Beauty may well be god given in the eye of the beholder . Do we really lose that as we grow older . Why must I always act as if I have the whole world on my shoulders . Unneeded responsabiles . Too many people act as my enemies . War ends nothing it only adds up the fatalities . Now try telling me it was worth it . Nothing in this world is so why are you expecting me to be prefect
Is there ANY way that this is published in print somewhere? It's beautiful!
I've been competing with this poem on my high school speech team and it's always been received very well--I need a published print version to be able to bring it to this year's Nationals.
@xenophile2 "I work some times at a school for deaf kids. We put on poetry readings and poetry slams...we call them 'Deaf poetry Jams'. One poets poem goes, 'The night we met so many moons shine down on us so bright, I though hey maybe those moons have mistaken us for their gods.' Another poets poem goes ' I I I Me Me Me My My My Doesn't anyone tell a story anymore?' And another poets poem goes
@xenophile2 'last night I dreamed that I was little again and I could hear back then, but the silence in my house was deafening.' Some of the kids only write about being deaf others make a joke, some make a mention and other chose to bypass the subject all together. Much like the poets on this stage with gender or skin color so you get goofy haiku like 'homework is bullshit and inspires nothing out of me but vomit' and poems like
This is the greatest tribute ever to the ABILITY in people with a DISability. Aint the ADAPTability cool......these are high schoolers who don't pass notes they just sign shit behind your back. Notes can be confiscated sign language out of teacher's line of vision.........AMAZING!!!
last night I dreamt I was little again an I could hear back then but the silence in my house was defining........favorite part tho the whole thing is amazingggggg!
Amazing, you do not need speech, in order to have your own voice. He seperates the literal meaning and figurative meaning of "having your own voice". Brilliant.
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@KneesKnow lol i have a voice, it can make noises. i am not a mute... they have more actions then i may ever have. but i am the winner of the voice battle.
grab a mute kid, and me, give us each a microphone and see who can record a voice
Even with that amazing gift of voice of which you seem so bullishly proud, you seem like the kind who says far less worth hearing than those who say nothing you hear with ears.
What a shame.
What a waste.
I'd rather listen to their hands than see your voice... any day of the week.
Firstly it was a reference to him (briantheman890) "using his voice" in a text-based medium. Seeing his words/voice.
Secondly I was playing with words. He was wrote about making noise and sounds.
I said I'd rather listen to their hands than see his voice as a different way of wording it, but also to suggest the mute have more to say that's worth hearing than he does.
Also, you *see* a mute's voice when they sign.
Then there's lip-reading. But that's not what I meant. ;o)
Rives has said in interviews with him that he sometimes lies in his poems because one of the reasons he is up on the stage is to entertain the crowd, be it making them laugh or breaking their hearts with a sad poem, he may have been in contact with the deaf community, you dont know his life so you cannot judge and he doesnt steal poems, regardless of what you say :)
with my ears? all i said was FAIL! i mean he is alive his is moving so why would that guy ask if he is dead? i know he meant deaf but i mean come on man that's just a really stupid mistake!
As an aspiring English major I am totally in awe of Rives. He nailed the concept of voice and tone, in which case vocalizing is irrelevant more times than not. He is brilliant and I wish I could attend a deaf poetry session; their voice rings loud and clear. In no case does having a voice determine the ability to have one, which Rives has demonstrated perfectly. It was a pleasure to watch, listen, and view. Thank you.
Brilliant. Simply Brilliant, though there is very little that one could describe as simple in this jam. Truly inspiring, and I find myself with a renewed wonder for the english language.
I'm fluent in ASL, many of those signs are ASL signs, and it's fine if some signs aren't real because deaf people only communicate half with their hands. its 50% hands, 35% facial expression and 15% lip reading. :)
I don't know much (if anything about sign language) but I do know about performing and you also have to remember that Rives isn't just a poet... he is a performer. Maybe he's using the "older signs" because they are more visually stimulating to the untrained eye. Like I said I don't know but it would be a good reason from the performance side of things. Just my two cents :-)
one of the best ones out there, I have a verbal crush on this guy. He rocks the words and anything he does is such a wonderful turn-on to the mind, to the soul... with ideas like mockingbirds and kites and emoticons... oh, what can I say, Rives... I <3 U. ;)
divine!
