Half Life: Full Life Consequences, The Stage Adaptation

[romeroremor]

A MASTERPIECE

[Morpheus4751]

Not bad.

[MartinusPrime]

Fucking brilliant. I ought to do a movie of that. ^_^

[Halolifecomics]

woo XD

[fishheadedfish]

It would have been good, but the bloke playing John Freeman somehow managed to mess up pretty much every single one of his lines. I mean, WTF is "Because you are a headcrab"? IT'S HEADCRAB ZOMBIE DAMMIT!

Still, it was good. I'd have never had the balls to do this back when I was doing Drama GCSE, so you're bloody brave!

[skelhoy]

I totally should have done this for GCSE.

Methinks 6/10, -2 mainly for piss-poor narration as said before, -1 for bizarre acting that would have been awesome with two people, and -1 for the fat dude in the teal jumper, he looks like a tool.

I think you should do it again without the pressure of an audience and on location; someone "aksing" (with an axe) for help in a libary computer room would be brilliant! (if illegal)

[halfdude]

What sucks is that you actually fixed a lot of the miss-spellings while reading it.

[GalacticPenguin]

Bugger

[ravingrabidpugTICTAC]

ha epic

[RainingMetal]

You ought to do this in the style of an actual movie.

Exaggerate the camera positions and the epicness of the fanfiction. Try it out!

[GalacticPenguin]

Easier said than done man, but it's been on my shelf for a while

[RainingMetal]

Indeed. You should also work on reciting the lines by the letter.

[williamday247]

Brilliant! xD

[ZoninV]

your narration is too quick and makes it hard to enjoy... the memorization can be better(I did read the description) but overall it was entertaining to watch... 3/5 in my opinion... not too good but neither the other way...

[GalacticPenguin]

Thanks. It's always good to have harsher feedback which isn't just trolls saying stuff like "GO DIE YOU HOMO NIGGER!!1!". Thanks

[ZoninV]

your welcome and thanks, its nice to see others react well to criticism....

[mcskittles71]

BECAUSE YOU ARE HEADCRAB ZOMBIE

[TheDramaKings]

I love it! I hope you do a really high quality version, it deserves it :)

[Creez330]

Lol awesome narration!

[b33ftink]

Excellent narration!

[GalacticPenguin]

thanks

[rm82000]

this is actually epiczzz, deffo go 4 talent show... Thats MEE!!!!

[rm82000]

WOOO!!!!!