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From: MasterFhyl
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  • I love this :D, whens the next one?

  • OMG Fhyl! Its GodSicker Here :D wish the guild have a record of us having a run or chilling :B

  • Nice, When can we expect episode 2?

    Not to rush you or anything, because i love the storyline

  • @aranboy5 it will be soon I promise.. (i havent actually started on episode 2 yet as im working on another vid called Fhaylure Fhour) Have you seen any of my other videos by chance?

  • Wait, if there's a girl called Claudine, shouldn't damue be called belle cause she's a hunter

  • @awesomepic12 Did you watch the movie? Damue is Belle's daughter, Thats in the first minute of the movie. And yes the Claudine here is the Claudine who later becomes the leader of the resistance, I really dont see what that has to do with anything.. Shes younger than Belle.. That's the impression I got anyways. (and I'm the one writing the story)

  • Run some tests, time to unload

  • Hey Fhyl? Is it possible for you to change the presentation of the speech? Like putting the quotes with the character hear at the a black, blank space on the bottom. That way, you can change the color to just white/ any light color and relax about your audience having trouble reading. (Unless im the only one giving you constructive critecizium.)

  • @kirodragon12 thats a legitimate concern.. and you arent the only one whos made it. As my series is dialogue heavy, it is important that the dialogue be readable ><. I'll make a test version of this video with white speech bubbles instead of black and if it looks more legible I'll put it up in addition (or instead of) this one. Also I can possibly make future inttallments this way as well.

  • @MasterFhyl Then may i try suggesting one more thing? Because you just said that your series will be dialogue heavy, try practicing different camera views every couple of seconds during the character's discussions to ensure that your audience wont get too tired or bored. I know that it's something new that you'll have to start if you actually want to do this as it involves more complex programs like Photoshop where you'd need to make adjustments to each character's camera view and body poses.

  • nice

  • Nice this is epic storyline bro!!!

  • Good song choices!

    I am interested to see where this goes.

  • yay it's out ^_^

  • Awesome! Absolutely brilliant dialogue.

  • Yes fhyl!

    now start working on part 2.

  • Omg i've been waiting this for a long time nice vid :D

  • nice job!

  • @123RandomMr Really? lol

  • @MasterFhyl  well it was sotra boring cuz it was mostly talking but it still good

  • @123RandomMr lol. its better if you pay attention to what the people are saying.. as it sets up the rest of the series >< but yeah i warned everyone part 2 was a lot of talking

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