Atempted Diary of Jane ( acoustic)

[NumeralNerd]

;D I liked it!!!! please perform this somewhere

[NumeralNerd]

;D I liked it!!!!

[lumpdatllama]

Great.

[Ldizzle64]

When you started you played the So Cold song. Just saying.

[Chaos2285]

man you got awesome range when you say something getting in the way

[Scar626]

jou ma se poes hou die kitaar hoor op in die lug en voken watse kak jol jy da my panty???

[Dizzymack1]

U diddnt try you did bravo

[Austinw8O]

haha lisssssssp

[XsspackX]

ive gone off this song now........

[makeitpop87]

hahahaha love the lisp.

[tibetyoutubification]

man ur the best

[xzibit19942007]

Il a vraiment une sale gueule . . .

[Ch1pmunknation]

Oh its supposed to be like that, i just though everyone singing this song had a lisp

[RoBtHeQuAdEr]

scumbag

[dontrlycare]

@RoBtHeQuAdEr bag of scum

[RoBtHeQuAdEr]

@dontrlycare i was talking to people that were making fun of his lisp

[dontrlycare]

@RoBtHeQuAdEr oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­ooooooooooooh

lool =P

[dontrlycare]

@RoBtHeQuAdEr then so was i xD

sowiee =P

[hellodarkness84]

Killer!

[rock3r9876]

Great voice but the only problem I do not like is the s's but I know that you can't stop that because thats just they way talk but its just my oppinion other than that its great.

[kysmight82]

I like it

o:

something very odd about your voice that makes it very nice.

Nice job.

[fabi93aha]

wuhu

not bad

[Apprentice12233445]

pretty good man

[Trierpiigen]

Great guitar! Well done, dude =)

[kamfuey]

great voice bro

[buizel76698]

great guitar playing but ur voice is kind of off (not being mean or anything)

[UnknownEncryption]

not bad

[Heather13351]

hey what's the chords and rythm you used to play this???

[mitchierich93]

nice job man, love this song and breaking benjamin.... u did it well :D

[SweetReminder]

Great guitar playing, but try to control your voice in the chorus. Otherwise, great job.

: )

[MrLemou]

well done, but let me say something:

try to control your voice in the chorus, sounds even better than. and in the bridge, too.

anyway, sounds awsome! 5*

[Goodbear456]

FAIL NERDZ

[djedd0]

haha man. ur wrong .first it's "whould you like that" and then "do you like that" :D

[januaryist]

mean bro

[2768956]

awesome Voice....Excellent 4.5 stars

[JonoCurls]

its actually amazing, speech impediment didnt even bother me.

keep it up bro

[fizzlyfizzle]

I think it's nice!=)

5 stars from me!

Btw, do take a look my take on this song too!(However,it's not as good as you though)=p

[MyKiki666]

I really liked your voice ;D

[leahJB101]

why are you insulting his speech impediment? how pathetic, tbh.

you've got an amazing voice, very powerful. well done (:

[rockstaraxe]

That's a really good cover, great work and your cute to ;)

[MrKnotty16]

LISP MUCH ? MUAHAHAHA

good song  tho :)

[ThexWhitexMonkey]

Nice speech impediment, asshole. Go scching sschomething elsche.

[penguinproduction3]

dude, super harsh

[ThexWhitexMonkey]

Actually, it's schuper harsche.

If you're going to defend him, do it the right way.

[TheJakes93]

cazzo sei un grandee bravissimoooo !!!!!!!!!

[UltraSimon007]

You have lots of potential as a singer, but I think you need to learn to sing from the basics. Your stressing and style seems like compensation for your inability to, otherwise, hit the notes.

Sounds great on the surface, but if you pay attention to the emphasis you put on all notes, it is a bit distracting.

Keep at it, you'll go far if you work hard ^^

[321v646vr6]

kick ass im loving the voice

[katieguit19]

what chords are u playing? try starting with an Aminor for the verse and strum that thru then the chorus is...aminor c g then f.. i think i havent played it in a while.

[llissarenae88]

i like it you made it your own and thats nice just dont strain so much but very very good

[Nemecys]

For a one man fuckign band its pretty good chords and singing sound better than just treble clef and singing...

