Erv Noel - Hot Ass Beat (Clap!)

[iFlyOverSeas]

check me out

[Raa829]

I think u need a little work but ur pretty good for just starting out

[ricecakes13]

Classic rhymes make for a good time. I agree with the other about the voice though. Good but give it some character.

[EpicTeaCup1]

BRO LET'S BATTLE!!!!

[datdogg90]

Doooooope.

[bubbleman445]

ESS is kold

[beastinBOJANGLES]

Damn... Dope... Lower the music a bit. Can't really hear u

[kyletettleton]

Damn. when a mixtape drop

[jvideogamefreek1]

Dude your rhymes are sick but the only thing is you gotta add some charecter to em when you spit them. Keep up the good work and also try to start makin your own beats!

[mayflies100]

MORE SONGS NOW!

[TheYoungrickster23]

@ErvNovel, this goes hard man. You need to add more vids man. I want to listen more of your music man.

[OfficialEKingMusic]

" Remember when the haters used to laugh at him?

Now they sit there laughing while they're playin with his sack of twins "

Good shit. Check out my tracks hmu for any collab or whatever.

[Taztheillest]

This is amazing, I followed you from the Cudi video

[chitown2g]

Don't change bro, leave your tone but put more passion in your voice like this is really what you want man.. Flows decent.. But need substance.. Make a story about an event in your life and don't flow off track... You'll definitely feel the passion doing a story of something that happened in your life and you'll know what I mean...

[techboy556]

insane flow insane lyrics insane metaphors. Your going to make it but put some swagger in ur voice.... Your going hard i love ur music im gona subb

[240sxVtech]

I saw ur comment on dpyrd mc showcase ur good keep it up and check out my channel I just upload fights and racing vids Lol and other stupid shit I run into

[SwaggedShooter]

Put more emotion in your voice. Your monotone. Good lyrics though.

[MrPotatoes98]

Good but I can barely hear your voice

[mrballztoyou1]

You should put up more songs I love them

[freakenfredfan]

Off the chain

[Smiles90713]

Hella ya! Luv it

[Dipterans]

raw shit, keep grindin man

[DCracing07]

Sick man keep it up!!!!!!!!

[BlakBOYZify]

not to be an ass critic who knows everything

[BlakBOYZify]

hey also try to add some flavor to your voice and be more creative on like semi - chill funny true shit.

[BlakBOYZify]

aye man, your trying. have confidence a

[Justg5594]

@Iluvcops911 and @SleazyWonder

Hop off my niggas dick, hes nice.

Stop suckin his dick, you try and make music you dumb fucks, obv the kids nice if so many people are watching it and commenting on it. Get a life

[lionair112]

better than i expected. idk if u know this but i thought that ur lyrics resembled earl a little bit, still liked it tho.

[SleazyWonder]

Weak, nigga.

[Iluvcops911]

Keep your shit music out of the comment box of real artists like Doom. Your style was pulled straight out the garbage, ya said so yourself.

[MrBiglulz]

THIS IS HOT

[skateboarding]

doooooope shit man :D

[markciarelli88]

yooo tight flow

saw this on the so appalled video by the way hahah

[face2faceish1]

This is really good. Keep up the good work.

[iiProPh3T]

Shit this is good. Keep it up.

[SKATERUNDMC]

Swag.

[LMGameVideos]

I really dig this.

[PartyBoy64]

It was pretty sick but ya gotta get more power in your voice

[cucinello92]

Saw your comment on nas vid checked u out pretty good

[DukeNukeEm69]

love it, needs to be longer though upload more videos!

[jaycat18]

Nice man! U should check my channel out!

[DomGurule]

lyrically dope, flow raw, needa make more vids homie!!!

[justinkuenne]

The monotone fit for the beat. Sick lyrics and flowing techniques.

[Isolated17]

Good shit my dudes check out the page get at me bustadomis

[theledhead96]

Good shit but it seems like you need some more passion in your voice.

