Tom Beasley Performs At Esquires Coffee House, Coventry (28/01/2011)

[TiltsMark5]

You kinda sound like Charlieissocoollike, and that's a good thing ^.^ I love the accents.

Try and get maybe a grab/hook and accentuate it in order to grab your audience because you seem to lose them half-way through. but other than that, Excellent!

[ElvenPrince18]

Ditch the script, slow down between jokes, listen to your audience. But good!

[TomBeasleyComedy]

@ElvenPrince18 I did find actually that I could have done it without the script, so I will ditch it for next week. :)

[xK3NI]

Well in tom, good material mate :)

[TomBeasleyComedy]

@xK3NI Thanks dude. ^_^