Great concept but its not clear enough. If you could fit more camera angles within scenes it'd look much, much more professional, and you just need to be able to make the viewer understand what its about without explaining such thing first. Great acting for a home made and overall its pretty good, 7/10.
Totally appreciate the comments! Just FYI, it's not a home made movie. We're indie filmmakers and this little indie film was written in the traditional format of a short film. We think our Emily film is better than just pretty good!!! :D Art is subjective, remember that. :)
Yeah, as an artist myself I can completely relate to your statement. It is good, just add more angle changes to keep it entertaining, but its a great story.
Very good enjoyed the film and thanx for the message be sure to check out WOODLAND when it premieres on OCTOBER 31st more trailers coming very soon !!
it was freaky. what kinda guy sits outside when its hot to read a magazine. i suppose it was alright. but it wasnt really a comedy. the only thing that was funny in the movie was that song at the beginning. decent, but to me its not considered a comedy. dont get me wrong its alright.
I liked it. It was well written, I thought the bit on the phone with her dad and mom teed up the story nicely. I would agree that it's not what I would call dark, would be nice to see her parents suffer for all eternity for not taking proper responsibility for their daughter, but that's just me :D
Does it matter? The subject matter is depressing but the plot is humorous, thus dark comedy. It doesn't need to be goth to be a dark comedy. Thanks for checking us out and have a great day.
Not quite sure how you stumbled on our channel, but in response to your inquiry, it's a nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. The acting was refreshing and the camera work wasn't choppy or jittery. All in all an excellent job.
We stumble onto ALL kinds of channels from Pokemon to Atheist to political. :) And we watch all kinds of videos as well. Thanks so much for your kind words. Much appreciated!!
No, actually we've been making films for 2 years. But we have no formal filmmaking education, so we're still beginners, I suppose. :) Thanks so much for your support!
The framing could have been a little more creative in the last scenes, but the editing works pretty well, and the performances give a lot of life to this short ;-).
Wow!, this is a good example of humans relations inside the family. Your video its interesting and your work its very good. I hope see the next chapter very soon.
Wow, the film was really great quality. Looked like a pro movie! And little Allie was absolutely adorable!! Keep up the good work, Allie. Also, the story was really nice. Congrats to whoever made this!!
That was a neat storyline. I leaves a lot of room for continuation. I though there was a little too much silence between Mark Fowler and Emily, but other than that, it was very well done.
Great story, and I think the acting is fantastic, Mr. Fowler is perfect in his role as a kind and mildly amused "customer". I too am looking forward to seeing more. How brave this little girl is to have dressed up like that and start her business of selling laughs, to keep herself busy while adjusting to parental issues.
This is just a wonderful piece of art. The story is so cool. It's kind of sad, but not go to the edge. It's funny but stay focus to what is important on the story. Really cool short film and the end is priceless. 5/5 ☆☆☆☆☆
I think that traditional films like this one are undervalued on YouTube. While YouTube is a great forum for every day life, it is also a powerful tool for up and coming filmmakers and artists. This particular Strout's Ink film is very poignant and it takes its time unfolding a three act story. That's something to be proud of since it is done in such a short amount of time with such little effort. This film was a lot of hard work. :)
First of all, women have a lot of things in their drawers that men don't understand. And that could have been the costume that she wore last year or planned to give to Emily. Second, if you really dug into the story, you would know that Emily's want is to live with someone who will pay attention to her. Not going to the park was an excuse she made to express that she just wants attention. She's not really afraid to go. And kids aren't always honest.
Wow..weird..my name is emily green..
EmilyN790 10 months ago
@EmilyN790 Wow. That's pretty awesome!! :)
StroutsInk 10 months ago
Adorable and endearing, excellent job!
We all need to buy more laughter. =)
IBlitzFoxI 2 years ago
I agree! Thank you Blitz!
StroutsInk 2 years ago
Wonderful Job! I am so very proud of both of you!!
MakaraDancingGypsy 2 years ago
wow, great clip, very entertaining!
charitynotclarity 2 years ago
This an original! It keep me anticipating.