[RoBtHeQuAdEr]

u have bad ears then

[milkmycow45]

You douche bag, Its a fucking Acoustic version. Post a vid of you singing it, and then say he sucks. Lick his man gooch,

No life computer fucking fag.

[katieguit19]

i was drunk when i wrote that. i totally forgot.. its not bad..but not exactally amazing either.

[mrjli]

better then most but needs some improvement

[kujo97]

not bad

[darkstarsageheart]

nice

[Asteraf]

i wish i could sing

5/5

[xxglittercorpse]

What a voice, loved it.

[starlightxo2]

you sing really good, but the guitar playing doesnt sound like the song much..

[RoBtHeQuAdEr]

because there is piano in the real song

[Reandente]

Dude you sound like a fat chick. Should quit the atempt to scream. Cuz it sounds bad as hell.

[EscapReap]

your quite good. maybe make the audio better and would be better though.

[Michaelbirchy]

that was really good!

Pretty good singer! :)

Definitley keep at it bro!

[brianbunt1]

minus the whole boston shirt...go rays....that was a damn great 2 minutes and 51 seconds

[rawrxibanezXD]

hey :)

that was really good :)

do you think you could send me the tabs?

that would be awesome :)

[DontBeHatinFred13]

nice, very nice (:

[dieinhellutube]

sounds really good.

[LuckeeLee]

well people, its hard to make that high note when ur that age and ur a male... so keep that in mind. Other than that, excellent guiter and great singing!

[bern1417]

not bad, bro

[bethoxra]

what are the chords ?

[XC0MP0SUREX]

dude start a band you will go places

[turismoskunk]

great cover. we should do a collaboration when i get good.

[SSJ3Dragonfist]

That was great mate!

[xXomgiTzChrisXx]

i thought it was good.

[xXomgiTzChrisXx]

red sox ftw

[rhugginsj]

fuck yeah fuck yankees. TEAM STEROIDS

[PivotMasterNM]

good guitar..but vocals need work on the high notes

[Werewolfchic14]

hahaha, work on the vocals a tad.... but ok guitar

[GreenCatEye1]

ure singing like a seeeeeeeed from ice age ;P but nice ;]

[usmcjet3]

sounds like an opera its not supposed to

[LyssalaxXo31]

this is awesome! and i like how you got the acoustic guitar and your voice is great!

[SNJH2334]

awawawawawawawawawawawawawa yeah yeah yeah

[botkiller78run3scap3]

so failure you gutiar skillz suck you cant sing you cant hit high notes as a matter of fact you can hit any notes and it sounds like you got a retainer in ur mom failllllllllllllllllllllllllll­llllllllllllllllllllllllllllll­llllllllllllllllllllllllllllll­llllllllllllllllllllllllllllll­llllllllllllllllllllllllllllll­llllllllllllllllllllllllllllll­llllllllllllllllllllllllllllll­llllllllllllllllllllllllllllll­llllllllllllllllllllllllllllll­llllllllllllllllllllllllllllll­llllllllllllllllllllllllllllll­llllllll

[bullet0of0fire]

:D That's so cool !!!

[TeffueTRIBE]

that dude is awsome!! i love his voice!

[bradderz2]

FAIL

[fetcherlavache]

nice ^_^

[SpawnZ9]

Boo Majior Suckage dont rate my comment wrong u know he sucks ass!

[MissCakes2009]

great voice. i love it when boys can sing. especially like that :)

[darfkloyd]

Not bad at all dude, I'm sure this is a very difficult song to sing.

[McrJunkie4evr]

my buddy is trying to learn this song..

he says its WAY to high for him...

lol

but you pulled it greatly.. just dont strain your voice or get too loud...

even though its a great song to get carried away in...

[Uniform1990]

dnt try to sound lyk the original. Use your normal voice. Doesn't sound right when you try to sound like the original. The 'woo' at the beginning was ur voice and it sounds gd so keep it that way. Cud u do lyk another cover to see if your voice works betta please?. Gd work neways m8

[Ironwoman92]

agreed

[ZosoDude]

cod yoo spel normaly so people understand what you're saying before you criticize this guy's amazing voice?

thanks.

[Uniform1990]

did you just ask me too spell properly when look wot you've written?

and yeah he does have a good voice

never said he was a crap singer just gave him a bit of advice. don't see why you have to get all uptight and ridiculous about it. what is it with people nowadays that seem to try everything to argue?