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TheBannedPoet 2 weeks ago
I forgot how beautiful this poem was
talkindurinthemovie 3 weeks ago
nice video... i have a cousin who was born deaf/mute and he was really laughing while watching this video... thanks for making him smile... :)
iampeeay01 1 month ago
Love love love
63ar 1 month ago
I'm nearing tears... wow
lolbethanyxx 1 month ago
How could somebody NOT like this poem though?
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bravone1 3 months ago
im stalking this man...trying to find all his poems...he's awesomee!!
MusicISlove9224 3 months ago
Love everything this guy does. Check him out on TED. Only wish I could find more.
gimmedap 4 months ago 2
Deaf Poetry lol
shukakuladi 4 months ago
And I mean this in the most poetic sense, what a baller.
GarrettBroadnax 6 months ago 3
Favorite guy right here, that last poem gives me chills for real..
WestWoodVarsity 6 months ago
I love this poem, love it.
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sticky icky icky♥
LINKdrkguy 7 months ago
Deaf poetry jams.
BeerGogglesReviews 7 months ago
"The silence in my house was deafening." WOW!!
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This is my cousin. Forreal. Not making it up. He's awesome as a person and a poet. Thanks for loving him, you guys!
thoseonechicks13 7 months ago 2
Goosebumps.
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This poem is so inspirational. Rives really helped me become a slam poet, haha. If you like slam, you should check out my channel!
TheRealChrisAllen 9 months ago
Beauty may well be god given in the eye of the beholder . Do we really lose that as we grow older . Why must I always act as if I have the whole world on my shoulders . Unneeded responsabiles . Too many people act as my enemies . War ends nothing it only adds up the fatalities . Now try telling me it was worth it . Nothing in this world is so why are you expecting me to be prefect
whatwasithinking1 9 months ago
Wow!! Freak'n cool!!
3morenosfam 9 months ago
I kinda sorta love this.
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deafornot3 9 months ago
that last part is what really got me....powerful
Careelo 9 months ago
Is there ANY way that this is published in print somewhere? It's beautiful!
I've been competing with this poem on my high school speech team and it's always been received very well--I need a published print version to be able to bring it to this year's Nationals.
I absolutely love Rives!
wackyjackie1494 10 months ago
i literally tear at this. Deep poetry.
kupellupy 10 months ago
fucking powerful shit
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2:42 amazing
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I was born as deaf and as quiet as a starfish,
but if I had been born a man,
I would pray to the Lord above every night,
at the top of my fucking lungs just to thank him
for giving me voice.
Absolutely brilliant.
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THANK YOU GOD FOR GIVING ME VOICE .........
wdxk 1 year ago
36 people take their senses for granted, fuck you.
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yall that i must say wuz deep
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HE`S DOPE ! - TO THE DUDES THAT ARE CRITICISING , JUST APPRECIATE IT FOR THE IDEA... SO WHUT IF HIS SIGN ISN`T THAT GREAT
G0LDENL0VEMUSIC 1 year ago 2
Can you hear me now? NO!!! hha okay this was dope
ProphNasty 1 year ago
this is so good man
xxAnpublackops004xx 1 year ago
yes!
funnyxisxgoodx1 1 year ago
i just learned the sign for bull shit ...lol!
ummaryam86 1 year ago 11
@ummaryam86 haha omg yess that was the best i showed all my friends the sign
JustCassandra2010 1 year ago
His poetry almost always makes me want to cry. I love poets who are able to do that.
LucidDream 1 year ago 5
HOME WORK .. is bull shit
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RawEssence4u 1 year ago
i loved it through and through!!!
ahmaani3 1 year ago
this is pretty terrible ASL, but I love the poem
theraginazncajun 1 year ago
"last night i dreamt i was little again
i could hear back then
but the silence in my house
was deafening"
that has to be one of the most intriguing things ive ever heard
paper33 1 year ago 65
@paper33 This one gives me shivers.
automatichannah 10 months ago
such conviction on his passion makes me respect him
ishnookie 1 year ago
Do a YT search for "Sia On Letterman". Sia Furler sings along with one of her most moving songs; the performance is astounding.
