Quite nice.. Just a few glitches though... The busy signal on the phone it too loud compared to not being able to hear when there's actual talking going on on the other side. In the for last shot Floris is holding his wrong arm (right in stead of left). And if something has happened to his arm, why not show it (p.e. blood or a torn coat)?
But the technique used is pretty good. And I do applaud your challenge to shoot outside a script :-)
Quite nice.. Just a few glitches though... The busy signal on the phone it too loud compared to not being able to hear when there's actual talking going on on the other side. In the for last shot Floris is holding his wrong arm (right in stead of left). And if something has happened to his arm, why not show it (p.e. blood or a torn coat)?
But the technique used is pretty good. And I do applaud your challenge to shoot outside a script :-)
TheBuntsma 1 year ago
@TheBuntsma :)
kalyndahaaf 1 year ago