(old version)Fourteen- JKJones (Beat by ZetaTiKappa)

[olympussound]

is this a joke? sounds like your just talking like a rambling nut case...no offence

[jemar200]

no its not a joke im going to re-do it so that its more clear at what im saying but i appreciate your honesty

[YoungSeezy]

it doesnt go with the flow

[Rohan4basu]

pretty sick BTW the ancient lotus is inside you

[jemar200]

lol good to see someones listening closely to the lyrics

[905NOBODY]

all of it is fast, lyrics are good just slow it down

[905NOBODY]

yo ive listened to it, in my opinion you gotta slow it down like twice as much or even 3

re-record it a lot slower i guarantee it will come out a lot better

[jemar200]

k ill try to record it slower ill leave it up for now tho

[jemar200]

yo is all of it to fast or certain parts? and any comment on the lyrics