Hey guys it's Richard Smith. Nice job guys for the first video! But, as with any project, it needs work. Jamarious, I see where u are going with the storyline, and making the conflict b/t different ppl very realistic. But the problem is, the acting around the conflicts have to be realistic also. 4 example, if Dorian and his girl (sorry!) are fighting, is Quenel's reaction realistic during that situation?
You've done something really good here, but you have to decide what you are going for...
o and richard i wanted to say just in case because i no my mom didnt no this either WERE NOT PLAYING OUR SELVES JUST USING OUR REAL NAMES. i no for her that made it make alot more since.
gonna be honest....this shit was kind of boring at points and the lighting was fucked up alot....the playing videogames scene was kind of funny though and when the guy was acting out a scene was funny....those really the only high points....and you guys need to act more natural...alot of the acting seems forced
i luv Quenel in the video game scene :)
animekohai 2 years ago
She's a doormat. I'd kick him to the curb.
pang5 2 years ago
that was a good one! thanks for the add!
kryshockey 2 years ago
no thank u for watching please keep watching the rest r alot better and easier to hear
TheSuburbsSeries 2 years ago
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Rikuluvsyukiko 2 years ago
not bad xD actually this is great
54spiritedwill54 3 years ago
thanks happy to hear u like the show keep watching lol
TheSuburbsSeries 3 years ago
this is so cool thanks for adding me let me subscribe
ajabrams95 3 years ago
no thank u so much for liking and giving the show a chance. keep watching trust me it only gets better from here.
TheSuburbsSeries 3 years ago
lol thanks it only gets better tell your friends and keep watching.
TheSuburbsSeries 3 years ago
Any chance you could put this in HD too?
Manyanga1985 3 years ago
I second that, love the drama already, 5/5 :)!
helzofdoom 3 years ago
it great!
partychick16 3 years ago 2
thanks keep watching
TheSuburbsSeries 3 years ago
lol.
I think I got the fact that you were just using your names.
I can't wait for episode 2.
Richier08 3 years ago
yay!!! its finally here!!!
oohtravie 3 years ago
ah Jam! I'm so proud - I know you've been working really hard and it's going to be great. I can't wait to see how it builds :)
gracefull1017 3 years ago 2
lol thanks alex did u see the part of us in the theme song lol killer
TheSuburbsSeries 3 years ago
hahah I did! It made me so happy! haha
gracefull1017 3 years ago 2
lol good thats what i was going for.
TheSuburbsSeries 3 years ago
yay! 1st video! Finally! It was great!!!
laurababy333 3 years ago 3
Hey guys it's Richard Smith. Nice job guys for the first video! But, as with any project, it needs work. Jamarious, I see where u are going with the storyline, and making the conflict b/t different ppl very realistic. But the problem is, the acting around the conflicts have to be realistic also. 4 example, if Dorian and his girl (sorry!) are fighting, is Quenel's reaction realistic during that situation?
You've done something really good here, but you have to decide what you are going for...
Richier08 3 years ago 2
Hey! I have a name, you know!
Manyanga1985 3 years ago
thanks richard for the comments o and with quenel's character he wanted to be dorian's yes man so it was the way it was meant to be lol.
TheSuburbsSeries 3 years ago
o and richard i wanted to say just in case because i no my mom didnt no this either WERE NOT PLAYING OUR SELVES JUST USING OUR REAL NAMES. i no for her that made it make alot more since.
TheSuburbsSeries 3 years ago
It is a good video.. but honeslty I'm kinda bored...
Blow something up just for fun
savryevans 3 years ago
keep watching and dont wait for anything to blow up lol well not this season
TheSuburbsSeries 3 years ago
wow not bad lol
reebop67 3 years ago 2
gonna be honest....this shit was kind of boring at points and the lighting was fucked up alot....the playing videogames scene was kind of funny though and when the guy was acting out a scene was funny....those really the only high points....and you guys need to act more natural...alot of the acting seems forced
ballarod00 3 years ago 3
Hahaha rod... But its the truth...
xIxB3xM3x 3 years ago
Nice
xIxB3xM3x 3 years ago
It Was Kinda Boring Tho
xIxB3xM3x 3 years ago
Yay! AMAZING! :D:D:D:D
Manyanga1985 3 years ago