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  • that was beautiful, keep writing!

  • Amazing ! :)

  • check out my poem and my music plz!!!

  • Thats some deep shit right there. loved it man keep goin ill add your myspace too! :) poet to poet!

  • Nice :)

  • That was inspirational

  • luv it

  • Keep writing. Your writing will lead you to new and wonderful places.

  • can you privet mesage mehh coz your fit ;) thanx x

  • soo soo good n your hot :P he he n bobbycamp101 wtf y you calling him a n im nt evan genna say it ya so rasist !! just coz hes betta than ya !!! soo gd dnt let anyone put ya down babe :D

  • I like how you changed your voice with the words you were expressing.I too enjoy poetry.

  • so wen ar yhu gonna write another poem?

  • hot shyt!!!!!!!!!

  • Good work.

  • sir...yeah!

  • This is a very good poem!!! I enjoyed it a lot. I also like how you are writing in the video while your voice is saying, "I wrote me a poem..." lol Good stuff, good stuff!!!

    Check out my poem when time permits!

  • agreed very kewl

  • Im soooooooooo jealous! Great mines think alike! I gotta poem that I aint finish yet thats so simular, like the title & all & the vision of the video too, but ugh..... I got a video maker & don't even know how to use it, its like chinese to me! LOL. I wanna' edit my videos sooo ba but ugh, I don't know hoooow! :o[

  • lol Im not to good with the computer editing shit either! just search for tutorials on google thats how I learnd Im still learning how to do alot of stuff and thanks 4 checkin it out! u should finish that poem so I can hear it :)

  • DAMN! I feel it. I really do.

  • ohh....my.....god...!!!!! tht inspired me to be a better person

  • that is it ama gonna write me a poem.. hope it cames as good tho ...

  • dat was dope man... express yourself... you remind me of a poet on here check her out... "p3anut" keep writin pimpin...

  • That was brilliant. The poem was awesome and the visuals fit perfectly.

    ~Calvin~

  • this is really really good. you inspired me to start writing poetry again. i didnt think this video would have this affect on me. In that short 2:05 i thought about my life, i thought about now, the tomorrow the next day and my entire future. im truely inspired. 1 luv bro. HOLLA

  • :)! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT YOU MADE MY DAY!!!!!!! and Im glad you decided to take back up writing I myself dont know where I'd be without it take care now -PoeticRymes

  • i'm proud...speechless

  • aww thanks cuzzo!

  • i like it bro i like it keep up the good work

  • thnks

  • Loved it!!!! . . .what else is there 2 say . . .It was CrUciAL! 4real:D

  • aww thnks

  • That was really beautiful - keep at it man :)

  • thanks so much!!! ireally enjoy watchin ya vids you need 2 come back ASAP!! lol :)

  • thats nice

  • thanks man!

  • :) lol thanks shyron!

  • nice poet homie real nice.

  • thanks!

  • nice

  • thnks!

  • nicee

  • glad u liked it :)

  • You truly are a poet.

  • thanks so much tht truly means alot!

  • You are very welcome. I enjoy watching and listening to your videos. You have a lot of talent for putting your voice and thoughts to positive use, and I am sure you will do well in life with whatever direction your poetry takes you.

  • I loved the poem. It was moving. The visual and editing was on point!

  • glad u liked it :0

  • Excellent! I loved it

  • thanks!

  • I love your work, bruh. Stay up!

  • thanks! tht means so much and you take care 2 sistah!

  • Well you know I had to watch this twice because you know I got eye candy drunk at 0:51 through 0:56 so yeah. But I loved the message. Sometimes I think my journal is the only sanity I have in this world.

  • haha glad u feelin it ma and u so rite I feel tht way as well thats a subject Im going to talk about further in another vid be on the look out 4 it

  • AMAZEING AMAZEING!!!!! I LOV YHAAA AND OMG IM FEELEN YOUR POEMS DEEP BOOOO keep up the excellent poetry!

    much love

    macmamas408

  • love ya 2 macmamas!!! and I'm so glad you enoy my work it means alot :)

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