MaKiNthaMoViE 2 years ago
That is fantastic! Keep you eye open we are releasing a new film in 2 weeks,
StroutsInk 2 years ago
That's great!!! Thanks.
MaKiNthaMoViE 2 years ago
Lol
AMMHD 2 years ago
It is nice to see you enjoyed it.
StroutsInk 2 years ago
hahahahah
I wanna buy from her too.....lol
Lovely video. Keep going... 5*****
Rigards
ZANKO
ZANKO11 2 years ago 2
haha iove the phone call part
zmadonia33 2 years ago
nice video i love it =)
LeetKrew090 2 years ago
this is a really good video!
RuchitFilms 2 years ago
Great concept but its not clear enough. If you could fit more camera angles within scenes it'd look much, much more professional, and you just need to be able to make the viewer understand what its about without explaining such thing first. Great acting for a home made and overall its pretty good, 7/10.
:D
HoboClownTracks 2 years ago
Totally appreciate the comments! Just FYI, it's not a home made movie. We're indie filmmakers and this little indie film was written in the traditional format of a short film. We think our Emily film is better than just pretty good!!! :D Art is subjective, remember that. :)
StroutsInk 2 years ago
Yeah, as an artist myself I can completely relate to your statement. It is good, just add more angle changes to keep it entertaining, but its a great story.
HoboClownTracks 2 years ago
A young Cindy Sherman. :-)
Charming video.
tomken8dy 2 years ago
Very good enjoyed the film and thanx for the message be sure to check out WOODLAND when it premieres on OCTOBER 31st more trailers coming very soon !!
superfreaktelevision 2 years ago
Seems to be a good short movie.
ddexpress 2 years ago
its ok but im more into the scary clowns considering i work at a haunted hayride which i do clown acts in as a killer klown crazt circus
Uncool8thGrada101 2 years ago
Thanks for the msg,
i liked it :D
SN1P3D1SM34T 2 years ago
Thanks for your message...it's a good movie !!!
rikedenimes 2 years ago
it was freaky. what kinda guy sits outside when its hot to read a magazine. i suppose it was alright. but it wasnt really a comedy. the only thing that was funny in the movie was that song at the beginning. decent, but to me its not considered a comedy. dont get me wrong its alright.
FattysInAction 2 years ago
Very good
cannibaljuice 2 years ago
it was good little weaid but good
TheIcpguy 2 years ago
thanks for sharing i enjoyed this
gothchilddomain 2 years ago
omg you are hot 5/5
YourXPHelp 2 years ago
it is good but a little weird
LMKVeiz159 2 years ago
I liked it... but the pacing with the conversation with the neighbor seems drag out which is the only thing I think could use fixing.
Her sister pushing her aside was so unexpected but also showed how rude she can be to her sibling. That was done really well.
dessertmonkeyjk 2 years ago
lol its funny
ERNESTOBOY57 2 years ago
I liked it. It was well written, I thought the bit on the phone with her dad and mom teed up the story nicely. I would agree that it's not what I would call dark, would be nice to see her parents suffer for all eternity for not taking proper responsibility for their daughter, but that's just me :D
kzzinsky 2 years ago
Thanks so much for your feedback. We really appreciate it. :)
StroutsInk 2 years ago
cool video! funny!
ScratchAndSniffKids 2 years ago
Thanks so much!
StroutsInk 2 years ago
Different i liked it.
AgothInnCloth 2 years ago
Thanks so much!!
StroutsInk 2 years ago
lol prettty funnnnny
Holli1994x 2 years ago
We're so glad you liked it! :)
StroutsInk 2 years ago
nice video but how is it dark? lol
LMKVeiz159 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
a minute in and I'm soooo bored.
Xalder1 2 years ago
voila five stars
patatebatignolles 2 years ago
Thanks so much!!!
StroutsInk 2 years ago
This is quite unlike anyhting I have seen on YouTube. I wanted to know more about Emily and spend more time with her. Good job!
RHYMEMAIDEN1 2 years ago
Wow, thanks! Great note. If you felt like you wanted to know more about her, then I need to make sure that happens on the script. Thanks so much!
