Hey Nice to hear your doing what i do, Sadly i gave up for a short time vocal lessons after 4 years and songwriting. Im back and have completed 14 songs in total 2 which you can hear on my channel. This isn't to steal people from here but just a thought on what you all think abou the singing technique and production, and lyrics. The Song Dont look back took 4 hrs to write from scratch to end. hope you all enjoy
Good job! But I think they are looking for a song about like winning or whatever. (ex. last year-Jordin Sparks with "This is my now") I wish I were allowed to send in an entry. =( I have to wait til im old enough. but I am a good songwriter! I wrote one for fun, even though I knew I couldnt submitt it, seeing as I just turned 13. =(
Don't worry about negative commetns, everyone has a chance and no one has the right to discourage anyone. Well, maybe Simon haha. I hazve an entry hre on youtube as well good luck
I actually now like my first version better. This one was even more "Disney" at first. I tried to de-Disney-fy it as much as I could, but it was tough. Check out the other version if you get the chance.
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Hey Nice to hear your doing what i do, Sadly i gave up for a short time vocal lessons after 4 years and songwriting. Im back and have completed 14 songs in total 2 which you can hear on my channel. This isn't to steal people from here but just a thought on what you all think abou the singing technique and production, and lyrics. The Song Dont look back took 4 hrs to write from scratch to end. hope you all enjoy
Liquadia 2 years ago
Enjoy your song writing talent. Cheers & Peace from Penang & Singapore.
Free555Peace 3 years ago
that was really bad no offence but you will murder someone when they hear that
micmikey 3 years ago
YES!!!!!!!!!!! I agree
TrueBadAss420 3 years ago
Good job! But I think they are looking for a song about like winning or whatever. (ex. last year-Jordin Sparks with "This is my now") I wish I were allowed to send in an entry. =( I have to wait til im old enough. but I am a good songwriter! I wrote one for fun, even though I knew I couldnt submitt it, seeing as I just turned 13. =(
Beatlemainiagurl 3 years ago
sounds like a folk song lol.
greenjadedragon 3 years ago
Yeah, hard not to with a guitar. Wish I had a piano. But I like my other version better.
jwipe 3 years ago
Keep raising for your dreams. Keep working up that latter k? U might even get discovered on Youtube... u never know
Paigey2214 3 years ago
Love (Archie) is Back!!!
csifreak191 3 years ago
oooh!!!! yay
iluvDaViDaRcHuLeTax3 3 years ago
Good luck with the contest. I will keep my fingers crossed for both of us. Please check out my entry when you get a chance.
JohnSMcCormick 3 years ago
Don't worry about negative commetns, everyone has a chance and no one has the right to discourage anyone. Well, maybe Simon haha. I hazve an entry hre on youtube as well good luck
tinkermusic 3 years ago
This sounds more like a musical/broadway song. Maybe for a Children's/Disney Movie?
Not really any specific music type which could make it hard to market.
AmandaKille 3 years ago
I actually now like my first version better. This one was even more "Disney" at first. I tried to de-Disney-fy it as much as I could, but it was tough. Check out the other version if you get the chance.
jwipe 3 years ago
sorry but it's kinda cheesy
VanillaVelvet 3 years ago
Isn't that the idea? I mean it's American Idol - the songs are always cheesy. I'll take that as a compliment.
jwipe 3 years ago
this might be alittle embarassing for david to sing. no offense :)
luckysteps 3 years ago
don't waste your $10 on submitting this one...jmo.
krighton77 3 years ago