ToK Presentation - The Responsibilities Of The Rich

[randomchic12345]

this is a really good presentation. just not for TOK.

[KevinSlasHr]

Which software did u use

[ShutUpNtellMe]

This is really interesting. You did mention some issues and different perspectives, BUT not knowledge issues or ways of knowing or any perspectives as knowers.

So for all of us who do not have easy-going teachers, this will be less than a 10/20...

[alexwanexxx]

no bad you're a real man.

[lawker777]

i wish there were more videos like this.

[neeshza]

though, this would be a great econ presentation

[neeshza]

our Tok teacher used this as an example of a not a good presentation.

Though the aesthetic aspect was great, you took too long on the real life situation and didnt relate it to something that actually happened to you. What exactly is the knowledge issue? didnt talk about ways of knowing OR areas of knowledge; next time spend under a minute talking about your RLS and how it relates to you, then back out and focus more on the knowledge issues+claims&counter-claims.u­se that to relate to other RLS

[Newbiespud]

@neeshza Aww... Yeah, looking back about two years, I'm well aware that this isn't a good ToK presentation. On the other hand, it held 500% more attention than every other presentation that was made in that class that year. In THIS case, I'll take engagement over adherence to methodology.

[litheshadow]

@Newbiespud yes but did you get a good grade?

[theOman333]

@Newbiespud Thank you! People are so criteria obssesed- that they dont bother about making their presentations interesting!

[missbrokensmile]

Interesting and well presented, but I think you strayed from TOK, and moved towards describing the situation, rather than analysing the knowledge issues.

[wilder911]

cant be too bad, my tok teacher used this as an example in class :)

[11raynerb]

what was the knowledge issue???

[ladelparquemanda]

arround 13 points?

[distroyaar]

Very interesting and enganging, but don't think you got enough actual TOK points in there :/ , like no AOKs or WOKs clearly presented...

[GiftoChaos]

God instead of discussing anything in my ToK class I am stuck watching crap like universal soldier, or reading ishmael, telepathic gorilla need I say more.

[Ralorious]

Pretty Good - The Art style was a very nice touch.

I really hope you did well on this presentation.

[CorbeauBlanc]

Very nice presentation.

How many points did you get?

(I worry that it was not TOKish enough)

[Newbiespud]

I honestly don't know exactly how much. I DID get a standing ovation immediately afterwards, especially compared to the other presentation we had to witness...

[CorbeauBlanc]

It seems you don't realise that rich people do not have a lot of cash!

If some claims that B. Gates has 50 billion bucks it does not mean that he literally HAS them. They are all invested and flow on the market with a more or less equal distribution in the society. (Thus, out of their own 'greediness', they help people). Only a small amount is kept as cash and is used for 'personal wealth'.

Don't worry, this is a very common mistake in reasoning.

[Newbiespud]

Yeah, that thought's crossed my mind since then. But this was mostly a layman's version of Carnegie's Gospel of Wealth anyway.

[Sport921]

Good points. I like the art style too. You always seem to explain points I want to, but I never have the words for. Awesome job.