind me of a poet on here check her out... "p3anut" keep writin pimpin...
kidblackfoot 2 years ago
That was brilliant. The poem was awesome and the visuals fit perfectly.
~Calvin~
sfcalvinaz 3 years ago
this is really really good. you inspired me to start writing poetry again. i didnt think this video would have this affect on me. In that short 2:05 i thought about my life, i thought about now, the tomorrow the next day and my entire future. im truely inspired. 1 luv bro. HOLLA
Ariel215 3 years ago
:)! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT YOU MADE MY DAY!!!!!!! and Im glad you decided to take back up writing I myself dont know where I'd be without it take care now -PoeticRymes
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago
i'm proud...speechless
ANDUALEM17 3 years ago
aww thanks cuzzo!
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago
i like it bro i like it keep up the good work
ReccoCHS 3 years ago
thnks
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago
Loved it!!!! . . .what else is there 2 say . . .It was CrUciAL! 4real:D
BrownicanTwin 3 years ago
aww thnks
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago
That was really beautiful - keep at it man :)
FabledVerse 3 years ago
thanks so much!!! ireally enjoy watchin ya vids you need 2 come back ASAP!! lol :)
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago
thats nice
boyofmusicall 3 years ago
thanks man!
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago
:) lol thanks shyron!
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago
nice poet homie real nice.
Grasscone 3 years ago
thanks!
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago
nice
toyoyta34 3 years ago
thnks!
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago
nicee
JayJuBo 3 years ago
glad u liked it :)
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago
You truly are a poet.
jpmondell08 3 years ago
thanks so much tht truly means alot!
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago
You are very welcome. I enjoy watching and listening to your videos. You have a lot of talent for putting your voice and thoughts to positive use, and I am sure you will do well in life with whatever direction your poetry takes you.
jpmondell08 3 years ago
I loved the poem. It was moving. The visual and editing was on point!
MaKiNthaMoViE 3 years ago
glad u liked it :0
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago
Excellent! I loved it
jiatv 3 years ago
thanks!
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago
I love your work, bruh. Stay up!
AtlantaSistah 3 years ago
thanks! tht means so much and you take care 2 sistah!
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago
Well you know I had to watch this twice because you know I got eye candy drunk at 0:51 through 0:56 so yeah. But I loved the message. Sometimes I think my journal is the only sanity I have in this world.
SupportBIB 3 years ago
haha glad u feelin it ma and u so rite I feel tht way as well thats a subject Im going to talk about further in another vid be on the look out 4 it
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago
AMAZEING AMAZEING!!!!! I LOV YHAAA AND OMG IM FEELEN YOUR POEMS DEEP BOOOO keep up the excellent poetry!
much love
macmamas408
macmamas408 3 years ago
love ya 2 macmamas!!! and I'm so glad you enoy my work it means alot :)
YoWhatsThe411 3 years ago