I kissed a boy once monologue.

[HollieZarar27]

you need to play the character with a disabilty and make sure you seem thick . it was rubbish tbh.

[MsJadeHamilton]

Well done, beautiful understated acting. You should work in radio- your voice is so expressive!

[macypia]

@MsJadeHamilton Thanks! I'm actually going to college for acting! but, my dad is in radio.. :D

[MsJadeHamilton]

@macypia I ws a DJ at college. I've also worked as a volunteer drama tutor, so iv kinda got a thing about expressive voices. Sorryxx

[kraydos]

I think it was pretty good. Most people play this part all wrong, and don't factor in that the character is shy. I think you nailed it compared to everyone else on youtube.

[dreamdaily94]

i just did this monologue on my channel!! i think you're GREAT and i love your interpretation of juniper :D this is really great, you've got some true talent!!

[MegaDreamer88]

nice job!

[michyramos]

good job! it'd be aaaaamaaazingg if you could watch my version :D

pleease and thankyou! :D

[suki8747]

AHH MY NAME IS MACY!!!! How cool is that!?

[marinebiogirl1223]

do more experssion

[goofchicken95]

i'd try giving it mayb a little more emotion. good though :D check out my monologue? plz and thank you :DDD

[claudizzle44]

I get that you were trying to go for the natural approach but the play says that she is a girl with learning disabilities and I don't think she would be as mellow as you are portraying her to be.

[marshmallow0clouds]

I think you should put a little more energy into it. You have to be fearless! i think its better to over do it then under do it.

[AymieLovesHim]

@marshmallow0clouds Check out my video of that. AymieLovesHim. It's my only video right now.

[NeoToxicGenii]

gosh 1st vid where 1st sentence sounds realistic.

[AymieLovesHim]

i won the talent portion of our school pageant performing this!

[kittytv]

we did this on in my acting class and this is the best version iv seen

its realy convining well done =D

xx

[DramaGirI]

Good job. But I personally think you would be better to go with a dramatic monologue than a comedic one. It seems like you were tryint to turn this one into something dramatic.

[ActYourButtOff]

If you're an aspiring actor and you love doing monologues. Join "Hows My Acting". Google it. Or even easier, the link is in my channel.

[juzzfrofun]

very boring, no face expressions, no character. the monologue itself is just awesome, but you made it really boring;D

My acting teacher's always giving me the kick in the ass))) thats how i learn good and fast)) it helps!

[KimberlyKatastrophes]

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM: You didn't portray the character of a shy girl with learning disabilities. The way you read the lines and then said them was distracting as well. Needs more emotional emphasis but if it were as you said a "socially awkward" young woman then i can see where that would work. Also, the volume needs to increase. Sorry for the criticism, don't mean it in a bad way. =)

[hethalee]

@KimberlyKatastrophes please check out mine...i did mine as a girl with a learning disability

[MissCamizz]

hahah i laughed a hand full of times! good job :) i think you could make it a litle funnier but AWESOME!!!!

[xobrix3]

sorryyy.....just a little constructive critisism!!!

...it was kinda boringggg! use more inflection and facial expressions. =]

[macypia]

No, thank you so much for letting me know. :) I'll take that in. I appriciate it. :))

[DeborahEmily]

the face expression of yours a great but the only think I have to say is that it looked like you reading and then sayingg you line and that made the poses to long.Please watch my monologue and let me know what you think thanks:)

[macypia]

thanks so much for the feedback, and yeah, haha, i was reading it. lol

[Hedonist83]

Your a beautiful girl

[macypia]

thank you so much. :}

[macypia]

Nooooo! hah. I was supposed to play somebody with mental disabitlites, but I didn't want to go there. So I just played it like a socially awkward young woman. :)

[happyfaces03]

is this Samuel true because he sounds ugly