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  • Awwwwww

  • Awww!! That was the sweetest thing ever

  • love ittt

  • Awwwwwww love this <3

  • i am kinda confused i did not know demi was jonna's mom i thought jonna demi's mother child ??????????

  • OMG THIS IS SOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • I wish i was Demi rite now!!!

  • awww i loved it

  • sorry, but i don't like old fashion words like mother, father, daughter, and son

    i prefer mom dad

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  • love it!

  • H O T !

    I LOVE IT!!!!

  • if you noticed on the video of jemi at the end

    looks like joe is leaning down to kiss demi .......

    im not sure .....

    anyways .... LOVED IT AWESOME !!!!!

  • i freakin love!! an omg i didnt notice what a sexci bodi joe got:)... thxs for showing

  • umm okay number 1. Joe wouldnt button down her pants:/ that would be wrong:S 2. They are bffs! 3. AWESOME STORY!:D

  • @ThePrettyGirl56 idk where you've been but they're officially dating now....

  • @ThePrettyGirl56 XD hahahahahahaahaahaha where were u when she cofirmed it and they shared all those kisses??!!! lol haahhahha

  • awesome

  • AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!!!!

  • I rewrote this story in Demi's point of view only. Message me if you want to read it, okay? The storyline is good, so I wanted to see if it was better from a different point of view. I added a little more detail, (not more sex detail) but like little things like what she had been doing before Joe grabbed her and pulled her into the bathroom.

  • Awesome. Really good. Can you please tell me the name of the song and the singer? I loved this song.

  • @ioan1973 the songs called Hurt By Christina Aguilera :]

  • Thank you so much. Again, loved your one shot =]

  • @ioan1973 np :)

    but i didnt make it...lol

    so i guess ur talking to the writer tite?:P

  • Oh! I'm sorry. Yeah, I was talking to the writer. It's just usually is the writer that answers this kind of things and I didn't pay attention. Sorry =]

  • aww

  • that was so amazing :)

    loved it <33

  • OMG you made mee cry this is bautiful

  • Really good :D I forgot to comment :/

  • in the part where demi opened the door that picture of joe i hope he didnt show up lik that cuz he was HOT in that picture

  • wow i loved it

  • Awuhh was welll good :D (L)

  • this was really goood(:

  • OMG!! this made me cry with the song! it was soo beautiful! I love it so much i favorite it! =')

  • Thank-You for entering :D

    emibabie6595

  • aww omgg it made me crryy and the song aww amazing ;')

  • i realy liked this! =]

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