StroutsInk 2 years ago
how is it a dark commedy?
JDreamProductions 2 years ago
Does it matter? The subject matter is depressing but the plot is humorous, thus dark comedy. It doesn't need to be goth to be a dark comedy. Thanks for checking us out and have a great day.
StroutsInk 2 years ago
dude, I just realised why you were ripping my vid :D
no my comment on this page wasnt an insult or sarcasm
I was generally just wondering :P
JDreamProductions 2 years ago
Apologies and no worries. YouTube isn't always easy. Translation gets lost sometimes. Thanks for being supportive. It means a lot!
StroutsInk 2 years ago
tight vid man this was very entertaning
zongonnerkriller 2 years ago
Your videos remain among the best n' most original on YouTube! Fabulous work! FIVE STARS! *****
samsevern 2 years ago
Thank you so much Sam!!!!
StroutsInk 2 years ago
Not quite sure how you stumbled on our channel, but in response to your inquiry, it's a nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. The acting was refreshing and the camera work wasn't choppy or jittery. All in all an excellent job.
mccainisthrough 2 years ago
We stumble onto ALL kinds of channels from Pokemon to Atheist to political. :) And we watch all kinds of videos as well. Thanks so much for your kind words. Much appreciated!!
StroutsInk 2 years ago
Good one, and really relevant! Sooooooooooooo relevant!
SparklestheClown 2 years ago
It does appear to be relevant!!! Checking out your page....now...
StroutsInk 2 years ago
very entertaning and very good
was this your first vid
blackwolf6486 2 years ago
No, actually we've been making films for 2 years. But we have no formal filmmaking education, so we're still beginners, I suppose. :) Thanks so much for your support!
StroutsInk 2 years ago
excellent! this was superb!
eerietube 2 years ago
Is that you in the video wearing glasses? Looks like Clark Kent from Super Man.
NothingP 2 years ago
LOL. That would be Cody Perry, our male lead actor. And yes, he kinda does look like Clark Kent there, doesn't he? Thanks so much for the comment! :)
StroutsInk 2 years ago
You should make a Super Man short story with him as Clark Kent, i watch it :)
NothingP 2 years ago
Great job! Another 5 stars from me :)
eyepatchentertainmen 2 years ago
superb! 5 stars =]
chitrungmai 2 years ago
The framing could have been a little more creative in the last scenes, but the editing works pretty well, and the performances give a lot of life to this short ;-).
KitsuneJey 2 years ago
900 views! ALRIGHT!
Allie's skits are SO popular ^_^
Kaizen63 2 years ago
great acting....i enjoyed it..thanks for sharing
C00ZZY 2 years ago
Very Interesting ... looks like my daughter when she's home LOL ! busy in everything ,,, but we live together (^.^)
clovermaria 2 years ago
marry me!
i love this film
brycelintern 2 years ago
LOL. Most creative comment EVAR!!!
StroutsInk 2 years ago
Great acting! 5 stars and Love from Austria - Sharine
SharineONeill 2 years ago
This type of film is some thing I should at least try, especially after watching results like this one, excellent
Regards Richard
richardclaxtoncni 2 years ago
Absolutely, Richard. You'd do a great job. And thank you so much for your kind words. We love to entertain. :)
StroutsInk 2 years ago
Good acting on her part, if she were about 5 years older she might do other things with her boredom that could get her into real trouble.
lizardladyfla 2 years ago
LOL. Thanks so much! And in 5 years, we may just have a film of this caliber to have more fun with. :)
StroutsInk 2 years ago
HAHA really enjoyed this!
DarkRiderFilms 2 years ago
We are so glad you did. Thank you for your support!