KaptKan1 1 year ago
I am Deaf and I would like to know what he is saying because it is not very clear (he only signs a few of the words). Can you do a transcript? :)
xenophile2 1 year ago
@xenophile2 "I work some times at a school for deaf kids. We put on poetry readings and poetry slams...we call them 'Deaf poetry Jams'. One poets poem goes, 'The night we met so many moons shine down on us so bright, I though hey maybe those moons have mistaken us for their gods.' Another poets poem goes ' I I I Me Me Me My My My Doesn't anyone tell a story anymore?' And another poets poem goes
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@xenophile2 'last night I dreamed that I was little again and I could hear back then, but the silence in my house was deafening.' Some of the kids only write about being deaf others make a joke, some make a mention and other chose to bypass the subject all together. Much like the poets on this stage with gender or skin color so you get goofy haiku like 'homework is bullshit and inspires nothing out of me but vomit' and poems like
brandonbeard2000 1 year ago 2
@xenophile2 I sent the rest to your inbox
brandonbeard2000 1 year ago
@xenophile2 so his signging is correct? I'm learning ASL so I'm unsure... lol
juno0890 1 year ago
@juno0890 no!
eg3000gt 1 year ago
@juno0890 No, not really. The few of the words he signs are barely intelligible--to me anyway.
xenophile2 1 year ago
@juno0890 not really. he is not very good doing it. i am hard of hearing and know.
flippinup 1 year ago
OH MY GOSH..
RESPECT<33333
iLoveCrissAngel01 1 year ago 2
beautiful and funny. Brilliant.
leobermi 1 year ago
wow
love4noreason 1 year ago
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Moonmanwalker 1 year ago
Dude that was fucking deep
ps365gamer 1 year ago
I'm not deaf nor do I know anyone who is, but this is one of the best and most touching poems I've heard
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shawnswifey2010 1 year ago
This is the greatest tribute ever to the ABILITY in people with a DISability. Aint the ADAPTability cool......these are high schoolers who don't pass notes they just sign shit behind your back. Notes can be confiscated sign language out of teacher's line of vision.........AMAZING!!!
gramps2matt 1 year ago 3
Tight
OBZRV82 1 year ago
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he suck
bravone1 1 year ago
@bravone1...u suck
hellome2be 1 year ago
Lol @bullshit sign
stackadolla23 1 year ago 3
last night I dreamt I was little again an I could hear back then but the silence in my house was defining........favorite part tho the whole thing is amazingggggg!
cookiemonster0088 1 year ago 3
I <3 this
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Lydiaabbey 1 year ago
I don't know how many times I've watched this and it still makes my eyes water.
LucidDream 1 year ago
The last line got me. in a good way.
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LuckyStarr22 1 year ago
is he a coda?
sonofranfan 1 year ago
That was amazing. This guy is the best poet I have seen on Def Jam.
IronbreakerFTW 1 year ago
AWESOME!!!!!
WyKeDnCaLi 1 year ago
Wow, this is amazing!
laser8389 1 year ago
DEAF ROCKS!!!!!
takbuster14all 1 year ago
Amazing, you do not need speech, in order to have your own voice. He seperates the literal meaning and figurative meaning of "having your own voice". Brilliant.
waterwulf 2 years ago 3
That's it. I need to get this series on DVD or something. These poets are fucking brilliant~
Vixtopher 2 years ago 5
Nice I learned alot of new signs... good shit
DJonelove 2 years ago 2
what is the name of the beat at the start of this video?
neotri45 2 years ago
THAT WAS FREAKIN AMAZING!
CCBaby 2 years ago 5
hollyyyyyy shhhiiiii!!! woooww . speechless
malampetang 2 years ago 7
WOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!! l that was deep
hijaabiforlife 2 years ago 2
you can speak sign LANGUAGE . . its a LANGUAGE and languages are SPOKEN . . . just through your hands. anywho. this poem is amazing : )
alysiera619 2 years ago 5
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speak - "To utter words or articulate sounds with ordinary speech modulation; talk"
sounds... sign language = no sound.. therefor you dont speak it
briantheman890 2 years ago
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Youre a real asshole. Those kids have a greater voice than you ever will.
KneesKnow 2 years ago
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@KneesKnow lol i have a voice, it can make noises. i am not a mute... they have more actions then i may ever have. but i am the winner of the voice battle.
grab a mute kid, and me, give us each a microphone and see who can record a voice
briantheman890 2 years ago
Even with that amazing gift of voice of which you seem so bullishly proud, you seem like the kind who says far less worth hearing than those who say nothing you hear with ears.
