hollywood (jonas brothers love story) chapter 7 part 3

[iluvtwilight43v3r]

listen to this if you want to be a good writer:

first of all you should learn that spelling errors are bad reputation for a story

second you have to know that there can't always be the same settings in one story or have you ever read a book that goes into the same problem over and over again.

you also need to improve your writing by not repeating the same thing all over again like getting into a fight every time you have a chance to put one in.

you have to express more feelings.

[blondekitten1234]

ok, so whyy does there have to be so much fighthing? its confusing and gets annoying after a while becuase joe never does anything to prove to her that he doesnt like any of his ex's anymore besides kiss her which he does just cause any other time.

[princessasserc]

the tissue part.. i can tell joe is very sorry for that

[RyanandSeanROCK]

*sniffle*that was sooo *sniffle* sweeet!!!!*sniffle*

[ursottlyawesome123]

I just started reading these and out of all the opne i read this is the most interesting one keep it up !!!!:D

[OJDGirls4ever]

aww that was such a cute ending...cant wait for the next one! : )

[ShawtiiJWP]

that was so cute

[claupretty13]

love it!

[Madi4545]

luv it