really good song. as a composition student, i would like to make a couple suggestions that my teacher always tells me. the first thing, is that 3 times of something is usually a good number. like if you do the same exact thing like 3 times in a row, it gets hard to keep people's attention. the second thing is, same but different. it goes along the the 3 times thing. you want to keep the main idea of something, but maybe change a rhythm somewhere, or even just one note. not criticizing, just.....
Cool song! I like the contrast from the staccato strumming to barre chords in the chorus, if that makes any sense. I'm trying to sound like I know what I'm talking about...
hoping to help. all around, great song
johnkettch 10 months ago
really good song. as a composition student, i would like to make a couple suggestions that my teacher always tells me. the first thing, is that 3 times of something is usually a good number. like if you do the same exact thing like 3 times in a row, it gets hard to keep people's attention. the second thing is, same but different. it goes along the the 3 times thing. you want to keep the main idea of something, but maybe change a rhythm somewhere, or even just one note. not criticizing, just.....
johnkettch 10 months ago
GG
Leaving GG as a comment is too short so I have to write this sentence explaining that.
UOGAddict 3 years ago
Cool song! I like the contrast from the staccato strumming to barre chords in the chorus, if that makes any sense. I'm trying to sound like I know what I'm talking about...
Bottom line, the song is good!
hollowheresy 3 years ago