What a shame.
What a waste.
I'd rather listen to their hands than see your voice... any day of the week.
thirteenfingers 2 years ago
@thirteenfingers how do you see a voice?
popsizcrazy 1 year ago
A couple of ways...
Firstly it was a reference to him (briantheman890) "using his voice" in a text-based medium. Seeing his words/voice.
Secondly I was playing with words. He was wrote about making noise and sounds.
I said I'd rather listen to their hands than see his voice as a different way of wording it, but also to suggest the mute have more to say that's worth hearing than he does.
Also, you *see* a mute's voice when they sign.
Then there's lip-reading. But that's not what I meant. ;o)
thirteenfingers 1 year ago
@thirteenfingers o ok just wondering
popsizcrazy 1 year ago
I figured as much. :D
(Just after I posted that last comment I heard the bit from 2:25 about hearing hands - that'll be what got me started messing about with the words.)
Brilliant poem though, isn't it? :)
thirteenfingers 1 year ago
Okay I
just wanna respond to what KIDWON92 said you must the obivously aren't the smartest person YOU DONT SPEAK SIGN LANGUAGE moron
Ladymav06 2 years ago
booooo
who cares we dont hav to get technical, its just a comment
itasmefunnymonkey 2 years ago
Have some damn respect!
KneesKnow 2 years ago
Rives always gives me goosebumps.. I love his poetry :)
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This guy is really lame.
mickeyb1000 2 years ago
This was good. Have to follow the content.
Godsend77 2 years ago
The last line, blew my fucking mind.
DamnedHoax 2 years ago 7
I can't stop replaying this over and over.
Zfranchise 2 years ago 2
MAN ID LOVE TO GO TO ONE OF HIS SHOWS!
Jelloxox 2 years ago 8
This is so great. What a wonderful person.
LucidDream 2 years ago 5
<3 there can not be any words tht can describe a poem such as this... jus think abt his content...
I LOVE THIS!!!
ramsamsam510 2 years ago 5
mad respect
love it
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Rives can go suck a nut...
he isnt a teacher or never even associated with the deaf community
he takes real poems from poets who take poems from inside and onto paper
he made his poem for simple entertainment ...
entertainment for the society of bored humanity...
Seth walker- is a real poet...
RandomlyThoughtOut 2 years ago
Rives has said in interviews with him that he sometimes lies in his poems because one of the reasons he is up on the stage is to entertain the crowd, be it making them laugh or breaking their hearts with a sad poem, he may have been in contact with the deaf community, you dont know his life so you cannot judge and he doesnt steal poems, regardless of what you say :)
n00bmeister065 2 years ago 51
so i take it you dont read fiction, go to the movies, or watch plays.
admacs 2 years ago
My Parents Are Deaf
So This Poetry Is Really Deep
Too Me
erick192 2 years ago 80
dont be retarted this is mint... V v V
KDAWGx7777777 2 years ago
Im a bit confused was that his voice or someone elses?
Mybigmember 2 years ago
Audio seems slight out of sink.
Defiantly him talking, he's just signing things at the same time.
He works/worked with deaf kid, but isn't himself.
Apart from that he is amazing!
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how the fuck can he be deaf if he is talking and hearing everyone .. -.-
Halfpint141 2 years ago
well he can talk because he's not MUTE.
and he never said he was deaf, he works with deaf kids.
everidaygirl 2 years ago 9
lmao
he wasnt deaf he was jus speaking sign language
kidwon92 2 years ago 5
don be an idiot
whirly1300 2 years ago 9
ahahahah this person has to be kidding me...
mnkato12 2 years ago
rives rules
Coburn32 2 years ago 4
i loved it, i kinda teared up lol
e198811 2 years ago 9
me too, it is an Amazing Poem
Shahiida 2 years ago
I've said it once, and I'll say it again. BEST POEM EVER
PharcydePhreak 2 years ago 7
he does visit a class of deaf students and do poetry
TitanAC081 2 years ago
I was a bit angry when I heard he doesn't actually work at a school for deaf kids. Good poem though.