[drrockhead13]

Saw your comment on Eminem's song! Good job bro that was tight for you first song :)

[Winfyy]

SICK.

[meataballa]

this is straight fire

[RasingSilence]

Monotone , put mood into it ;D

[kwambomm]

Hot AF keep makin music

[kidlunchbox]

damn kid. that was nice as fuck. keep it up.

[VRQwerty]

nice work

[austyn1234567891]

u need more songs

[ImFreshOmg]

my nigga erv... your too nice <3 -tyler

[gggXaaa]

haaa wow you took earl sweatshirts beat. you dont have that much emphasis but i like your lyrical content. it goes pretty hard. i dont really like your voice though cause u sound like just reading off a paper. you need to be louder

[olie727]

your rappings dope man, keep it up

[KryptonDaVillain]

Dope shit.

[hermanclark96]

damn son this shit is sick, had to post it up on facebook

[wearecuri0uskids]

I like this flow is the shit keep it going ;

Thumbs up if OFWGKTA brought you here . c;

[IIllIIllIIllIIllIlll]

OFWGKTA.

[CLW0815]

/watch?v=XSbZidsgMfw

Watch that.

[RaptorJesus802]

epic flow along with dank ass lyrics keep up the good work man!

[raza838]

this is really good. you could be a bit louder though. that was the only problem here for me.

[wanapiss]

not bad man keep it up

[greenday8403]

I strongly agree with R3CYCL3TH1S you gotta good voice but you gotta liven up. You sound like you'd rather be doing something else is all but you definitely got potential

[yungdreTGOD]

wooow this is rly good almost as good as earls annnd thats alot to say

[R3CYCL3TH1S]

Nice beat, and lyrics, man.

Just work on not being so monotone.

And some flare with your voice.

There are a million people trying to be rappers out there.

You have to be something they aren't.

[JonahS777]

good as shit i like 

[MakeOutWithMedusa]

*Clicks link on OF's video.*

Oh, a rapper who wants to be noticed. *listens*

#swag.

[puddinPocket]

damn nigguh, maybe one day you'll blow up ill pass this video around ;)

[Dancinghobostudios]

earned my sub mate, and dude, i can write shit and give you some constructive critisism, so if you wanna send me some of your lyrics, i can help you improve :) and ill send some on to you aswell, your stuff is pretty dope mate, word.

[JasoNcHiAgO]

Hahah Fuckin Nice Music Yo! Jus Saw Ur Comment U Posted On The Video 'Tyler The Creator' haha And Thought I'd Check Out Ur Uploaded Track!! Its Nicee Yo! Real Nice! And If Yuh get The Chance Ur Self Check Out My Musik And Let Me know What Yuh Think!!

[bzsmileyman]

mad props man

some day ill drop mine ill expect a comment g

[BasedWorldd]

swagg . dope bro .

[nickuardo]

that was dope!

[Clankz0wnage]

Nice flow.

[073730590]

your dope! make more music man, lots of potential !

[saraacarterxo]

ur soo good babyy<33 you my rapper<33

[910army]

Lyrics is too RAW!! Keep it up bro

[nicanna24]

Damn baby I love your raps so much. P.s. This is Nicole <3

[KingTouchdown]

sick lyrics

[RickyPernell]

Nice lyrics, when are you putting up new vids

[Zkrudriverz]

shits dope ass fuck

[MsEllioto]

this is sic man. its so quick.............. this is going straight into my youtube music playlist lol. oh and will be subscribing :)

[787Dusty]

this is really awesome.. what are ur influences? i assume of of them is odd future because thats how i found this vid cuz u commented on one of them to support u but haha whatever i am totally suscribing to u! haha keep it up dude, its dope.

[JoshIsAmazin]

Damn bro, pretty ill. You got some nice lyrics I just think you should add more feeling, your voice is sort of bland but I like the flow a lot.

[RealVidz08]

Got here from that Khalifa video. Sorry bro this song isn't tight you need to work on your delivery. You were genuine with askin ppl to hear so I'm going to be genuine and honest with my critique. Keep at it tho!

