your a really great artist!!!! 5/5. Are you avalible on itunes or do you at least have a record deal. You need to find the nearest recording studio and show them your music! you'd do great. KeEp It Up
hi tony. i kind of agree with you in that, that is my favorite phrase of this particular song. i felt that the opening sentence here almost sums up the whole song. thanks very much for taking the time to listen. i really appreciate it and always happy to hear from a fellow songwriter of your caliber. chuck.
hi scott. tell you a secret that you might already know. most of my ideas for songs usually come while driving a car for some reason. (you also???). many times i try to come up with the last sentence of a song, or of the chorus. once i have the last sentence, it seems like the other words more or less just flow in that direction. have you ever heard of "cluster" writing technique? i don't use it but i know a few who do. once i got idea from being stopped at three billboards. peace, cp
Hey, Chuck! No, I don't know any official writing techniques... driving in my car is something I can do pretty well... but the lyrics... they mostly continue to elude me. The ones I work the hardest at are the least satisfying in the end... I like 'em to just fall out of trees!
Don't you just wanna tan their hides sometimes though? Just kidding! The first verse contains a whole heap of living behind it. If I didn't know you were so humble I might call the words "words of wisdom" (which they are).
hi curtis. this song might conclude the total of 20 songs posted from the album titled "greetings from joetown, west virginia". still have maybe one or two from the previous album "don't push". after that probably start posting songs from the christmas novelty album "dead ninja christmas". i will miss hearing processed sound from the studio in future live postings. might need to invest in a mixing system similar to your own. your recent postings sound really good, chuck.
good morning beachstoun. so nice to hear from you both. hope you are doing fine. when i was in the air force i had a great nervous break down. after months of treatment with the base shrink, he told me that for the rest of my life, every morning and every time someone asks how are you, i am to reply "every day in every way, i get better and better". it's amazing what a little bit of positive attitude can do. enjoy the trip, chuck.
Hey my brothers Band is Called Act Natural! copy!
MelissaDirector 2 years ago
hi melissa, i hope his band is having a great time and i thank you for taking the time to listen. hope you and yours are all doing fine, chuck.
chuxtrux 2 years ago
As always great wording and excellent execution a true crafts man a work. Bless you chuck.
nidgetucker 2 years ago
thank you nidge, i appreciate your kind words and respect your opinion, chuck.
chuxtrux 2 years ago
I love the way you play, Chuck. This is a good song. Deep lyrics. I like it.
BloodOrchidMoon 2 years ago
thanks very much shane. i appreciate your opinion. be well, chuck.
chuxtrux 2 years ago
This really is good Chuck- that picking reminds me of The Allman Brothers- keep 'em comming
Amethysting 2 years ago
your a really great artist!!!! 5/5. Are you avalible on itunes or do you at least have a record deal. You need to find the nearest recording studio and show them your music! you'd do great. KeEp It Up
Guitargod41 2 years ago
hi craig. thanks a lot for the nice visit and comment. nothing makes me happier than for someone to like a few of my songs. be well, chuck.
chuxtrux 2 years ago
you are such a good writer. "Sharp leather whips dont make faster horses." love that line.
tonygrimsley 2 years ago
hi tony. i kind of agree with you in that, that is my favorite phrase of this particular song. i felt that the opening sentence here almost sums up the whole song. thanks very much for taking the time to listen. i really appreciate it and always happy to hear from a fellow songwriter of your caliber. chuck.
chuxtrux 2 years ago
You know, Chuck, your're a pretty good songwriter! This one is great too! Must be something in that West Virginia air...
cadwalladee 2 years ago
hi scott. tell you a secret that you might already know. most of my ideas for songs usually come while driving a car for some reason. (you also???). many times i try to come up with the last sentence of a song, or of the chorus. once i have the last sentence, it seems like the other words more or less just flow in that direction. have you ever heard of "cluster" writing technique? i don't use it but i know a few who do. once i got idea from being stopped at three billboards. peace, cp
chuxtrux 2 years ago
Hey, Chuck! No, I don't know any official writing techniques... driving in my car is something I can do pretty well... but the lyrics... they mostly continue to elude me. The ones I work the hardest at are the least satisfying in the end... I like 'em to just fall out of trees!
cadwalladee 2 years ago
The lyrics are fantastic Chuck. Nice arrangement too.
ljped 2 years ago
hi jack, nice to hear from you. hope you are well, chuck.
chuxtrux 2 years ago
Really good, the intro was amazing and the music complements the vocals perfectly. 5 stars!
mark624 2 years ago
hi mark, thanks, i really respect your opinion about such things. it's nice to be appreciated by a fellow of your skill. chuck.
chuxtrux 2 years ago
absolutely brilliant composition Chuck. a truly great song. killer lyrics.
5 ***** (not enoughh)
Paul
BradfordandLasso 2 years ago
wow, paul. thanks from the heart. it means a lot to me that you like this one, chuck.
chuxtrux 2 years ago
Very nice!!! 5 stars!
Lauramariesongs 2 years ago
hello lauramarie. thanks for taking the time to listen and for the nice visit. hope you are doing fine, chuck.
chuxtrux 2 years ago
very professional Chuck,good effort,you are ready to tour!...lil wobbly wade
melaniesuehine 2 years ago
hello melaniesuehine, thanks for taking the time to listen. i appreciate your nice visit, chuck.
chuxtrux 2 years ago
Don't you just wanna tan their hides sometimes though? Just kidding! The first verse contains a whole heap of living behind it. If I didn't know you were so humble I might call the words "words of wisdom" (which they are).
CurtisMateer 2 years ago
hi curtis. this song might conclude the total of 20 songs posted from the album titled "greetings from joetown, west virginia". still have maybe one or two from the previous album "don't push". after that probably start posting songs from the christmas novelty album "dead ninja christmas". i will miss hearing processed sound from the studio in future live postings. might need to invest in a mixing system similar to your own. your recent postings sound really good, chuck.
chuxtrux 2 years ago
I like the lyrics and the way you tell a story! Great job! :)
Beachstoun 2 years ago
good morning beachstoun. so nice to hear from you both. hope you are doing fine. when i was in the air force i had a great nervous break down. after months of treatment with the base shrink, he told me that for the rest of my life, every morning and every time someone asks how are you, i am to reply "every day in every way, i get better and better". it's amazing what a little bit of positive attitude can do. enjoy the trip, chuck.
chuxtrux 2 years ago
Thank you for sharing this positive attitude, it's important to act this way and bring it natural :) (Sorry for my english..) :)
Beachstoun 2 years ago