I like the bee poem but I'd like it more if the fact it's about human power mongers was not so apparent so soon.
DwiteTheSpriteKnight 5 months ago
Khalil I don't know if you'll see this message but I think that the American bees are being replaced with Australian bees. Perhaps you will find a way to work that into your bee/people analogy if you write another version.
I like the bee poem but I'd like it more if the fact it's about human power mongers was not so apparent so soon.
DwiteTheSpriteKnight 5 months ago
Khalil I don't know if you'll see this message but I think that the American bees are being replaced with Australian bees. Perhaps you will find a way to work that into your bee/people analogy if you write another version.
DwiteTheSpriteKnight 5 months ago