Oh, this was my very first audition video so this is not going to be the most AWESOME audition you have ever seen. I'm going to Re-do her voice later, I just have to get through tons of HW. Feel free to leave honest critizism.
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IM NOT TRYING TO ADVERTISE BUT IM SCARED OF WHAT IT SEES in 1908 a lady named sally rusa was in the woods looking for a dog until a ghost came and killed her so if ur reading this u will find a bloody body in your closet hanging there haunting you and will kill you and ur family and if u want to stop this just sends this to 6 videos in 30 mins or this will happen good luck!!
Thank you. I have more knowlage of Audacity and WMM, so I can do more things than when I first started. Now I am really motivated to post the re-auditon. X3 Since I have more time now, That should be a sinch. Once again, thank you for your critique.
Pretty good! I would suggest yelling more for Angry Momoka because even if you were, it didn't sound like you were that much. Other than that, it's great.
You need to rehearse more so it sounds natural and you need to work on your tone. Nice Momoka needs to be softer and girlier, like almost ridiculously and sickeningly girly. Your angry Momoka doesn't actually sound angry, you need to be loud and aggressive and give her a growl. Study the original some more and work on your delivery and you might be able to do a pretty decent Momoka.
Also, you need to reduce the ambient noise and keep your lines from being cut off.
Thx for the Critique! I was really nervous when i recorded this, and I wasn't sure of the deadline for the Fandub. I will work on my acting and Update as soon as I can, but first, I am going to practice my voice till I get it right. I agree with you saying I wasn't really angry, because I'm not really good at being angry, but I'll work on it.
pretty good^^
casdan12 2 years ago
Look out for my upcoming video of the final decided cast.
PrivateTamamaHQ 2 years ago
o.o'' are u serious?
AnnaBaka623 2 years ago
Oh, this was my very first audition video so this is not going to be the most AWESOME audition you have ever seen. I'm going to Re-do her voice later, I just have to get through tons of HW. Feel free to leave honest critizism.
yuna53 2 years ago
this amuses me lol
konata4ever 2 years ago
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IM NOT TRYING TO ADVERTISE BUT IM SCARED OF WHAT IT SEES in 1908 a lady named sally rusa was in the woods looking for a dog until a ghost came and killed her so if ur reading this u will find a bloody body in your closet hanging there haunting you and will kill you and ur family and if u want to stop this just sends this to 6 videos in 30 mins or this will happen good luck!!
redmacncheeze 2 years ago
As I put in my video,anyone can audition, either as a VA or a script writer. Your Momoka is ok, however, try raising the volume for your audition.
Blimf 2 years ago
Thank you. I have more knowlage of Audacity and WMM, so I can do more things than when I first started. Now I am really motivated to post the re-auditon. X3 Since I have more time now, That should be a sinch. Once again, thank you for your critique.
yuna53 2 years ago
there should be more of a cussing accent while in angry momoka.
wilsonsocho 2 years ago
I could try that, but the rules of the fandub said that I couldn't be profane... but I will take note of this in the future.
yuna53 2 years ago
Not bad.
scarygirl58 2 years ago
Pretty good! I would suggest yelling more for Angry Momoka because even if you were, it didn't sound like you were that much. Other than that, it's great.
lugiapwnful 2 years ago
no offense but you don't play the angry part that well... nice try though...FIVE STAR FOR THE EFFORT!
sonic592 3 years ago
Thank you! I agree, the angry part was very hard for me, that's why I'm trying to work on it. XD I'm not really a cruel person.
yuna53 3 years ago
Te-he and I'm auditioning for Tamama's part (I'm making the most complete version now). Good luck, Momochi~
minipoppun 3 years ago 2
And good luck to you to,Tamachan. X3
yuna53 3 years ago
You need to rehearse more so it sounds natural and you need to work on your tone. Nice Momoka needs to be softer and girlier, like almost ridiculously and sickeningly girly. Your angry Momoka doesn't actually sound angry, you need to be loud and aggressive and give her a growl. Study the original some more and work on your delivery and you might be able to do a pretty decent Momoka.
Also, you need to reduce the ambient noise and keep your lines from being cut off.
RandomJayne 3 years ago
Thx for the Critique! I was really nervous when i recorded this, and I wasn't sure of the deadline for the Fandub. I will work on my acting and Update as soon as I can, but first, I am going to practice my voice till I get it right. I agree with you saying I wasn't really angry, because I'm not really good at being angry, but I'll work on it.
yuna53 3 years ago