Vlog 2: Poetry Corner

[lordkinetic]

What would be much more entertaining, would be if you sung a song wearing that santa hat.

1. Your poetry is incredibly pretentious.

2. I wish more people would use circumspect when it comes to poetry. When you write it down, it should be read. When you then speak it aloud, you're ruining the effect altogether.

That is all.

[Kimojuno]

I have broken your comment down and replied individually:

What would be much more entertaining, would be if you sung a song wearing that santa hat.

I'll think about it.

(broken down due to character limit)

[Kimojuno]

1. Your poetry is incredibly pretentious.

How? I clearly stat, and mean, that it is not about me or anyone in particular. Are you saying people do not hold celebrities (as I figure you meant that poem, since I don't see the first poem 'In Jesus' being classed as pretentious) as a whole different "class" of people? Look at how people follow celebrities around.

[Kimojuno]

2. I wish more people would use circumspect when it comes to poetry. When you write it down, it should be read. When you then speak it aloud, you're ruining the effect altogether.

Noted.

That is all.

Thanks for commenting. :)

[lordkinetic]

Didn't mean to come off as mean with that comment, just my raw criticisms!

You're hair and beard are looking delightfully wild :D

[Kimojuno]

I gotcha, and thanks. :D