[kikis666]

Seriously D: marry me! XD  you can sing dude :3

[MissMusic83]

Nice man, good job.

[ReijiEdgeworth]

I love a lot your voice in the chorus :3

[coscott228]

the reason he strains his voice is because he wants to sound good, and he should tell me the chords

[coscott228]

dude ure amazing, please tell me the chords please

[metalisthewayforward]

ur shit

[ShinobiXSkull]

Your voice is perfect! I can feel the emotions of the song...GREAT! Its close the one by BREAKIN BENJAMIN!

[tubecruser]

i don't think so but it's good. Ben's voice is the best.

[NeroSlashedMemories]

Yeah he just dosn't seem to hit it in the right times and have enough let me put it like this feeling you have to feel the music to play and sing the music just an opinion as is yours ;D

[BobDanish]

Like it.

Im thinking about trying to start guitar. Not that you would care. ha

Very well done though. 5S

[psphacker2015]

good job dude

[sneekydude]

that was totaly flippin amazing!

[Munkee121P]

white powda

[RRAWRR12345]

that was good, tbh.

but you suddenly go louder,

it's a peacefull song,

so play it calmer.

and it will be perfect.

good luck. x

[Sh4rperX]

I thought that was good yo

[XxSuciyoxX]

nice vocal range... that's definitely not easy for a guy to do... good job dude

[morticia7]

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!U have a great voice!!!!!!Use it for real!Don't waste time!!!;)

[Twilightareyouafraid]

Aww Love it

[heartsxbleed]

Stellar.

Kudos(:

[OblivionGod93]

Good Job! better than me Lol

[666fireball]

sysunia hehe :D jak Sid z Epoki Lodowcowej:D/

Like Sid from Ice Age :d Nice!! :)

[IAmJ03xX]

lisp sounds wierd lol but its good

[HANKEYMAN45]

the chorus is really really good!

[Sk8aCheN]

lisps lisps lisps lol other than that pretty good

[theangelborninhell]

Dude if you reply to this comment and tell me you don't play bars and stuff i might have to kill you lol

Your voice is brilliant.

[dreamzar4you]

you suck. jks that was 10000000 time better than i could ever do with years of pratics XD

[vVvVALORvVv]

that was actualy pritty good.

[iichgomochii]

=)))

Love this song, its amazing.

[tomiyoma]

awesome dude. i like ur enthusiam nd energy wen u covered this song. just awesome.

[xelementgrindx]

go pro :)

[Diiidan]

you are very good man. i like it, great song

[iShokuXTH]

cann u send me tabs or chordss pleasee??

and the tuning(::

thankss

[ccx555]

a bit too fast but still good=P

[dclanr]

pretty gud man

[rachelhatcherian]

Woah, I was dazed by the light on the right for a sec...

Anyway. Good job! Usually when I see videos like this (this sung by me! attempted sung by me... and such) I steer away from them... but you did a good job! :)

[hilflosmara]

good dude

[ashdabrothers]

This is pretty good (: Good job

[w156dms]

the funny thing is i posted this when i first started trying to sing so even i cringe when i hear it lol. i now realize it was way out of my vocal range lol. its funny listening to my struggle to try and force out the chorus lol i have gotten better and will be posting new stuff soon hopefully

[ryosapien]

dude this song is totally in your range i don't know what you are talking about you obviously are a tenor. Good on pitch in key. The chorus sounds good. THis is rock music forcing out a chorus is exactly what he does and that is what makes it sound powerful. Just force the tone where it belongs into your head and you will be excellent. See the comment below it you get too trained and begin to sing these songs like opera you'll sound like a douche. Rock on

[ryosapien]

btw took a minute to look at your page and this song "when you first started singing" sounds better than anything else on there. more natural tone. Yeah fix the SSSSS problem and you will have something here

[bethelstudentca]

i do vocal lessons and you have a great voice with a whole lot of potential so keep it up. Just need a bit more support and focus more and singing from your gut and not your throat. amazing voice though bro keep it up

[Revman1088]

I did not like it at all .I'm sorry, you made the song sound like a pop song. Sorry man.

[darkangeljack15]

by any chance are you wearing a brace?