[waterbuggg]

@RealVidz08 agreed........ delivery was robotic........ it didnt sound natural at all, thats exactly how u dont wanna sound

[McV4y]

This is fire man. Love them lyrics.

Keep it up dude!

[jajaboomers]

You need to work on the delivery of your words but other than that seriously man sick flow all I can say is RESPECT.

[pacynad]

Pretty dope dude, keep it up

[Abserts]

Much better than most shit you hear today.

[vicioo123]

this is the best flow on the worts beat i've ever heared.

RESPECT from Poland ! only the strong will continue

[AppleBee424]

sick ass foo ! ;D

[whit3shad0ww]

kinda dope......na you dope

[juicee235]

THAT WAS ILL THE LYRICS.

[lilyock971]

O giv u props bro this is sick

[thatNativeKid13]

Badass bro. Post more!

[Tangelojim]

I like it but to be totally straight up at some points it sounds alot like your jackin' Earl's flow.

[GangstaTacticsX]

Nice, better than some signed artists; I would have liked to hear more of it though.

[ReAcTxNationPS3]

I like it. You remind me of Drake :)

[NovieNovak]

Unique flow man. nice job

[ErvNoel]

@NovieNovak wow. what a fucking honor for one of the nicest rappers to comment on my song. Means alot Novie

[Omgitspace]

@NovieNovak Tweet him then you dick! haha jk jk. Btw I'm a Hopsin fan but you RAPED him on that Stan diss.

[fakkeRICH]

@NovieNovak faggot your a chunt

[DUKEWII]

sick beat yo!

[ktct23]

Were can I get this this sick bro hater gone hate keep yah head up ;) K23

[WY4TT03]

People only dislikein cause they jealous dw bro :) ~

[MrDope77]

the five people who disliked this is fucken retarded like on the real tho you wrecked that shit bro!! keep it up

[homesiq]

Dude you fucking blew my mind. Keep this up.

[ChadBucketHead]

Sick ass lyrics, and Dat Ass beat...Whoo...

[rumpekule]

@ErvNoel Keep''

[rumpekule]

@ErvNoel The song was dope, but like m8069 says, it's abit wierd flow after noses... Kepp up the good work fella!

[tehfudger]

Dope

[AndrewEngage]

great lyrics not much of a rapping voice though

[bossanova40954]

I like this!

[Cjd2015]

That's sick as shit nigga

[frankthatank0325]

Hey you aren't too bad where u from, I could help you out with some hotter beats. Ur flow is aight too keep at it.

[reppinAZ1411]

That's pretty damn good. Now u just got to add some personality to it

[TheKobe20]

You have some nice bars. But loosen up a little bit on your grammar. It's to sharp. But overall great job and keep rhyming.

[WiffOfPiff]

Thank goodness somebody advertising themselves on YouTube was half decent thanks man I thought I was wasting my time but u prooved me wrong BTW u should work on ur voice bro

[m8069]

Nice! Love THe lyrics but idk, I guess there's something about where your rapping from( the nose) that I'm not feeling.. Lyrics and delivery were great it's just wasnt as smooth as I think it could be

[JayBM11]

erv upload all your other raps

[cudi913]

Got this off frans vid, good stuff man

[ShayanShafii7]

Dope lyrics, but your voice is too deep. Fix it, and it'd be really good.

[phlman9]

I respect it

[KaitlynWickham12]

This Sonq Is Fuckinq Amazinq Boo .

Gave Me Goossbumps ( :

Follow Me On Twitter @KaitlynWickham

[SwagHustle]

Keep up the good work homie..

[iGogglez]

damn bro that was pretty sick......props

[Snapback97]

bro no doubt that was pretty sick

[wiccan911]

Dude SWA666

[g0rdy978]

dis is good man

[FrequentxC]

FRESH! We deff must collab! But...i thought you don't curse?? wooooooow! :P