Jahishno 2 years ago
Well this was posted like 3 years ago. He might have been working for one when he wrote the poem. -shrug-
irregularbox 2 years ago
wow
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was this post 2 b funny?cuz i didn laugh 4 shit.
certifiedplaya05 2 years ago
"We call em deaf poetry jams " ...beast
bamawuatng 2 years ago 2
very inspiring...
Afrodizzyaco 2 years ago
that was amazing
badash13 2 years ago
One of my favorites ever. Rives is pretty incredible. What dialect of Sign is he speaking?
Littabet 3 years ago 3
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So is he death?
napps1025 3 years ago
It's called deaf, not death, but no, I don't think he is. He speaks too well. I could be mistaken, but...
Kyrabooo 3 years ago 5
no he is not
Meggalif 3 years ago
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yeah, i heard he was...
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FAIL
eg3000gt 2 years ago
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dude whats wrong with YOUR ears
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with my ears? all i said was FAIL! i mean he is alive his is moving so why would that guy ask if he is dead? i know he meant deaf but i mean come on man that's just a really stupid mistake!
eg3000gt 2 years ago
makes me cry, and smile, and wonder....outstanding! I could watch this a million times
youronlyalibi 3 years ago 8
I am enthralled. Completely. Amazing.
sivossi 3 years ago 5
This is beautiful.
nobodylikeshair 3 years ago 5
love this guys delivery in every poem he does, thats what makes this poet so damn good
Ic3man995 3 years ago 3
"they just sign it behind your back" lol this is awesome.
fallingfaster010 3 years ago 4
rives ans shihan are my favourite poets.
teelityshia 3 years ago 4
boss
safire718 3 years ago
As an aspiring English major I am totally in awe of Rives. He nailed the concept of voice and tone, in which case vocalizing is irrelevant more times than not. He is brilliant and I wish I could attend a deaf poetry session; their voice rings loud and clear. In no case does having a voice determine the ability to have one, which Rives has demonstrated perfectly. It was a pleasure to watch, listen, and view. Thank you.
heartb34tx 3 years ago 6
Funny, sad, flowing, inspiring, poetic, artistic, meaningful...
Carnivorus666 3 years ago
does anybody know if he has a website?
coocookachoo22 3 years ago
shopliftwindchimes com
boomdeay8 3 years ago
Raw shit. Loved it
Aadonis219 3 years ago
Brilliance.
aball951 3 years ago 2
wow..
S4NT1IE 3 years ago
Brilliant. Simply Brilliant, though there is very little that one could describe as simple in this jam. Truly inspiring, and I find myself with a renewed wonder for the english language.
TruBeliever88 3 years ago
dang i miss sign language class :(
Kaishetha 3 years ago
The greatest fucking poem that I ever heard
nijgnohmik 3 years ago 5
I'm fluent in ASL, many of those signs are ASL signs, and it's fine if some signs aren't real because deaf people only communicate half with their hands. its 50% hands, 35% facial expression and 15% lip reading. :)
deetardeded 3 years ago
This man is a wonder.
ghostwritten87 3 years ago
perfection.
nessamaine 3 years ago
I don't know much (if anything about sign language) but I do know about performing and you also have to remember that Rives isn't just a poet... he is a performer. Maybe he's using the "older signs" because they are more visually stimulating to the untrained eye. Like I said I don't know but it would be a good reason from the performance side of things. Just my two cents :-)
<3 Rives!!!
tbebe4 3 years ago 2
"Not too different from the choices poets make here.." True!
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Nournisms 3 years ago
by talking like a condescending douchebag it doesnt make you sound any more insulting
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You, good sir, are a buffoon! I admonish your childish scrawl in the name of decency! Eat a dick, you slack loined gutter whore!
Nournisms 3 years ago
he likes his sticky icky!lol!
msb2infinity 3 years ago 2
ok, this was great...you have to realize, its a spoken word poem! Its about singlanguage being heard...so listen.
annakannie 3 years ago 2
one of the best ones out there, I have a verbal crush on this guy. He rocks the words and anything he does is such a wonderful turn-on to the mind, to the soul... with ideas like mockingbirds and kites and emoticons... oh, what can I say, Rives... I <3 U. ;)
malkalevadom 3 years ago
inspiring to a non-deaf poet.
morbidox 3 years ago
Wow. That was a really good piece, Rives is typically always good but...that was just kickass!
LostSoundWaves 3 years ago 3