[candeegrrrl]

HOLY COW! 1st off. I HATE listening to covers. but this is AMAZING! I'm majoring in music right now and you have a beautiful voice with a rich quality and tone. not pushed at all. I'm in awe of your talent. I hope you keep it up. and for all of you that are critisizing him, you're just jealous because you aren't as good. Go home and cry.

[bindelbum]

it sounds like your teeth take up more room in your face than they should

thus you have a weird noise when you make S's

hehe

and you need to play all the chords, not just the base one over and over in the begining...

otherwise, well done

[russiapwnage]

very nice, bravo, GOOD JOB man

U did great, i bet ill see him winning American Idol someday

KEEP IT UP< GOOD JOB!

[JackSpade117]

ur really good can u post the chords to the song? oh and ur a really good singer and can sing it VERY WELL (sweeks73)

[SilverScriptMusic]

i think this is a nifty cover, nice job man =)

[HK4466]

this is pretty good. =)

[sweeks73]

the way u sing it is just not the right way i mean u have an OK voice but u just don't sing the song right sorry try something softer

[ChipmunkApocalyps]

holy shit. I have a million & a half plus videos views, message me if your intrested in me sponsoring you. o.o

[JKAYHACHX]

That was awesome!

You have a really lovely voice which goes soo well with this song :)

IMMENSE :) xxxxx

[sickfukingfuk]

Wow ! i just love your Voice ! =D

[xdendroidx]

This was very good. For all the people who are complaining, try the same thing as he did, then talk. If you do better than him, then good for you.

[TheOneAndOnlyIt]

this is pretty good :) and im picky lol

[Jacobpm10]

Shut up swarsking That was good and if you dont have anything positive to say then dont say anything at all.

[Blogurmom]

NIce job...but the cords are all wrong...i can hear it man, and when u play on acoustic u can play actual cords not power or bar...and anyway. i think the actual song is in Drop D or A# not really sure!

[crabzman]

Bb is the tuning

[agnessbabe]

not bad bby

[swarsking]

Talk about GAY FOREIGN people!!

[kickfkid01]

damn man that is really good u can go solo man nice vocals and acoustic u can definately go solo two thumbs up

[zanda101]

FRIGGEN AWESOME DUDE

[Bloodshinobi6]

damn gud that was very gud i wanna learn how to play that song so badly but 1. i need pics, and 2.i need to acomidate for the fact my fist is brkoen ish.. so when u have any pointers for me that would be very thankful XD... keep rocking play where ever you will go next XD

[TreehuggersRevenge]

wow! high five man! awsome cover

[Bruins8130]

representin' boston! nice cover!

[XDiaryOfJaneX]

good attempt at like my favourite song EVER bt there is still a lot that needs to be improved..dont listen to the people who are slaggin you off coz if you do you wont get anywere you could be god one day.

[whitelightr]

love it! :]

[fcukthiscarp]

nicely done, i saw in the comments to ignore the haters, i totally agree, im a guitarist and vocalist of 14 years, nice voice control, good dynamics, great song, good cover all in all

[SufferingBarajas]

Freaking Amazin 5/5

[Jonochallis]

I think it was pretty gooood man

ignore the haters

[chkoo]

ｐｒｅｔｔｙ　ｆｕｃｋｉｎｇ　ｇｏｏｄ

[darkbot298]

Good vocals. All I can recommend is that you try to work on your tone when when you sing high and the screaming parts of the song. Overall you did great. Work on the chorus :D

[kamakazeypeapod]

U are absalutly shit! Ur voice is holy crap. The guitare isnt bad but i think ur vocal teacher was a conestapated duck!

[zouzsak]

no..=P

[carpdude2]

oww my ears!!!!! its ok but!!!!

[RoBtHeQuAdEr]

dude ur a fucking fagget he sang good

[Fakkwan]

Good guitar.... Good enthusiasm... Work on breath control and don't rush. I also noticed somewhat of a lisp. Good pick though.. Diary of Jane is an excellent song and the acoustic is even better. Learn the whole song though. You repeated one verse 3 times :)

[totallyxclueless]

You are so good!!! You're voice is really nice! Just one thing, next time you shoot a video, try not to have that bright light next to you! lol But anyway you have a good voice!! =]

[L1ndja]

Dude what tune are you playing ? D?C?B?

Respond if you can :p