StroutsInk 2 years ago
Wow!, this is a good example of humans relations inside the family. Your video its interesting and your work its very good. I hope see the next chapter very soon.
circetirsa 2 years ago
Thank you so much! It's definitely a lot slower and more film-like than a lot of stuff on YouTube so we appreciate it when our stuff is enjoyed. :)
StroutsInk 2 years ago
Hey, You guys did a great job and keep them coming....
magicalwriter 2 years ago
Your video was done very well can't wait to see the next one
loljulia94 2 years ago
Wow, the film was really great quality. Looked like a pro movie! And little Allie was absolutely adorable!! Keep up the good work, Allie. Also, the story was really nice. Congrats to whoever made this!!
ribicibi 2 years ago
We made it and thanks so much! Everything on our channel is made by us, the Strouts and our amazing team. :) Thank you so much for your kind words!
StroutsInk 2 years ago
That was a neat storyline. I leaves a lot of room for continuation. I though there was a little too much silence between Mark Fowler and Emily, but other than that, it was very well done.
The acting, as usual, was wonderful.
amppro5 2 years ago
Thanks so much for your kind words. :)
StroutsInk 2 years ago
It´s wonderful!
I love your videos and little storys!
Good evening for you, from me in good old Germany! :-)
Crissy61 2 years ago
OMG you guys! This was truly a high-quality little film. Allie is going to be something truly great someday. Congratulations on an awesome skit!
^__^
Kaizen63 2 years ago 2
Thanks a lot! We hope to continue working this way and win some contests! :D
StroutsInk 2 years ago
This is DEFINITELY contest material, and you guys will surely succeed. ^__^
Kaizen63 2 years ago
Great story, and I think the acting is fantastic, Mr. Fowler is perfect in his role as a kind and mildly amused "customer". I too am looking forward to seeing more. How brave this little girl is to have dressed up like that and start her business of selling laughs, to keep herself busy while adjusting to parental issues.
brokerdelete 2 years ago
Wow. Thanks so much!
StroutsInk 2 years ago
The acting is done well... realistic
Boowitch13 2 years ago
This wonderful! What a great stor! Looking forward to more!
jmessy007 2 years ago
This is just a wonderful piece of art. The story is so cool. It's kind of sad, but not go to the edge. It's funny but stay focus to what is important on the story. Really cool short film and the end is priceless. 5/5 ☆☆☆☆☆
Miguel9kb 2 years ago 2
nice xD music is funny ^^
LeetKrew090 2 years ago
I think that traditional films like this one are undervalued on YouTube. While YouTube is a great forum for every day life, it is also a powerful tool for up and coming filmmakers and artists. This particular Strout's Ink film is very poignant and it takes its time unfolding a three act story. That's something to be proud of since it is done in such a short amount of time with such little effort. This film was a lot of hard work. :)
FilmTheFantasy 2 years ago
Great video!!!
just two questions
1.) why would emily's mom have a wig like that?
and
2.) Emily doesn't feel safe to go to a park, but she's alright to go to random strangers alone?
GREAT VIDEO THOUGH!!! Very well made
kdog385 2 years ago
First of all, women have a lot of things in their drawers that men don't understand. And that could have been the costume that she wore last year or planned to give to Emily. Second, if you really dug into the story, you would know that Emily's want is to live with someone who will pay attention to her. Not going to the park was an excuse she made to express that she just wants attention. She's not really afraid to go. And kids aren't always honest.
StroutsInk 2 years ago
p.s.s
aplly for a partner
Gam3Kiid 2 years ago
First of all 5 stars
I really enjoyed this I want to see a follow up for sure...it reminds me of the film Rushmore for some reason........Excellent A+
Jesterstone 2 years ago
Very cute video,good job Spyrogal.
Love,
Mr.S!
smleechicago 2 years ago
I love it, especially the part where the clown runs down the street and the music plays.
beamsaber 2 years ago
amazing video i love it
the clown is so cute
maybenotnow745 2 years ago
Love it, very cute! :)
CodyMichaelPerry 2 years ago
AWESOME!!! Love it!
(PS: Emily Green lost the game)
spyrogal 2 years ago
Loved it! I have to watch it again!
bingobetty77 2 years ago
hey that was an amazing video i cant wait for more keep em up lol
only1ugotskooled 2 years ago
haha. she likes that guy.
boomerangqueen 2 years ago
This was good, keep it up you guy's
p.s 1st post
Gam3Kiid 2 years ago 2