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nice job!
crenshawone 2 years ago
dudeee i lovee this video! and you (=
125summerhill 3 years ago
If you're referring to the person in the video, that's not me. that's the actor. haha
luckyme429 3 years ago
noo not that guy.. the person who made this video (= i LOVE you.. haha
125summerhill 3 years ago
garbage.
xxzerojoker 3 years ago
youtube(dot)com/watch?v=hd-BinRJRnY
EVERY DRINK HAS CONSEQUENCES
capitalcomputer3 3 years ago
you have made a beratiful line up of visual images but where's the audio? It's kind apitty if you ask me your film could be much better...
but anyway keep posting videos on youtube like your style
adeadlyrapper 3 years ago
Thanks! Glad you like the video! Yeah, the video definitely needs sound, but sound is not really my department, and I don't have a decent ext. mic to work with. If I do include sound, it's going to sound really crappy. Tho I guess I could have used sound effects from a sound library...
Anyway, thank you so much for your compliment and your critique. Please check out my other short film that was finished about 1 month ago, Eternal Consolation.
You can find it on my channel.
luckyme429 3 years ago
Niceeee! the photography in your video its great! and the black and white makes it look so dramatic! :)! good job!
roxpox 3 years ago
Thank you so much for your comment! I really appreciate it!
luckyme429 3 years ago
Your shot angles and composition are really great... I like the high contrast black and white feel. You manage to tell a story with no dialog or sound, which is impressive. Good luck! Great Entry!
chraisia 3 years ago
Thank you! Photography is one of my major hobbies, so I always pay a great amount of attention to cinematography whenever I'm making film.
And I'm glad you understood the story! haha
luckyme429 3 years ago
Very interesting; nice cuts, simple story. My biggest piece of criticism is that it -NEEDS- music... even Silent Films had a piano-man accompanying them. Especially in this because the action is so subdued, you need mood music to go along with it or people will lose interest very quickly. Hope that helps! Cheers!
brianonice 3 years ago
Thanks! Yeah I definitely agree it needs some music (or sound atleast), but I don't have any musical talent, and sound isn't my field at all, so this was the best I could do within the time that I had to do this.
Thank you so much for your critique tho! I really appreciate it!
luckyme429 3 years ago