My friend who was there with me also thought that your poem was great. We both like to dabble in poetry as well, although far less meaningful and thought provoking. I think the last poem of hers that I read was about Jello, and the last one I wrote was about my cat lol!
wait.. did you say a poem about jello... and cats?? let me read these things:P they might be amazing, who knows!!!!!! sounds pretty interesting! poetry's poetry aha
anyway do you have msn, facebook, email or anything? its just that I don't check my youtube that often!
u should turn this into a song :)
xxladylyricxx 2 years ago
People We Are The World
PeopleSearchIsHuge 3 years ago
nice dude let me hear more ...be smooth
colorblind89 3 years ago
Nice!
TheWeatherMan2012 3 years ago
this is very awesome indeeed.
gabberoonie 3 years ago
sick guy
plankton9779 3 years ago
Beautiful poem, you did a great job!
How long did it take you to write it?
sweetberry07 3 years ago
20 minutes maybe? ahah
patman2010 3 years ago
lol even better! You have talent:) ALl the best!
sweetberry07 3 years ago
WAITTT
your that incredibly attractive belly dancer that was at ONE WORLD right?!@?@?@?@?
patman2010 3 years ago
So much for my being anonymous lol.
*Blush* Yes I am, thank you!
My friend who was there with me also thought that your poem was great. We both like to dabble in poetry as well, although far less meaningful and thought provoking. I think the last poem of hers that I read was about Jello, and the last one I wrote was about my cat lol!
sweetberry07 3 years ago
anonymous? not from me! lol!
wait.. did you say a poem about jello... and cats?? let me read these things:P they might be amazing, who knows!!!!!! sounds pretty interesting! poetry's poetry aha
anyway do you have msn, facebook, email or anything? its just that I don't check my youtube that often!
-Patman
ps. thanks for the compliment about the poem:)
patman2010 3 years ago
(L)(thumbsup)
C:
MissThunder23 3 years ago
I LOVE YOU PAT!!!
such a good job
DirtyColdDanielle 3 years ago
Great peace of work. The world survives because of people like you...
Grow up to be a leader we all wants
The man of peace and not of war
Its so simple but difficult for many
To understand how it can be made
pbk0007 3 years ago
thank you so much!
patman2010 3 years ago
I loved it so much, that was so amazing. Never hear something like that again...it was very lyrical also.
177CEssence 3 years ago