Lufia: The Legend Returns Zalbak's Theme piano version

[vgWyvern]

I suppose I should award you points for effort...

Right from the beginning I noticed you have a key signature mistake. The piece is in A minor. But it IS an arrangement so different key signatures aren't a big deal.

Second, there are NO triplets at the beginning or in any other parts of the rhythmic sections. The only triplets in the piece appear in the melody later on which I see you used eighth notes instead which is... strange.

I did like from the end of bar 5 to bar 8 though.

[vgWyvern]

I'm not sure why you have a half note in the middle of bar 9... It gets a little hard to follow from bar 14 onward. I THINK I know how you probably wanted it to sound but the weird ties everywhere just make it sound strange.

And I used to use Finale Notepad and know how limiting it is. You should download the 30 day trial of Finale Printmusic. Not for "effects" but to maybe fix the ties and perhaps the triplets at the beginning.

[fonarte]

Maybe he wanted to do it in C minor for a reason? To give it a different sound?

[Vulfynn]

Yes, it is. A pitiy the game only appeared on GBC

[piano6888]

This is certain a great composition Rollervadel!

[Rollervadel33]

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